Cyber: Show Your True Skills When You Get to Night City

It's all cyberpunk. I'm not going to write some content that may get 404. At least the emotional line should be simple. The emotional aspect is so tiring to watch. You might as well change the protagonist to v and have a monogamous one. Now the protagonist is like an outsider.

The new book issue is updated twice every day at 12 noon. If there is no update, I will be disturbed and fainted.

Kassandra's emotional line is actually not very well written, and it's still being pulled. Brother, your background is cyberpunk, not Japanese high school light novels. You, the male protagonist, have been hanging out in Night City for half a year. Why do you still look like a Japanese Asashi male protagonist in terms of relationships?

It looks like it was cut. Fortunately, I didn't chase it to the end or it would have been a waste of money.

I feel like it's a bit too original. It's not even cybernetic, it's almost fantasy.

The writing is good, it does more things, big things, fills in all the difficulties in the game, and makes V come back so shocked that he doubts his life. When I went to fish for Jack, I felt like I could easily fish Johnny back.

I haven't read it yet. Is there any Shen Nong? In 2078, the plot is all over, and it is basically completely original. I'm a little hesitant whether to watch it or not.

Playing with your pure love in Night City? Did I walk into the animation studio? More than 200 chapters, buddy, more than 200 chapters!

The white hair is the best! ! !

Your emotional line is too abstract. If you really want to write about pulling and pulling, you should give more scenes. Your main point of view is always on the protagonist. The interactions between the female characters are basically only the protagonist and v, v and Rachel. What about the interaction between the protagonist and Rachel? Really stuck? Pull, pull, you have to pull and pull! You are so stuck that you barely even have daily interactions. There has been no progress for so long, and it has even regressed. At least I touched my head and chin in the front, but the back is completely gone, and I am all playing with v. You can write something to let Rachel go to the next stage, but you must have a daily routine before entering the incident, and you must lay out the emotional line! As for what is good, if you can't post it after you write it, just don't write it. Just leave it in one stroke. Knowing this, you can't post it now and you just don't write it. If you want to write about trouble, you should write less about emotional pull. It just means that it is interesting. A little plot like this can be used as a relaxation of the plot and relax the rhythm; If you want to write about love, you should even out the emotional scenes of the two heroines. It is not the same, but it is really too different. Even if Rachel's emotional line is stuck and there is no progress, at least the daily interactions with the protagonist can be arranged.

Plagiarism! Absolute plagiarism! Don't refute me, I won't accept refutation! The one I read has more words than yours, but the content is the same. Update twenty or thirty more chapters now to prove yourself and see who plagiarized whom. Actually, you also know that everyone still believes you, but your words are unfounded. You should update chapters 20 or 30 first. If you have evidence, you can say anything.

This emotional drama is so outrageous, I don't even know what I'm pulling on. Are you afraid that the review will conflict with the initiative and decisiveness of both parties? I thought this was an urban romance.

The first part is fine, but the second part messes with the timeline and opens the virtual world map, leaving readers confused. In addition, the author messed up his writing and didn't know what he wanted to write.

You're already 2077 and still being innocent doesn't mean you have to be too open-minded. At least you dare to love and hate a little. What kind of light novel are you still playing like Ruo Bian Ruo Li?

Why do you feel that V is such a badass? Any character that appears in the space station can step on V's head? I can't defeat it without relying on status refresh. I wonder if this is reasonable? The v skill body has already been stacked to 20. Can you still break through 20 by casually designing a character?

Night City really uses mobile phones As shown I collapsed when asked

The writing on Cyberspace lacks imagination and is a bit boring.

In all the years I have been at Qidian, I have rarely subscribed to a novel. I subscribed because I thought your book was good, but you actually did this! ! You betrayed my feelings! ! ! 😡

The best fic at the moment is Interdimensional Science and Technology. Can you recommend any other cyber fics? It would be better if they have more words.

The author wrote the bird well, but I always felt that V was too girly, emmmm, it should be girly. I always feel that v should be more manly.

My Miss V, hey hey 😆😆

Your writing of 2077 is really good, so even if you don't have a monthly ticket, I will give you a reward to support it. I hope you can work harder!

I'm currently reading chapter 221, and I can't understand the plot. V didn't show up after he came down from the moon. If there's a mole in the tribe, he'll deal with it. The list is all there, and he said he can't beat the company. Why can't he beat the company? The company headquarters in Night City are all branches. A pollution scandal is just like that. Isn't this the reality in foreign countries? Jack was resurrected in cyberspace without telling anyone else. Can you tell me about the protagonist's plan? Without saying a word, are you going to keep it for the New Year? I hate the Riddler the most in the game. If I read a fan fiction about The Riddler, then I'm not reading it in vain? The most unbearable thing is that the first two chapters are all about environment description, and they end with just two sentences, and then the chapter is over? ? Like to see? It's not that the writing is not good, the problem is that it has a certain degree. The whole article is a description of the environment. I flipped through the table of contents and looked at the update time. The update span is getting longer and longer and unstable. Is this going to be cut?

Obviously, at this point in the author's story, the cyberpunk story has ended. If he wants to continue writing, he should gradually turn to farming and hegemony in the future world. This requires a reliable AI to join the group to complete OGAS (economic construction), and the protagonist needs to exert his subjective initiative to write the story on earth. Promote collectivist stories (recreational mobilization), develop some new energy equipment and technologies to make up for some crooked technologies (fusion reactors, electric propulsion, new computer system interfaces, etc.), And find stories about the legacy spirit of the 1917 to 1970 era in the past 2077

It tastes so right, but it's a pity that I just saw the author saying that it will be finished😭Don't be too talkative about this kind of thing😭Let's talk about some extras and daily life😭 If you don't write some extras, work with Yori Xuan to create a new United States, contact Mao Zi's opposition to turn red Soviet revisionism, and then violently bombard Enter the EU and Khitan😎quickly build the Kangmi with one goal, and rush forward to find trouble in other parallel universes (this is the new Soviet Union of your childhood😡If there were AI Guevara and AI Lao Ka with radiation next door, the Soviet revisionists and Luo Alliance would have been sent to the sky) How can we do well with these insects? Look, I will send a water tank to send you to heaven. Jpg

I collected it first at work. I'll read it again when I have time. It shouldn't be the devil or moderation ending. 2078 Can't be a tower either

Come on author, your writing is really good.

Come on, author, what you wrote earlier is very good, keep it up

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.