Plunder the Heavens: Start by Killing Sauron

The first few chapters of the book are about a successful hunt after the protagonist grows up, which is probably the style. The fifth chapter starts from the beginning and tells the process of the protagonist becoming stronger. I would like to advise all book friends, if you want to be invincible from the beginning, or don't like the process of becoming stronger, you can read another book. After all, everyone has different tastes, and there are a lot of books to start with. The protagonist likes to fight alone and is a bit stubborn, but he does not lack the courage to risk his life and fight. People who like Zoro, Wang Luffy, Hawkeye, Red Hair, Marco, Kaido, Blue Chicken and other characters should also pay attention. These are my intended hunting targets. If you can't stand it, don't fall into the trap, so as not to scold me. In addition, the One Piece world here is only a low-level world. There is nothing you can do if you only look at One Piece. After writing about 700,000-800,000 words, it will be gone and replaced with other high-level worlds. This is not a fan, this is not a fan, this is not a fan. This is not the invincible flow This is not the invincible flow This is not the invincible flow

The contrast is too great. I started hunting Sauron at the beginning and then started from scratch again. Many people will skip the chapter. Originally, the first cool point was to hunt Sauron, and then you could catch people by holding on, but... You actually started writing from scratch.

I feel that the author has lowered the power of the One Piece world. Like the world of martial arts, the highest level three is impossible. The highest combat power of martial arts is Shattered Void, but the world is small and still afraid of the army. No grand master has ever fought against the army. It is all harassment. Let's talk about the world of pirates. The highest combat power is that the army is like a grasshopper. It sinks the island with one punch, cuts directly from the east of the city to the west of the city with a knife, and there are various rules-based fruits that cannot be solved.

You have the ability and ruthlessness to kill Zoro. How could you not survive in society? You can't even succeed in a peaceful society. In the precarious world of pirates, how could you kill Zoro?

The first 4 chapters and the following ones are endless, and they are not memories or flashbacks. Even for the sake of drainage, write the plot to the first four chapters as soon as possible, or simply put a few chapters at the end of the chapter to pick up, so that you can skip reading.

Is it fun to write here all the time for big eaters? What kind of items are produced according to the demand? Is it impossible to get compressed food? The highly nutritious meat of Neptune is compressed into a pill form. Is it impossible? You've been cooking all day, right? Does your cheek hurt? How many hours does it take to make a meal? Also, why can't you eat the devil fruits in the pirate world? Can't you bring swords from other worlds with you? Your world has begun to be connected. You do this for me, but you still have to convert it? Can you be more generous when writing a book? And your quick sword, killing, sword intent, all of them, who is stronger and who is weaker? The will is one's own, there is no strength or weakness, only people are weak, their starting points are different, they are all used to become stronger and reach the final point, then I can surpass time when I reach the extreme To cultivate powerful women, it is best to choose the ancient ones. The ideas of that era will be with you for a lifetime, and they will be very loyal to death. You choose a modern person to train, and a bad one will deny all the good things you have done to him. Everyone wants to be the master.

Before it was put on the shelves, the real-life woman I wrote about was very confusing. If you want to join her as the protagonist, write her entry point better and make her character more likable. If she is a supporting character who ruins the plot, don't write a lot of verbose paragraphs like a dog-licking paragraph. It's disgusting.

It made a big mistake at the beginning, weakening the world. Even if the world is written seriously, it will not collapse, but it just weakens it, which is boring. This is no different from suppressing combat power. People who watch it feel aggrieved and uncomfortable.

Open it and read Chapter 5 Farewell. I am no longer interested in the sacred book.

To be honest, it's careless. It's still watchable, but back in the real world, the male protagonist doesn't have a normal attitude toward women. He obviously handles things well in another world, but the real world handles things between men and women too boringly. Also, there are too many sword-wielding novels these days. No matter what the thing is, it has the name of Sword of Eternal Life. It makes me feel dull. Maybe I have read too many sword-wielding novels, which makes me tired and disgusted. The chances of spending money to subscribe are generally low, unless Meng Xinjiat likes people who use swords, or the male protagonist doesn't get tired of using swords. Come on, I wish the author a great sale.

The writing so far is okay and not cliché. Looking forward to the development of the story later!

Can the author please stop treating the ancients as fools and passing on men rather than women because the physical structures of men and women are inherently different, and there are also reasons why the exercises cannot exert their original power? Don't think that the ancients were pedantic all day long 😐

Just give it a name and attract fans, and then sell it as dog meat.

It's so good. Chapter 5 is the "first chapter". You know how to start it.

This book is good enough, but the description of reality is too overwhelming for my personal resistance. I feel that the author is still inexperienced. The names and emotional descriptions such as the lady at the counter, the handsome brother with the online name Li Family, etc. Time and time again made me lose the immersion in reading the novel. After leaving, I was left with a dull and no sense of immersion, which amplified too many problems.

Not bad, but the title of the book is too classic

It was originally attracted by the group of killed protagonists, and they went around in such a big circle for a long time. I just killed one Sauron and had hundreds of memories. To be honest, it was a huge failure

Being drunk, poisoning every day is very harmful to people.

How many chapters does it take for the protagonist to have the strength to kill Sauron at the beginning? The way you write it makes me want to skip a chapter.

This flashback is too fragmented and has no continuity at all. After reading the first four chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

There's not much to say. At least it's not a studio article. At least I want to write something of my own. I guess it's also a writing practice. Just try it. I look forward to your great success. We'll meet again at the top when your work becomes popular.

The details and settings are too inconsistent. Some background settings are not explained clearly. I always say that I will tell you later, but what's the use!

I saw Chapter 7 of Volume 2 Is anyone else reading it? I write down all the skills every time. It's too clumsy Fighting relies on sword and sword intention from beginning to end, but I keep writing about Eagle Claw and Sky Eagle Worker. Is there any condensed and merged skills in the back? I haven't read it. It's too elementary school student's way of writing.

Is anyone still reading this book? Are the subsequent skills still written out in full each time Using Sword Intent, are you still writing about the Sky Eagle Skill, etc.?

This kind of novel about killing people and becoming stronger can be written in an anime and other world as long as it is not particularly bloody, but if it is written in the current world, it will be very easy to be removed from the shelves.

I saw this book two days ago, because the title never came in. I read it today and read it in one sitting. I found it to be quite good. It's this title. . . . . Taste it yourself

It is recommended not to write about the present world, because the last novel I read that was similar to this one was reported and removed from the shelves because of this.

The pirates are here, why don't you go see the Empress Hancock?

Although the name is easy to dismiss, the writing is good and interesting. The author may be a newcomer, but the work is still passable.

There are so many worlds written together, it's too confusing