The Ten Shadow Sorcerers of the Nara Family

It's not that you don't write about Naruto without studying the characters, language, habits, personality, etc. Except for the twelve strong Naruto, what else did you write about them?

This plot is so familiar Kaguya breaks through the seal and becomes the strongest! ! ! Hei Jue: Mother, will you win? Kaguya: I will win, I am the strongest. (Victory speech after waking up) ... Kaguya Otsutsuki was cut in half...

Sorry, I didn't realize the author was actually a woman. No wonder there are so many inexplicably emotional plots.

There is a lot of discussion about heaven and the curse. The setting in the book is that Moxuluo has understood the rules of chakra, and has broken away from the essence of pure magic. Trading with Moxuluo is actually using it as a transit point to exchange materials between worlds, so that the harmony of heaven and curse can be formed, which is no different from the natural one. This is the basic setting of this book, I hope readers can accept it. I feel like there's nothing I can do about it because it's really poisonous. Without this, the planned plot won't go on. I hope everyone will be more understanding and tolerant.

Author, if you want to write the old routine of one side being weak and then the protagonist stepping forward, are you crazy? It's because Konoha didn't blow up Iwagakure Village because of his development

The setting feels interesting, but once I opened the comment area, my desire to read the book was reduced by half.

It's clearly written as a Naruto fanfic, but it smells like a bad domestic novel.

What happened to Yutai in those chapters? We became friends the first time we met. At night, the protagonist, as a time traveler, fought tooth and nail for a crybaby kid who was reincarnated from the dirty land and burned several years of his life. The next day, Pancun tried to save the little kid again, just to get the little kid to return to his territory. By the way, the protagonist is a time traveler! Is that kid Venus, the goddess of love? The first time I met the protagonist, I was stunned. Falling in love with a crybaby.

Helping a dead man find trouble with Orochimaru... And casually mentioning the special characteristics of Naruto's cells. Too brainless

Several times, I came close to killing the enemy, but at the last moment he was run away. Yakushi Kabuto is like this, Kimimaro is like this too, aren't you trying to be disgusting?

OOC is extremely serious. Did the author really take a good look at the spell response?

I didn't expect people to be so dissatisfied with Yuta's chapter. In fact, the chapter about Yota focuses not on Yota, but on Shikokuro's tolerance for Shikamaru and the Nara family's feelings. I didn't express it well, so I will reflect on it seriously. Now the chapter with Tai has been slightly modified, you may wish to take a look again. If you have any opinions, you can put them in this building. You mention it, I'll change it. It's not difficult as long as you don't deviate from the outline. Everyone is welcome to discuss.

Such a good setting allows you to write like history

Let me put it bluntly, this book is history, even if it is not as good as history, it is better than Xiaobaiwen. The rest is history, the plot is history, the writing style is history, the handling of character relationships is history, and the character creation is history. It is all supported by the setting. In summary, it is history

The end of Chapter 4 slipped away! To catch a spy, the teachers in the class said that if he stayed in the classroom and went out privately, he might drop out of school. Uzumaki Naruto ran out and the protagonist openly said that he was going to chase Naruto? Just to forcefully write a plot about fighting a spy? And then get further into the eyes of senior officials? Don't the Nara family who raised you and the uncles and aunts who adopted you consider the impact of this kind of thing? Really cool👍 slipped away

In short, don't use your brain when reading this book. I really can't stand the chapter about rescuing Yutai. If my three views are inconsistent, it's outrageous. I slipped away. I need to wash my mind.

The few highlights of the second pillar

The author has good ideas and writes well💩

The subject matter is very good... The writing style is average... The content is unsatisfactory, just like pornography 😥 Keep up the good work!

The magician who opens a book out of interest has only the limiter of the body. It's best to be from Ming Ming's class or An Diva's class🙂🙂