Martial Arts: Infinite Firepower

Many online novels make a common mistake: they're not writing classics, they're writing fast-paced online fiction. Readers don't want frustrating, drawn-out plots. If you don't even realize this, how can you expect readers to subscribe?

After running through more than ten chapters, can you tell me what progress has been made in these ten chapters? Has the world-building expanded? Has the protagonist's level increased? What's the point of just writing about the wits and courage during the escape? They run a section, describe what the two sides said and did, and then there's no next section. It's boring to read.

I don't understand the world of novels. The comments section is starting to talk about human rights. When a saint appears in a novel's worldview, all they talk about is this: the world of novels. Look, in any novel with supernatural powers, when there's a disaster, ordinary people just die one after another, like harvesting crops. They have power, can you ignore them? Isn't that normal?

The higher-ups want output, and leaders should push employees to their limits, not kill them. Management needs to strike a balance, not drive employees to their deaths. Every region has effective systems in place; increasing output isn't achieved by killing a few employees.

The author has never been treated like a human being, so he thinks this mining environment can continue! Author, you really should read Mao Zedong's Selected Works!!! You're already corrupt!

After Chen Laoqi became obsessed, his writing went further and further astray. He could have easily escaped the mine long ago, but he deliberately designed various plots to keep the protagonist stuck in the mine.

The beginning of the book was alright, but the chase scenes went completely inexplicable. What kind of supernatural power made it impossible for the protagonist to escape, forcing him to go to the county town? Why did the pursuers go to such lengths? What were their benefits and punishments, or did they know the pursuer was the protagonist and could use some kind of cheat code?

How could they find the protagonist from so far away in this heavy rain? Did they use magic?

What a load of rubbish! You've been watching for days after you started, and you're still chasing after me? Besides, can't you change direction? Even if you go further...

The readers have already been frustrated enough, and you still want votes? Don't worry, there aren't even any recommendation votes.