Chat Group: Listen to Advice and Become Stronger, Tang San Breaks the Defense!

The plot is good, but the writing is really bad. This is the first time I have seen such poor writing skills. What did you write about the fight plot? Overwrite it directly? Is this a novel? You might as well just say this is classical Chinese. Go home and move bricks, don't harm the novel.

Great author, when did you trick Tang San to death?

Can the author add, Chaos Sword God, the first god of all time?

What a great review, write a bad book, write a good one, and the content will become history. Look at those people you wrote about, who like to be lickers, like to be cuckolded, and like to collect rags. It is indeed a true portrayal of the author!

The world of full-time masters, the world of Pokémon, the prehistoric world, and the world of spiritual cages. Super seminary world.

The author is great. This book feels more like a realm flow to me, that is, it only has cultivation and realm. As for combat power, it is dispensable. Anyway, I have never seen the protagonist and group members break any items. And when I read Chapter 17 or 18, the description of the battle was almost like a game, where you were chatting casually while fighting. There is also the chat group points. Recycling 100,000 points from a system. The protagonist initially advances to a small realm by 10,000 points, and then doubles each time he reaches a small realm. By the way, is the system in the villain of this book so worthless? 😥😥😥😥😥😥😥

The world of full-time masters, the world of Pokémon, the prehistoric world, and the world of spiritual cages.

The author is great, can you write a copy? I, Emperor Huangtian, join the chat group!

Jiu Shu was changed to Zhang Sanfeng and Yao Yue was changed to Lian Xing

Is the world of Zhuxian so powerful?

The idea is good, but the person who wrote the book is really useless. Comparing the magical weapon of the Immortal Sword to the second-rate weapon of Zhu Xian, you also want to find Zhang Xiaofan to use the Brahma Prajna. What do you think? There is no similar golden finger and you still create your own technique? Zhu Xian's gate is deeply rooted, and when the time comes, Daoxuan's Zhu Xian Sword will not only kill Zhang Xiaofan. Also, if Wuhun Continent doesn't like it, don't add it. If you add it, you'll write about black people. Fighting to break the world is speechless, Xiao Yan is already a time traveler, and another time traveler comes to him, and Xiao Yan is blackened again. It's okay if you don't like it, just ignore it, there's no need to be rude. To sum up: after reading twelve chapters, they are all full of shortcomings. I don't have a clear understanding of things. People are really disabled.

Dear author, do you have a book club?

The writing on combat effectiveness is a piece of shit.

The biggest problem is whether the combat power collapses or it collapses at the beginning, directly killing 90% of the readers.