Dungeons and Scourge Lords

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the introduction... I have no desire to click in... I don't know if it's good or not.

Chapter 29: Poisoned to death! The author likes to use memes out of nowhere, but with the efforts of Qidian writers, these are all bad memes! And you spend so much energy writing about a rat man? The more I write, the more disgusting it becomes! Your first subordinate is a lizardman, and your second subordinate is a ratman. They are both disgusting units! Farewell!

The biggest poisonous point of this book is that the author does not know the basics of swamp terrain. He reads purely as swamp and writes as forest There are not so many vultures and leopards in forest swamps. Among big cat predators, only tigers seem to be close to water. How can vultures, as scavengers, find carcasses in dense woods? Hyenas may wander around the edge of the swamp, but they are not the dominant species in the swamp The mismatch between the environment and the content brings a huge sense of fragmentation

Personally, I particularly like fantasy farming articles. Although this article is called a game, there are not many descriptions of game skills involved, so it is suitable as a farming article. The swamp force is something that other articles haven't covered much, and it's very unique. A few suggestions: remember to set the arms in line with the style of painting. Just like the DND setting, fantasy must also be reasonable. If the powerful human troops of the swamp forces are set as heavy armored knights, how difficult will it be to get through it? Just like if you put an angel troop in the dungeon without changing the settings, it will definitely read and play well. Fantasy Swamp Force, the corresponding games that I can think of are Invincible Heroes, King's Bounty and Warhammer. These games generally like to use South American civilization as the background, and add beast elements to create swamp forces, just because the painting style is appropriate. The Lizardmen are very good, and the Ratmen are reasonable in terms of dungeon power, but the wolf-eared girl shooter is a little weird. It feels like a unit created with the background of the North American Indian nation. . . It is also set to be more powerful than the Lizard Man, so it is fine in the wilderness and grasslands. But in the swamp environment, the Beast-Ear Girl Archer is more powerful than the Lizard Man, so it is difficult to substitute. I thought at the time that I might as well just use the Lord of the Rings Man in Skin setting, combined with ancient South American civilizations, coyote assassins, jaguar warriors, eagle shooters, and bear tanks. The combination of wolf and archer looks like a prairie painting style, but this is actually forced. There is also a force of outlaws from the War of Wesnoth (calling themselves the Free Folk), which is also very suitable for the setting of the swamp militia line, poacher's shooters, car bandits and Roadhog warriors, rogue scouts, etc. It seems reasonable that the swamp force's human arms are set to hate oppression, are unwilling to abide by external rules, and are mainly infantry. Of course, I don't know if the author has considered the issue of painting style, but I haven't had time to reflect it yet, so I just said a few words when I remembered it. I hope you can stick with it. There are really not many that catch your eye in this fantasy farming article.

That's it, don't click in if you don't see it.

At 00:00 on December 1, 2023, that is, at 12 o'clock tonight, this book will usher in the first round of recommendations for new books. Its performance is related to whether it can carry out the next round of traffic recommendations so that more people can see this book, so it is very important to the author! I hope that if you think this book can make you laugh, please vote more, read it in time, and increase the recommendation score, so that the author will have more motivation! Everyone, please, bow! Bow! Bow again!

You can also take a look. Lord's text, Goldfinger's opening is not too big. Can watch for a while.

Well written, the author can ignore their feelings and keep working hard on the next book.

The writing is okay, but the troop levels are indeed a bit unique, and the plug-ins are not good, and the characteristics of the swamp are not obvious. Others are passable.

This level really makes reading more difficult. Who has time to memorize this kind of thing? Why don't you think about it? It's also very annoying 😒

I hope this book can highlight the developmental nature of lord essays

After reading the introduction, I have no desire to read it.

When will the body enter? Is the novice protection period over?

It looks okay so far, but if you keep writing like that, your results won't be very good.

I feel like the author has seen the infinite evolution of my arms? Somewhat similar

You start by flipping up women's skirts like a pervert, and you don't get beaten to death for this behavior? Slightly poisonous

🙂🙂🙂I still quite like it.

Will you open a new book or this account? I think your writing is good and you can continue writing.

It's so uncomfortable for people watching it. I can't stand it without pinching my nose. Come on, author, I'm going to run away first.

Do you want to change Chapter 71.72? If that doesn't work, you can just change the front. There are three barracks.

I would like to give some advice to the author: 1. The creativity should be new, but being unconventional in terms of title may not necessarily be accepted by readers. It is very risky for old authors to try new tricks. Can simple and clear levels 1 to 7 be used to replace the complicated and awkward militia level gold level? For example, the Lizardmen are called Level 2, 1 Star, and Level 1, instead of Gold Level, 1 Star and Level 1. Can (skill) be replaced (skill) with (skill)? 2. Play less tricks. Readers may not understand.

The data is a bit broken. The data from level one to level ten has increased tenfold, but the performance is... The author should set up one more basic racial data, plus the basic level bonus. This performance is normal, but it is not easy to change now. It is recommended to say before that units of different levels and different qualities have different basic racial panels. The one that is not displayed is considered a realism patch.