From the Start, I Was Asked to Compile the Hongwu Canon, and the Emperor Could Not Be More Delighted

The writing is good, but the writing about Zhu Yuanzhang is too cold-blooded. Although Zhu Yuanzhang killed many heroes in his later years, it was mainly because Zhu Biao died. Zhu Yunwen was too young to hold the elders, so he killed many. But Zhu Yuanzhang was really kind to his sons and adopted sons. None of them were killed because of their high merit. Mu Ying is the most true example, and all his sons were sealed. The vassal king, since the Tang Dynasty, which prince has not only had the title of king but no real power, only Zhu Yuanzhang in the early Ming Dynasty has all been granted the title of vassal king, and the king of Jin and the king of Qin are both relatively unremarkable in history. Zhu Yuanzhang has not been abolished. The protagonist was picked up by Zhu Yuanzhang and is regarded as an adopted son. Mu Ying can have a good death. The protagonist's background is closer to Zhu Yuanzhang than Mu Ying, so why can't he die a good death?

Many bad habits began to intensify from Zhu Yuanzhang. Zhu Yuanzhang himself was very unfriendly to ordinary women. He advocated female chastity, and basic common sense such as foot binding, early marriage and early childbearing, and incest marriage should at least be changed. There are even more bad habits among the people. After coming here for so long, at least something should be said. Not to mention that these can leave a lasting name in history, but they can still have merit. I can't see the role of time travellers, so they can't all be used to get high positions.

What's wrong with authors these days! There are exclamation marks at every turn! Use an exclamation mark at the end of each chapter! Also use an exclamation point at the end of short sentences! There are only a few periods in the entire second chapter! Everyone is like this! Won't you find it noisy? I still feel that what I wrote is particularly shocking!

Before the death of the main character, some tear-jerking, and then switch to narration mode, his own thoughts affect the implementation of the main character's thoughts by Zhu Biao, Zhu Xiongxiong and his son. You have such a weak body, and if you force him to heal, you will be completely shocked by your achievements. Write something. Write something different. Narrative first, tear-jerking second. Directly deify the main foot.

I liked the beginning after reading it, but if I want to know how the protagonist protects himself wisely and participates in political affairs at the same time, I can't really take book repair as the main plot, right?

"Book of Rites, Qu Ji": "The death of the emperor is called collapse, the death of princes is called death, the death of a great official is called pawn, the death of a scholar is called failure, and the death of a common man is called death." If the music collapses, does it mean that you die after hearing three bursts of laughter? I've come to write a historical article, so I can't use common words wrong, right?

I have read a lot of online articles in the past two years. When I saw Xiao Han, I felt that he should practice fighting spirit.

No wonder it has been many years since the protagonist's highlight moment at the beginning, and his writing skills are really not enough. I thought this was a work that could compete with "The First Minister of the Ming Dynasty", but it seems that it still needs to be sharpened.

😅 Why does it feel like I have traveled through time but not yet worn it? The setting is the late Yuan and early Ming dynasties, when I conquered the world with Zhu Yuanzhang, but it looks completely unchanged It's still the same people, Li Shanchang, Hu Weiyong, and Yang Xian. By this time, we should establish a cabinet system. If we don't establish a cabinet, the prime minister will still be abolished after the Hu Weiyong case. Lao Zhu takes over everything, Zhu Biao becomes ill from overwork, and finally dies of illness

Thanks for the tip!