Beginning with Time Travel and Becoming Extraordinary

If the water stays like this, no one will see it.

As of now, the character has no IQ. It is suitable for those who have never read books. It should be very friendly and have a stronger sense of involvement.

The early writing was pretty good. Later on, the protagonist took the initiative to weaken himself and said that frequent use of skills would damage his lifespan. It was so disgusting.

The writing is quite good, but I don't agree with the five shortcomings and three shortcomings at all. After all, I am so awesome, why should my life be so miserable?

After reading it, it is about being reborn into a gangster and then being exposed to heretical magic. If the world view of the book remains unchanged, all the magic is heretical, and none of it is an orthodox practice method. Not popular

After reading the latest chapter, I have to say a few words. The previous chapters were well written. Although there are some minor flaws, they are normal and the flaws cannot be concealed. However, after the protagonist arrives in Xiangjiang, the flavor of the novel changes. He picks up girls, goes undercover, becomes a policeman, and buys a record company. Is the next step to copy songs? If it weren't for the protagonist occasionally using tricks a few times, I would have thought I was watching the novel "Rebirth of Hong Kong". The protagonist used to fish and hunt game to make money slowly, partly for his mother, and partly because he was not strong enough. But now that the protagonist is swimming in the sea, he still takes his time and makes money and power by himself. It has occupied so many chapters. I really can't understand it. If it is an ordinary person doing this, there is no problem, but is the protagonist an ordinary person? For people like the protagonist who cannot show up for the time being, in fact, the best choice is to use their own abilities to annex a force, such as a gang or a company, and become a behind-the-scenes boss while slowly improving their own strength. Money is not important, and power is not important. The protagonist's own strength is the most important. With strength, are you afraid of not having money and power? Take Liu Tai of Titan Pharmaceuticals as an example. In terms of money and power, none of the 100 protagonists can match him. But in terms of strength, Liu Tai is just a fly that can be easily crushed in front of the protagonist. Therefore, there is no need to go step by step in chapters such as the protagonist's pursuit of money and power. You have to jump when you need to. You don't need to write more, just write it in one go. The main content should be extraordinary content, not making money or gaining power.

Everything has two sides, there is no perfect thing, only if there are five disadvantages and three shortcomings, the price will be good. Only in this way can the importance of choice be reflected, and it will be a good story. The most annoying thing is those novels about immunity to price. How can the protagonist get something without paying? That kind of novel is purely insane.

I can still read what I wrote so-so-huhu, but when I saw Zeng Tiantian accepted, I really couldn't bear it, it was so poisonous. It's so disgusting that I can't help but come here to complain. The character of the stepfather's daughter was made so unpleasant that she turned around and fell asleep. Couldn't I have written your character a little better before I wanted to sleep with you? Also, the dialogue every time I pretend to be X is really low. Do you know what I am? It's so embarrassing that I feel like I have cancer. Farewell

He has extraordinary powers, runs away to Hong Kong Island, and copies songs to start a company. This plot is extremely poisonous! !

The protagonist is too vindictive. It was his fault to kill other people's chickens. Although others did not know the truth, they did not wrong the protagonist. Just because they asked him to pay 50 yuan, he killed half of the other people's chickens. From this point of view, we can see what kind of character the protagonist has in the middle and later stages. He is definitely a lawless master.

You could say that the protagonist is poor. His home has a TV and a bicycle. You could say that he is rich. When he asks for help, he gives someone a 6 cent red envelope. You call him smart... I don't see how smart he is. After traveling for a month, he said that the times are bad, he is facing a wave of layoffs, and he can't do anything big, so he can only go fishing in the river to make a living. He encountered a ghost while fishing by the river at night, and spent 60 cents to solve it. He still dared to go fishing at night. I really don't know if he is too poor to die, or stupid to die. His fishing gear is too poorly made, and he still dares to go down to the river to catch the ghosts in the river. He doesn't take the ghosts in the river seriously at all.

From now on, the protagonist can do business of exterminating ghosts, subduing demons into dreams, and channeling dead people, while the soldiers are responsible for external business, and the protagonist handles everything internally, and then shoots a few documentaries to promote it, become famous, and become bigger and stronger😎 It's not as profitable as hunting and working in your hometown.

The protagonist is really trash. Not only is his ability useless, but his character is even worse.

