Martial Arts Longevity: I Can Change the Past

Very nice, please update soon

I remember reading about this subject. I deleted that book. I forgot what it was called. It seemed like Tomato and it seemed like Starting Point. I read too much and I forgot which book it was.

The story is very good, but the dialogue is too dramatic and confusing, turning the fairy grass into a weed full of flaws.

After the modification, it is indeed much smoother and more compact. It is getting better and better looking. It fits the bill. Good luck to the author.

Dear readers, please don't read this book, read it until the end, and give the author support. The author will do his best to write a good book, and he will never be a prisoner!

Come on, author, the last one that wrote about this subject posted a chapter on the first day it was released, and it took 3 days to post.

Is the protagonist preparing to be a taker? He thinks he is getting an advantage. He is a macho protagonist with a golden finger.

I will be in charge next month, come on, author!

Is he the male protagonist now? As long as you don't go to a brothel, you're still a eunuch. In the novels I've read now, all male protagonists, regardless of whether they are in a public house or working as a police officer, have to go to a brothel.

It's an old routine. At the beginning, the protagonist is going to be the chief clerk. Then I felt that there might be a problem. Then when we got to the Yamen, the author actually wrote that there was a problem with the protagonist's position.

There is a book called Chang Sheng from Changing the Past, which has the same setting as this one. The protagonist in that book is a jailer and this one is a policeman.

Starting to get on the right track, the author's writing is getting better and better

It's well written. I don't believe you when you say you're a newcomer.

Overall it's pretty good, except for the chapter about using Nine Suns to save Wu Er which is weird.

When did it become standard to go to a brothel? Abandon it, abandon it

It's not a fanfic, but it captures the essence of a fanfic. It's awesome 👍👏✌️

Pay attention, this person is the same person who posts comments and posts comments (because I didn't mess with the starting point before, and almost never read online articles, so the style is different). He reads books slowly and can keep up with the author's progress. I enjoy the feeling of catching up.

The protagonist has become weaker. Before, he could cut off 1,000 gun heads with just one knife in the blink of an eye. Now it takes so much effort to kill more than a dozen people.

The boss is ahead of schedule and is now on the shelves, come on! Let go and write

There is a book called Goldfinger written by Fish Biting Fox. But the content is different, he has cut off the roots

Isn't she a cute little pure love warrior?

This is just showing off. It's better to kick him twice and he'll slap him in the face tomorrow.

The layout of this dialogue is really annoying. I often can't tell who said a sentence. I have to carefully identify it slowly. I don't even know who taught the author the Chinese language.

Shi Qing was trapped by himself, which was tragic. Unfortunately, there was no regret medicine, so he woke up too late.

The author will not leave any suspense. There are some parts in the book that can easily be seen as poisonous. You have to read them later, or read the comments 😰😰😰