I'm in Hokage, Kaguya Is My Sister

First of all, there were some things I didn't think well enough about when I first wrote a book. The protagonist is an ordinary person who has gained strength. He likes a stable life and hopes to make up for some of his original regrets. Just like most people today, he follows his heart. The protagonist is not a senior Naruto fan, so he only knows the general direction of the story. The protagonist will make up for his regrets while leaving behind regrets. In addition, everyone sees the character differently. For example, Orochimaru, I think he is a guy who puts interests first and longs for immortality. So it's normal that the characters I write will be different from what you think. The main character is somewhat neurotic due to my influence. I want to write a happy story, so I will be a little naive.

An interesting framework, but the protagonist's various taken-for-granted behavior patterns are very discouraging. Times have changed, and it's hard to accept a hot-blooded protagonist who only knows how to escape with his words... And the protagonist doesn't understand his camp either. Since it is Kaguya's camp, the Akatsuki organization is not considered a friendly but also a neutral party. Obito should be considered the protagonist's tool, but the protagonist directly sells Obito. What is the operation? The most vicious thing is that the protagonist went to Miaomu Mountain? As Kaguya's brother, shouldn't the biggest enemies and villains of Ichimoku be the Sage of Six Paths and Mount Myoboku? Gamamaru plots against the Six Paths brothers, and is naturally the enemy of the protagonist, but he sends Jiraiya to ask him to enter the mountain? The same goes for the protagonist's apprenticeship with Hua Gulin. The whole thing is inexplicable. Could it be that the author just wants to return the protagonist's harem and is desperate? Then there is the protagonist's mentality when interacting with others. I don't know if the author did it intentionally. The protagonist is treated with the psychology of the character in the later period in this early period, which is completely ungrounded. Let's talk about Kakashi first. According to the original setting, before Kakashi became Naruto's teacher, he was a person who blamed himself all day long for not being able to protect his teammates and was deceived by the third generation. The protagonist runs to Kakashi and self-destructs every day, and asks him to keep it a secret from the third generation. I just ask why? And Orochimaru, to describe Orochimaru's psychological changes in three sentences is to study how the wind turns the windmill, trying to transform into the wind to make the windmill turn, and in the later period, silently watching how the wind rises to make the windmill turn quickly. At this stage, Orochimaru has just left Konoha, and he has not completely let go of his obsession. Plus, he has mastered the Fuzo Reincarnation and feels that he is capable again. He also wants to show off to the third generation that he is giving him a ride. Isn't it in vain that the protagonist sends White Zetsu to win over Orochimaru at this time? And asking others is worse than asking yourself, why doesn't the protagonist study with Black Zetsu? I hope the author's story outline can consider more rationality, and the protagonist will not always do inexplicable things like praising Liantian.

Well, let me tell you my opinion. In fact, the relationship between the protagonist and Naruto does not need to be so good. The Nine-Tails is the food of the Ten-Tails. The only difference between the protagonist and Kaguya's ability is experience and understanding of the art.

In the later stages of Naruto's life, the setting was changed. At the beginning, there was only one clan, and only one of the heirs of the same generation could become a clan. However, in the later period, neither Hanabi nor Hinata was a caged bird, and other clan ninjas even appeared. I don't like such a dark setting either. I like a brighter story, so I don't write much about the darkness of Konoha.

Isn't Hinata divided into main families and branch families based on blood differences? Another second set?

I couldn't hold myself tight from the beginning. Let's look at the purity of the sect.

Representative works of Ershi Qiangjian's original work

The setting of the Hyuga clan branching family is not very clear. My personal preference is that every Hyuga small family, except the eldest child, will be a branch family, and the children of the branch family will still be a branch family. Then the clan family will have as many clan members as there are in the beginning, and everyone else will become a branch family.

Calling it boiled water is a bit too much. At least it is mineral water, with no ups and downs. The pig's trotters have no personality traits. There is no explanation on how to become Kaguya's brother, which is inexplicable.

Like writing an outline,

In fact, being a dog is not bad, there are still bitter things to chew on. Well, I'm very satisfied...

The separation of the Zong family and the second episode are funny enough

Is Kaguya the only female protagonist? Does she know orthopedics?🤓

Ah? This is the second time I read this book. After reading the first chapter, I remembered why I crossed it out and changed the settings randomly.

No, the author has never studied Chinese and doesn't know how to use punctuation marks. There should be a period at the end of a sentence, and there should be no comma after the double quotation mark.

I haven't watched it yet but based on the synopsis, does Otsutsuki really like the Tenseigan? So far, Otsutsuki has not been reincarnated.

How should I put it? I have been a dog for so long that I can't remember that I am a human being.

Now it's even more toxic. The main character is just a clone.

Book it all, book it all! ~(＾◇^)/

Regarding the plot of Chapter 14 when I sneaked into Kumogakure and encountered the rampage of the Eight-Tails, I didn't think about it in the early stage. At the time, I thought it was a bug in the anime, because Orochimaru defected after the death of the fourth generation, and I thought he would go to Kumogakure to cause trouble after his defection.

Relevant settings have been added to make up for some issues that everyone is struggling with. The Eight-Tails incident is my problem and has little impact.