The protagonist possesses extraordinary powers and is born from a grassroots background, so it is almost inevitable that he will take this path. The author's concept is very good 👍, I look forward to the follow-up plot

The protagonist is really selfish and has serious double standards. He bets his mother on Lu Ban's magic, and cheats his friends. His inability to fish is entirely due to the effect of possession. He goes fishing at night. How could he die if you go fishing at noon?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 being ungrateful,

Those who can see the fee are those who want to read weird stories, but after it was put on the shelves, it turned directly into urban literature and then leaned in the direction of martial arts. It deviated from the preferences of the target readers. It's damn good if the results are good.

The author is obviously the kind of person who firmly believes that there are weird things in the world and that folk Taoism is really effective🤣🤣 I don't know what kind of knowledge level and what kind of social experience tortured the author into this, but I will share my experience here. 🤪 I was 9 years old in 2001. At that time, my uncle was in charge of the superstition eradication office in the county. As the Chinese New Year is approaching, according to what he said during the chat. The entire county, or the entire city, has been swept for almost 5 years, and a lot of people who are lying, pretentious, and pretending to be crazy and acting stupid have been swept out. No one has the so-called real ability🤣🤣🤣 Maybe it's because our city is too small, only 15,000 square kilometers, and we can't meet people with such real ability hahaha.

Why can't we just let it go if we like to create malicious conflicts? This was the case in the last book. Because the admission notice was replaced by someone else, everyone was killed in the end. Now this book has another terrible incident. Does the author have persecution delusion?

How stupid. The protagonist has such ability but is so frustrated. And it's not because the opponent is too strong, it's because I can't think of a way and I'm not smart. The protagonist is down-to-earth, like a mountain man who has never read a book

The author of Diao Mao also added more details. I came in from Daily News. I didn't click into the comment area at the beginning and saw these two posts. I saw a few pictures of the protagonist's character, which really stinks. I took my friends to go fishing and encountered dirty things. If others don't believe it, you still don't know it's true. It's hard to persuade with good words. Damn it, the person you brought out had an accident and you didn't react at all. And Lao Xu got drunk and walked away directly with the Luban book. What's the difference between Tang San and me? (Although I was raised by you, and even though I secretly learned your secrets, I'm still right, right?)

The writing is good, the economic system has a lot of problems, and the protagonist is really unlikable. He is just a little gangster, which is very confusing. Can you be more mature and filial after time travel at such an age, and earn some money to study and study? Goofing around all day long killed Fa Xiao in the beginning, fishing and selling fish is also stupid. If you encounter something dirty, can't you go fishing early? Obviously, 2-3 pounds is the best to sell and catch. If you catch such a big fish at night, it will definitely stink. The author must not be a fisherman to understand.

After reading a few chapters, I think Qidian Orphanage is better. The protagonist's mother is annoying, and the author wants the protagonist to be a do-it-yourself and filial person. Let your mother jump out to get married and have children at any time. Protagonist, can you tell your mother how awesome you are? If it is really not possible, find a group of white, rich and beautiful women to give birth to a group. Just get some rotten fish and smelly shrimps. Outsiders know that you are awesome, but your family doesn't know that.

It was really good at the beginning, but when I went to another world, my feeling changed. After many years, many people betrayed me, and I felt like, ugh

Why did your painting style change after it was put on the shelves? It looked pretty good before it was put on the shelves. What did it say after it was put on the shelves?

What I wrote above is very serious. From the time Mr. Zhou was stuck, he still couldn't stand it anymore. He completely let himself go. He gave wisdom to the pig's feet and rushed over whenever something happened. He exchanged real money for a bottle of mineral water. He knew clearly about the mineral springs in another world, but he was not prepared at all.

As long as you don't die, go to death, come on! Vote monthly!

With the water going down like this, all readers will run away.

The author of the last 2 chapters carefully sent it to himself 🙂

It was well written, but the first dozen or so chapters were a bit discouraging, so I resisted and kept reading. It got better and better, but the details and layout were a bit scattered. The inside story of the people wanted in the country, and whether there was a strong current behind the murderous escape. After waiting for a long time, nothing was said. The story line in Hong Kong was unfolding, which seemed a little tangled! Overall, it's still worth reading, keep writing!

This limited exemption time comes just in time to spend more than a hundred chapters in vain 😁