The Only One Who Can Use This Divine Artifact

There weren't any major flaws, no climaxes, nothing special, just plain and uneventful. But for a new author, that's fine; having the experience of writing one book will definitely make the next one better. The premise was good, but it was too predictable. Seeing Curry Stick and Ou Zhizi, I knew it was definitely a senior transmigrator; there was no suspense.

It's alright, a bit bland, the protagonist's thinking is a bit primitive.

It's already shaped like a pig. As a time traveler, why don't you have any fancy tricks up your sleeve? You can choose not to live, but you can't be without life.

The title sounded intriguing, but the content was surprisingly bland.

Aside from being bland, it has no flaws. The writing, logic, and character development are all quite good. It's just a pity that we live in a superficial society.

This is a high-level work among novice authors. Although the plot is rather bland, it has no major flaws and is easy to read.

Keep it up! The writing, character design, and imagination are all great, it's just that the plot is a bit bland.

Keep it up! Aside from the bland plot, it's still pretty good. 🙂

It's too bland. The writing style is fine, there's nothing wrong with writing a novel, but the biggest problem is that the plot is bland, without any tricks or interesting storylines.

Looking again, the main character seems a bit simple-minded.