Brother, I Want to Recruit an Dasong

Very innovative and well written. I stole three of them Heze, Liangshan, has a specialty, Qingshan Han Sheep. If there are any monsters that dominate the mountains, you can refer to them Some heinous guys want to get rid of them They can pretend to be imperial edicts, win over generals to divide the territory, and go to Tokyo to sleep with the queen or concubine. Cai Jing and other traitors raped their wives and concubines. Another small climax that I can write Compared with Liangshan and Fangla in the south, there is no strategic depth If you go to Huguang, you can retreat to Yunnan, Guizhou and Sichuan, and the strategic depth is great. Watching Liangshan beat Fang La, then go to Fang La's side to make a fuss and collect people

My own map of Liangshan

The combat effectiveness of the Song Dynasty army in Water Margin is quite bad. They are either being beaten or being beaten on the way. The military discipline is not good enough, and the soldiers are like bandits. Surrounded by the four major bandits, the territory was divided into small dynasties, and they all relied on recruiting Liangshan to fight back the world.

Based on everyone's opinions and suggestions, various adjustments have been made in the book, and adjustments have been made as much as possible without affecting the plot. Now I will report the adjustment part for the convenience of all adoptive fathers to read. 1. Modified the poisonous point in Chapter 52, the military salute, and changed it to a fist salute. The original meaning here is taken from Zhou Yafu's "Men in armor are not allowed to kneel" 2, which is a major change. Regarding Yang Zhi's life experience According to the suggestions and opinions of several book friends, Xiaoling went to several friends who studied history and friends who liked Song Dynasty biographies and storytelling. They called for consultation and chatted for a long time about Yang Zhi's life experience. In the end, major revisions were made to chapters 38-39-40 in the text. The Yang family lineage used in this book does not follow the Yang Ye-Yang Yanzhao-Yang Wenguang line in Song history, but uses the widely circulated "Biography of Yang Family Generals" and "The Romance of Yangmen Mansion" as well as the "Yue Fei Biography" about Yang Zaixing's life experience. The Yang family lineage currently provided is: Yang Jiye-Yang Yanzhao (Liu Lang)- - Yang Zongbao (wife Mu Guiying) - Yang Wenguang (the 19th wife of King Taiping) - Yang Huaiyu (a contemporary of Yang Zhi) - Yang Zaixing (nephew of Yang Zhi). Inserting Yang Zhi with such a lineage relationship is consistent with Yang Zaixing's identity as the great-great-grandson of Yang Laolinggong, and it also barely echoes the positioning given to Yang Zhi in Water Margin. However, Yang Zhi here does not conform to the statement in the original text of Water Margin that Yang Laolinggong is the grandson. Let us tentatively confirm that Yang Laolinggong written in the article is Yang Zongbao who inherited his status. This is more consistent in terms of time. 3. It is about the selection of heroes in the original Liangshan in Water Margin. When dealing with Lin Chong, I have always been very entangled, but I really didn't like Lin Chong in the early stage. However, after thinking about it for a while, Xiaoling discovered a thinking problem of his own. People can change. Lin Chong's cowardice is due to his cognition, personality and selfishness, but at least he is not bad in nature. If he has experienced a lot and been guided, then maybe Lin Chong will change and embark on his own path. As for other heroes, such as the double-gun general Dong Ping and the urging judge Li Li, they will definitely not take the lives of those who do evil. Other heroes may still have room for transformation. This will better reflect the influence of the protagonist on this era and the change of destiny, right? I hope that everyone can also provide comments at any time, and some book reviews will disappear. On the one hand, it is because I found that when making changes in the text, the original book review will disappear after the changed content. On the other hand, unfriendly comments will affect the traffic and retention rate in the new book period. Xiaoling will note these comments himself and will not retain these comments for the time being. However, unless it is a serious personal attack, Xiaoling will not ban every book friend. I hope everyone can speak freely. Xiaoling will record everything in his notepad to remind himself, and make modifications when he has time. Xiaoling's health has not been very good recently, and she has returned to her hometown for treatment these days. After the last course of treatment tomorrow, she will return to her home and continue to work hard. I hope everyone will support me, read more, and leave messages. Xiaoling also hopes that I can write an interesting story for everyone without leaving any regrets.

Where is Shennong

After the poison test, I personally felt that it was extremely poisonous. The first part was fine, but in the middle, Lin Chong was described as a villain who was watching the wind and steering the ship! ! I can't accept it personally, so I'm ready to take over Lin Chong's wife based on her attitude! ! Abandon the book!

This one is the most energetic!

The book is pretty good, why is there no chapter review?

Come on

Trainee Shennong passed by and wanted to try some poison first

The new book issue will be updated twice every day at 9pm! Thousands of dollars will be released soon!

It's been a month since I was sifting through it and I came across this Water Margin novel again. It's such a pity that I couldn't get enough of it.

I thought I could fatten up and then read more... What a pity, I hope the author will work hard and come up with new masterpieces!

After asking for it for a long time, it's finally here 😏

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

There is a fairy tale version of Water Margin next door. The article has just been written and the author needs to have a sense of urgency.

Is the author in good health? Come on

Does the author have any old books? Are all the books written by new authors now at this level?

Looking for a supporting role Liu Yichen

The writing is really good, but the updates are a bit slow. It's not a big problem. As long as the author can keep writing, it will be fine. I will give you a monthly pass.