Quick Transmigration: Determined to Be an Old Immortal Who Won’t Die

In fact, as a superior, there is no need to explain. As long as she persists, she will definitely outlive her daughter and granddaughter. The protagonist has never corrected her mentality, is long-winded and worries too much. Moisturizing things means nothing. As a person in power in business, she only wants others to please her and goes with the flow. She is too eager.

The author can write about the life of a working woman, which does not necessarily have to be related to family ties, the case that the policewoman is thinking about before she dies, the unfinished task of the heroine of Infinite Flow, and the Republic of China should not use the old routine of writing about feudal arranged marriages being abandoned, but writing about progressive old people. Madams, serving the country and the people, agricultural experts in the last days, etc., The old ladies of the ancient princes and princes, Princess Taiping, Wu Zetian, Cixi, Lu Pheasant, Xi Shi, Wang Zhaojun, Yang Guifei, Diao Chan, the old lady of Jia Mansion, White Bone Essence, various female generals, etc.

The author's ideas and designs are good. For example, the underlying logical setting of dressing up as Queen Mother Dou and traveling quickly at the beginning can attract readers, but the more you read, the more you feel that there are golden ideas wrapped in shit💩. The characters' dual quotient is not enough, their behavior is low, and the dialogue is shallow. As a result, the whole chapter relies entirely on the knowledge of popular science and the setting and YY to support it. If the article were a dish, the appearance of this article would probably be 8.5 To 9 out of 10, but the taste would only be about 4 out of 10. If you want to revise the article, I suggest that the author set the protagonist to be a turtle hatchling, ignorant and ignorant. This can best cover up the shortcomings of the article, and can also artificially set some cuteness and laughter to create more selling points.

The writing of the article is really not good, especially the second one which I couldn't stand. When your children go to college, they only pay for tuition and not for living expenses. You still think it's too much for your children to ask for money. If you have difficulties at home, you can talk frankly about them. You must know that it is not easy for adults and it is also not easy for children. Especially when the accounts are settled and no more money is owed outside, let the children go home. , And did not explain clearly, saying that he wanted to give them some money, but they would not divide it if they did not come back. The relationship between parents and children is like this. To be honest, the parents are a big reason. They blame the children for being unfilial and not going home. They did not raise them well when they were young. Can we still blame the children for being unfilial when they grow up? I really can't stand it anymore.

The author can also write about men, such as Zhuge Liang was transported through time when he was in Wuzhangyuan, or Tang Gaozu lived longer than Tang Taizong, or the Supreme Emperor in Red Mansion,

The reason why I couldn't watch it later was because it was too hung up. Similar to I am a god and came to ancient times to start a mission, I directly turned my hands to make clouds and rain, and turned on the minimalist mode.

This book is impossible to read. It's similar to the retirement guide, and it's not even as interesting as that one. It's a short story, and it doesn't have various early restaurant settings. It seems that it wants to be more detailed, but the author's writing is not good, and he can't write that passionate feeling at all.

I have followed several books by this author, but I stopped pursuing this one halfway through. I took advantage of the last hour to come here to catch up on the progress. I saw some comments saying it was boring. I personally think the problem may be that there are too many private settings and the layout is too big, making it unfriendly to new readers. The advantage of fast travel is that the story is a closed loop, which requires readers to have a strong sense of involvement and can easily switch in and out at any time, using fragmented time for fragmented reading. However, looking at the author's recent works, each mission has to change the direction of civilization development and consolidate the origin and foundation of the world. A large pattern is a good thing, but if it is too big, it is a bit tiring and ungrounded. Readers lack a sense of substitution. After seeing each small world, they are like: What is this? Ordinary people like us simply can't do it. Just to watch the fun, those theories about the origin and foundation are all private, a bit boring and difficult. Personally, I think the best part of each mission is the extra. Judging from the excitement between the lines and the increasing length, it seems that the author is also very good at writing extras~~ You might as well think about why this is the case, strengthen the highlights, and change the creative angle.

As long as the Empress Dowager is around, her granddaughter can always be the queen, even if she has no children. Anyway, the emperor has so many sons, and it is too easy to raise one. In ancient times, there were many cousins ​​​​in one, and almost all the aristocratic families were relatives. Empress Lu even let her son marry her granddaughter. Don't ask the ancients for the things of modern people.

I love reading the author's articles about time traveling, and my favorite is the guide to retirement care.