Martial Arts: Unlimited Firepower

Many online novels like to make a mistake. What you write is not a classic, you write a fast-food online novel. What readers want to see is not all kinds of frustrating plots. You don't even know this situation, how do you expect readers to subscribe to you?

I've run through more than ten chapters, tell me what's the progress in these ten chapters? Has the worldview expanded? Has the protagonist's level increased? What's the use of just writing about the battle of wits and courage during the escape? Run a paragraph and write down what was said and done on both sides, and then skip the next paragraph and continue writing like this, which seems boring.

I don't understand the world of novels. The comment section started talking about human rights. The worldview of the novel is like a saint coming. Open your mouth and shut up. That's it. World of novels. You see, as long as there are novels with extraordinary power, ordinary people will die piece by piece in disasters. It's like cutting leeks. People have power. Can you not listen? Isn't this normal? Not to mention that there is no disaster. How to reflect the importance of the protagonist? Isn't this normal? Isn't it all solved by the protagonist in the later stage?

The author has probably never been treated like a human being, so he thinks this mining environment can last! Author, you really should read Selected Works of Mao! ! ! You are rotten!

What is required above is output. Leaders want to squeeze employees, not crush them to death. Management will control the level, not crush employees to death. Every region has an effective system, and production can be increased just by killing a few employees.

After Chen Laoqi became possessed, the more he wrote, the more biased he became. He could have escaped from the mine long ago, but he had to deliberately devise various plots to pin the pig's feet to death in the mine.

The first part of the book was okay, but when it came to the chase plot, it was incomprehensible. Is there some kind of magical power that prevents the protagonist from hiding? Does he have to go to the county town? Why does the pursuer have to work so hard? Are there any benefits and penalties? Or is it because he knows that the protagonist is opposite and can break the golden finger? An old man who has lost his position is so arrogant. It is the protagonist's turn to suddenly break out and make his subordinates lose their minds and die for him. How much is the monthly salary?

What a slap in the face, you started to run and watched for so many days and still chased me. And you can't change direction. Even if you go further,

It's raining heavily. How can we still find the protagonist from such a distance? Did we use magic?

Readers are frustrated. Still want votes? There are no recommendation votes. Don't worry.

Is the protagonist a mine slave? What do you want to do if you don't have to pay mines every day? This is 100% cooli

Cows and horses also have their limits. Modern society advocates enduring hardship, but no one is stupid. If there is no hope, they will just die. The poor will not get married, and the rich will immigrate.

To be honest, population refresh is just a joke, because no one will write it in detail But if you really want to write it in detail, then you can't write about population refresh seriously.

You can just barely take off, but you have to pretend to be useless, you spit out all your secrets, you can't develop your unlimited firepower, and you don't even have state-of-the-art martial arts, why don't you just pretend to be useless?

Write well to ensure the current quality

The opening is so disgusting. The three sentences are inseparable from the hook. You can't fucking live without the hook.

The rhythm is stable, but the timeline can be skipped appropriately, which is a bit ink.

It's very well written, but it's a pity that I read it too early. I need to take care of it.

After saving for a while, I wanted to watch it and found out that it was cut 😅

Good job, author. I saved up for a while and ordered it all in one go

The plot is old-fashioned, the plug-ins are old-fashioned, and the narrative is hard to describe in one word. If you fall behind, you will be beaten. What does this backwardness mean? It's the system and the upward channel! India and we are both countries with large populations. Why do we force their food on them? We have an excellent talent selection mechanism, and Indian birth determines everything. Your routine is only suitable for historical literature, but it won't work once you reach high martial arts! I can't beat you with one, but what about ten and a hundred? And your moves and abilities are obviously not in line with the mainstream, and it can easily lead to a large-scale pursuit. Everyone who has the ability wants to explore your powerful secret!

I feel that the author still has ideas and the level is not bad, but the content of the book and the restrictions on plug-ins make it inconsistent with the "unlimited firepower" of the title.

The book has been cut out. Sorry, the author of Salted Fish broke his promise. From now on, call me Father Salted Fish. Those who are familiar with me should know that I wrote more than 500,000 words on my first book under another account without signing a contract. In the end, it was blocked by reviewers and I stopped writing. For the last two books, the first order was worse than this one, and the final order was less than 150. But I still insisted on finishing it, mainly because I felt that I could write it clearly at the time. But this book still adds too much and is too complicated, and nothing is written clearly, so that I can no longer write it myself, so I finally decided to cut it. I dare not say too many words of defense. I can only say that the author's level is too poor and his vision is too high. After being beaten by reality, he hopes to make some progress. Above.

