Konoha: I Ate Sweet Fruits

You might as well just move to the Konoha Twelve Xiaoqiang period. There are many beauties and the plot is reasonable. You are a fan and you have created a lot of female characters. Well, you don't really think that everyone comes to watch the fan just for original characters like you, right?

There are sweet fruits but they resist using them, and the dialogue is childish and wise... Not much to see.

The author should have changed the cover, it's too eye-catching. And it doesn't match the title of the book at all.

Add some cheats to the protagonist. This writing has a tendency to abuse the protagonist, and the protagonist is passive at all times.

The age issue has not been dealt with well, and the feeling of separation is too strong! ! ! Going on a mission when he was only eight years old and going to school, or was it a secret marriage between the Daimyo and Uchiha? Normal people would not think of starting such a task from school. And Danzo and Sandai think that the protagonist is a child and then talk to the protagonist in an adult way? ? ? It seems that the two people's characters are split, with their IQs rising and falling. The same goes for the protagonist, who showed his loyalty to two people with the IQ of an adult and then acted like a child with the IQ in front of them! Who are you deceiving? The protagonist is sometimes an adult and sometimes a child. The third generation and Danzo are sometimes wily and calculating and sometimes extremely stupid! ! !

You haven't refined your chakra at the age of eight, how can you still call it early?

At first glance, he was identified as the sexy protagonist of a female channel

If the fruit is not weakened, it is an invincible text? Why do you Naruto players shout that their combat power exceeds that of pirates every day? Now that the pirate fruit has been weakened, you still plausibly say that this is not an invincible text. If you eat this fruit, you will be invincible. The enemy is right, he can control everything A reader said it well, you want to take advantage of the popularity of the fruit, but also forcefully weaken the fruit I am really tired of this kind of person who always suppresses the protagonist's ability. I am so used to the reality that I am afraid of writing a novel.

The protagonist is too girly and timid at every turn 🙂

I want to vomit when I see the introduction, what the hell is this?

There is a weird feeling that the author has only read the Naruto fanfic and then wrote a fanfic.

Devil Fruits are born from human desires or wishes, and Haki is also willpower turned into a weapon. Desire and will cannot be equated with spiritual energy. I almost agree that natural energy represents the ability of the ocean to counteract it. As for what the author said about becoming invincible without cutting the fruit, I can only say that the Hokage is not without the ability to kill, and the shadow imitation technique Shinshin Sharingan clone explodes and so on. Afraid that the fruit's power is strong, didn't you set the energy consumption to consume chakra? You can also set Kakashi's raikiri 4 times a day like this. In the final analysis, the author is still incompetent.

Your cover is about eating the shemale fruit, right?

What kind of thing was pushed to me? I came in after eating breakfast and doing it early in the morning. I looked at the cover and squirted.

It seems that sweet fruits can also fear fossils

If you let me get this fruit, give me a male body or a female body! I will let the ninja world know what cruelty is

Why do some people think Uchiha Itachi loves his brother? You killed his whole family and made his life worse than death. You wiped out his whole family and made him live in hatred for most of his life. You can even use other gods to control his consciousness to distort his three views and make him work as a dog for the enemy who killed his whole family. Oh my god, how much hatred must be required to deserve your love for him, >Is this love? Is this worrying that the owner has no dog to control him? Let's train the dog for them And isn't Shisui his best brother? Your best brother was killed in front of you and had his eyes gouged out. Your first reaction was not to avenge him, but to kill your brother's whole family. How unlucky must he be to have a brother like you And I can't understand it the most. Where did that inexplicable loyalty come from? The family parents gave birth to you, raised you, cultivated your knowledge and talents, provided you with food, drink, and food to protect you as you grew up. From the beginning to the end, they never did anything sorry for you. On the contrary, Konoha has always rejected you, discriminated against you and smeared you. I have been thinking about how to persecute you all day long, how to To attack you like this, I have never done anything worthy of you from the beginning to the end, yet you can still lick your face and treat me like a dog, how despicable do you have to be to do such a thing And the reason for killing the whole family was actually because you thought the rebellion would not succeed. At that time, there were three pairs of kaleidoscopes and a bunch of jounin, Shisui's two eyes were still different. God, this success rate is quite high So what if he fails? If Sandai wants to maintain his good-natured persona, it is impossible to exterminate all of you. At least those pregnant women, those babies, and those ordinary tribesmen who have no talent and pose no threat to him can survive Besides, even if you don't plan Rebellion, flash your blood eyes, and show an attitude that if you dare to touch me, I will die with you, We will all die together. With the urinary attitude of the top management of Konoha, I will never dare to touch you. It is like there is a group of bullies in the village who bully you all day long. They occupy your land today, rob your cattle tomorrow, and kill your people the day after tomorrow. Your family can't bear it anymore. If you go there, you have to fight them tooth and nail. As a result, you parents don't know whether they are born to be mean or have some serious brain disease. You can actually help this group of bullies to kill your parents and destroy your whole family. You can even admit that the bullies have no dogs to control, and personally train your younger brother to be a dog for them to control. The most incomprehensible thing to me is that there are so many people who call weasels, and even can Compare his image of a man who kills relatives with that of an anti-Japanese hero. The prototype of this guy is the murderer near Kishimoto's house. A Japanese devil is still a murderer. What qualifications does he have to compare with the anti-Japanese hero? How can he talk about his spirit, his beliefs, and how great his ideals are? Except for the theory of victim guilt, I really don't see anything else in him.