Conferred Gods: Starting from the Third Prince Long

The writing in the early stages of the plot was very good, like reading a vernacular novel, and the poems in the chapters were outstanding; later on, I heard that it was severely criticized, so I have not commented on it for the time being. Abandoning the traditional omniscient system flow and the continuous level up flow, it is indeed very challenging to play in traditional mythological stories. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes.

The writing is pretty good, the author must finish it well.

All the great gods are related to each other, and when you look at something, you still want to be the master of it.

What is the use of supernatural powers? The Jade Emperor relies on his background.

Forget it about Deng Chanyu, now it's all about Shiji. If there are no women to play with, you won't be able to write a book, right? I really regret giving you a monthly pass

Brain Storage

I felt like I had eaten a fly when I saw Deng Chanyu's episode. I read a few more chapters and I just couldn't stand it anymore. It was too low to start high and go low. At first, I thought the writing style and plot were the seeds of a masterpiece. Alas, I gave up.

Can we stop writing about women? It's not misogyny, what you wrote is too blunt. I won't talk about Deng Chanyu from Longji Sanxiao earlier. As soon as you Shiji came out and read the description, I knew I was going to do it again. Forget about being a weak villain, if you think you are like a classic novel, don't pretend to be a girl and then establish yourself, okay?

It was hard to use the previous life to get rid of Deng Chanyu's matter. Haotian had just planned to grant a marriage, so you had to do it directly. For the first time, you could say that Deng Chanyu wanted to die. What the hell are you doing every day in the future? Do you have to accept anyone who wants to die? He also said that there is nothing he can do. He is really both a man and a woman. He told me about opening a harem earlier. It was originally a good book to read, but it turned out to be disgusting later on.

What kind of plot is this? It's fine if you want to write a harem story, but can you not force Deng Chanyu to do it? It's really even a girl. Although many people like sex, it's not this kind of sex. People are preparing to get married in heaven, but you are like this on earth. It's really disgusting. Give it up. Isn't this pure cuckoldry? Pure bt text,

Seeking death is too powerful. It doesn't take long for me to become a eunuch. I've just written a few pieces, but there are so many dead ends.

I feel like the two authors are not the same person. I don't know if you all feel the same way. It makes me uncomfortable when I think about the unclear relationship with Shi Ji later. Give it up, give it up.

Abandoned, the more I write, the more disgusting it becomes, a waste of my time

Brothers, I'll slip away first and put up a post as proof.

The farther back you go, the uglier it gets. . . .

Just write well. What does it mean to use a ghostwriter to write for you? Originally it was good at the beginning, but then it got worse and worse, and the more you wrote, the more brainless it became. Alas, the writing was ruined.

It's well written. The only thing I have to complain about is the plot with Sanxiao. The words are too frivolous and ambiguous!

Don't leave the harem, it's too embarrassing, it's too embarrassing, it's too embarrassing

He had not been interested in women for many years, but later he became confused when he saw the princess. It was so embarrassing.

Don't do it, just bring it over with a lump sum. You really want to open a harem. It's not easy to get it done. At the top, Long Ji is waiting for the wedding, but now he's doing it. I can't stand it anymore. 😥

You won't want the entire storyline of Journey to the West in the future, right? It feels like the Huang Long Chu Gui is the foreshadowing, and the story line of the Lotus Lantern is also there. It would be really boring if you piece it all together like this. I hope the author will remember

This book is still very well written. It feels good to write Journey to the West along this line of thinking. I can write about the Yellow Lion Spirit, the most innocent monster.

Come on, author, update quickly, if you like it, please read it 😁

I want to see people being stepped on, but I don't want to see people being stepped on. This book is in danger on my bookshelf.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that kills decisively and has many joys. "The old man picked up rags in time and made a living by making bad movies" is hilarious...

Is it necessary to give the Dragon King an edict when it rains? Then in Journey to the West, the Dragon King of East China Sea was invited by Sun Wukong to rain, didn't he also need to be executed? Isn't it the rain god who makes it rain? And shouldn't the Conferred God have not completely entered the heaven?

As long as Ao Bing did not drown Shennong's daughter Jingwei, he would not be ripped off by Nezha.

Where is the author's next book? The Dragon King of Jinghe River in Journey to the West? More innocent than Huang Shijing? ?