The next main plot line is: The protagonist kills Xu Wei and starts to develop his power based on the slaves in Xu Wei's base. During this period, the Xiaoyao faction and the imperial court came together, and the imperial court sent out the poisonous Marquis Xiaoyong. The protagonist relied on his investigative ability to discover in advance and defeat each of them. Then the four masters wanted to catch the protagonist, but the protagonist discovered that the "poison" in Xiaoyong Hou was actually a piece of highly enriched nuclear material that Mr. Yao accidentally found. Relying on the absolute advantage of flight and the deterrence of nuclear radiation, the protagonist forced back the four leaders and officially established a foothold in this world. Both the sect and the imperial court had their own plans and tried to complete the victory in one battle, so they both let the protagonist go for the time being. Next, relying on the advantage of flying speed and Zhuge Chulin's knowledge, the protagonist began to develop rapidly and opened schools. The Zhuge Family, Yuwen Family, and even the four major sects and the imperial court sent people to study in the protagonist's school. This stage is similar to the development of industrial production. The protagonist relies on his own knowledge and the skills developed by combining the power of Qi and blood to quickly replicate many technologies. During this period, the "crazy people" in Yao Lao's words found the protagonist and told him that there was something wrong with the visualization chart they studied. In essence, they were helping a conservative force in the royal family achieve immortality. Chief Qin is a semi-finished product of their experiment. Former Chief Jiang relied on spiritual transfer to achieve spiritual symbiosis with Chief Qin. The people who passed the Imperial Fish and Dragon Test were actually possessed by the dying people of the royal family through spiritual transfer. But the protagonist relied on their descriptions and the loopholes in the Seven Emotions and Six Desires method that Chief Qin deliberately left behind to figure out the method of spiritual cultivation. In June of the next year, the ichthyosaur trial began. In order to recruit more outstanding students, the protagonist asked Zhuge Chulin to go to Qingyun City to recruit students, and he secretly followed him. At the same time, Huang Quan relied on the skills of all sentient beings to let all the elites of the sect sneak into Qingyun City, preparing to start their mission. Just when the Fish-Dragon Trial began, King Zhao Jiang Hong and other vassal kings gathered in Qingyun City with their elite troops, and Jiang Xiyue was also there. It turns out that they have also secretly contacted the Martial God among the four masters, and are preparing to eliminate the sect in one fell swoop. But this was actually planned by Huang Quan. He sensed the abnormality of the God of War, and used his trick to attract the elite troops of the imperial court. He secretly activated Huang Quan's magic, absorbed the power of these people's blood, and after beating the God of War back to his original form, he activated the Five Elements Reception Formation that had been deployed in Qingyun City. After the Five Elements Guidance Formation was activated, a group of people descended from the sky. Each one was a master of the upper three realms, and there were also several true masters who were far beyond the inner refinement realm. In order to cover the evacuation of Jiang Xiyue and others, Zhao Wang Jiang Hong and other older generations, the emperor, and royal family members all died in the battle, and Qingyun City and most of the surrounding areas fell. Wang Geng seized the opportunity to destroy Huangquan's body, temporarily interrupting the Five Elements Reception Formation, and at the same time rescued half of the Martial God's body. From the mouth of the God of War, the protagonist learns that thousands of years ago, powerful warriors who were almost like gods appeared on this land. In order to show their extraordinaryness, these gods gathered treasures from all over the world and created a land suspended in the sky. They brought their descendants of blood to live in this divine kingdom. People on earth can only look up to the existence of these gods. But after the gods became gods, they began to block other people's paths. They destroyed all advanced martial arts knowledge, so that no one on earth would ever have the strength to resist them. The Kingdom of God is also flying higher and higher day by day, until it is completely invisible to the naked eye. But gods will eventually grow old and die. After the first generation of gods died, their descendants did not inherit their power. Even because of the blockade of these gods, the descendants of the Kingdom of God became weaker with each generation. Until a thousand years ago, they no longer even had the ability to descend from the Kingdom of God to the ground. Originally, people like them relied on absorbing the nourishment from the ground to survive. After losing the channel to connect to the ground, the resources of the Kingdom of God were rapidly shorted, and the living environment also deteriorated. So four hundred years ago, the Kingdom of God sent a person to gather the remaining resources and techniques of the Kingdom of God, and asked him to develop his power on the ground and create a connection array so that the Kingdom of God could continue to communicate with the ground. But after that person took these things down to the ground, he never responded to any messages. That person is Jiang Qingyun, Emperor Taizu of the Great Zhou Dynasty. A hundred years ago, the Kingdom of God, whose environment had become increasingly worse, could no longer support the safe landing of living people. They assigned five true warriors, Biluoxian, Xiaoyaoke, Wushen, Jianzun, and Huangquan, to give up their physical bodies, engrave divine will on their weapons, and descend from the sky in the form of weapon spirits to find hosts and start the plan to guide the formation again. Among them, Bi Luoxian and the other three went well, but the God of War unexpectedly struggled with the spirit of the chosen host. The two sides were one and the same, each helping one side. Huang Quan had an accident and fell into a crack in the Black Wind Mountain. He fell all the way to the depths of the ground and was not able to see the light of day again until more than fifty years later. This is the background of the story.

Chinese martial arts: your skills increase every day!

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