The Paradise of the Abyss Does Not Support Idlers

In the introduction, bmg really lives in Bengbu.

It's too watery and the book has no punch. Young people are not called young people if they are not angry. It's not like a forty or fifty-year-old Lao Gou is reborn. A guy who is at the forefront of the current version. He doesn't fight and doesn't burn his brain. It's all water.

If you don't have enough writing skills or experience, don't challenge yourself to write a lunatic. Many novices always think that crazy people are easy to write, and they mistakenly think that random writing is crazy. What exactly is crazy? Do you think it's crazy for people to lie down and eat grass on the lawn? If a cow or an unknown animal does this, you will just think it doesn't matter, it's routine. Crazy, in a way, is breaking the rules of familiar and usual experiences. If you want to write a character that makes readers feel crazy, then you have to bring the character to life and then do some unconventional actions, otherwise it will look like Chile is below the average line. First draw the characters to life, observe the people around you more carefully, and experience various life experiences, and then write crazy

As a bookworm, what is the most important thing about reading novels? Isn't it just that you can find a novel that suits your taste during the book shortage? I can calm down, comfortably forget the worries of the world, and quietly enjoy the happiness that immersing myself in the world of novels brings me! It's so cool to be able to watch it for three to five days at a stretch, right? ! It's useless to say more! Come on, author! Looking forward to the next one being better!

The author often gets the order of words wrong. There are many cases of this, and the reading experience is very poor. 🤓

Okay, okay, okay

It's really good-looking, and it feels like a horror paradise. Come on, the author

Stare🤓

In the later stage, the presence of attributes must be reduced. High-latitude power is definitely not comparable to piles of numerical values. The weird and supernatural world system is mainly based on rules than power. No matter how high the power attribute is, it will not work without reasonable means. This article also emphasizes the role of mental power, which is consumed as a price like physical life, rather than as an offensive ability in the fantasy system. Strengthen the use and matching of various skills. It is more enjoyable to watch than using a weapon with strength +10 to chop around. After all, this kind of content can be used to watch fantasy martial arts. In Thriller Paradise, everything from firearms and fighting skills to summoning, spiritual arts, exclusive equipment, and finally direct application of rules, Thriller also emphasizes everyone's confrontation through competitions. Abyss Paradise mainly fights against the strangeness of evil gods and their vassals. Creation around these contents is the best way to attract readers. I think that the Abyss game should be used as the surface world, and in the end, you will gain some qualifications and enter the real world of the Abyss, because it can be used as an idea to get rid of the system flow. The above is just a small thought from a bookworm of more than ten years. 😊

I fucked with gods and got a bunch of items that even demigods were jealous of. As soon as the results came out, I was promoted to rank eight, and the old habit of netizens broke out.

The writing and plot are very good. Let me mention a little fly in the ointment: the protagonist's sequence has always been far lower than the boss involved in the event. For example, in sequence 9, he participated in the activities of super-level gods many times, and did not pay much attention to the corresponding improvement of the protagonist's sequence. Generally, it is more acceptable to readers for the protagonist to be exposed to events beyond level 2 to level 3. In this way, the protagonist improves all the way, "opens up wasteland" along the way, and completes the cognition and world view along the way. The reason why it is emphasized not to participate too much in serious super-level events and not pay attention to the corresponding improvement of the protagonist's strength is because this will reduce the reader's psychological pleasure, that is, "refreshing". After all, even if it is a "Le Ziwen", improving individual power in the extraordinary world is what many readers expect. If you participate in super-level events many times and the protagonist can always save the day, then the logic of going beyond that many levels will easily collapse. I have read more than 200 chapters now, and the protagonist has just entered Sequence 8 and has been messing around in the super level. To be honest, it is very frustrating. What a pity the story frame and writing style. It was originally a 5⭐ masterpiece, but now I think it is 3⭐ and a half or 4⭐. From grass jelly to food➕. Refuse to refute, and the refutation means you are right. Thanks

In the early stages of this book, the book can be considered useful, but in the middle, when the combat power is set up, the plot logic completely collapses. The writing is mediocre and full of typos and grammatical errors. I don't recommend reading it. It's a waste of money.

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Are all those clubs and individual people idiots? The protagonist has received hundreds of millions of points, and everyone knows that he is lucky. They all think that they will not survive. What they cannot do, they think that others cannot do it. The writing is a bit too idiotic Then why don't they get lucky and get hundreds of millions of points? Practice more dishes hetui

I have read Chapter 254 so far, and I feel that the work at the end is not on the same level as the beginning. It feels like it was written by a different person, and the level has dropped several levels. The watershed is the chapters in The Uneasy Place.

If you haven't watched it, don't watch it. Don't waste your money. What I wrote at the beginning was okay, but in the mid-term, the combat power collapsed, and then it was completely messed up, just messing around.

I don't know what kind of things are being stirred up in these dozens of chapters. The good evil speed limitless flow has turned into a cliché show-off flow. The plot is just to show off in front of all kinds of gods, second-generation players, and players. Isn't there a lack of creativity? It makes you feel good, but it doesn't hit the mark. The supporting characters are all written as wise, and the protagonist relies on the temporary power given by others to defeat all the enemies. In the end, it was broadcast to the entire vegetable market. In the past half month, I saw the update of this book and I didn't bother to click in. I felt sleepy while reading. They also created so many conditions for the protagonist to intervene in the high-end game and show off in front of God. It looks extremely weird, and now I really can't stand it. Just take care of it. You can do some messy things later and don't look at it.

Water, very water. There are 30 chapters that can be written in 3 chapters, and the latest update of the side description of the plot event has only 2 chapters. I wrote 3 chapters about the meaningless things before the incident, and 1 chapter about meeting someone on the road and chatting with them. The content mentioned in the chapter title will only appear in the last paragraph of the article, meaninglessly filling up one chapter after another. For example: A walked from point a to point b to help event A's meaningless content before starting water chapter 3 A's emotion before starting water chapter 2 A meeting a passerby before starting water chapter 1 A's subordinates and teammates' thoughts water chapter 1 A starting to do things water chapter 30, among which In fact, it only takes 3 chapters to write this matter wonderfully A After arriving at point b, he ran to play in the water Chapter 2 Waiting for the rescued person at point b, mentality water Chapter 2 A arrived at the battlefield, meaningless nonsense water Chapter 1 Endless water... Very water... Chapters written purely for the sake of water. I rather like this novel, it's too watery. I was very angry and uncomfortable when I saw it. Forget it, whoever wants to watch it can watch it.

I have seen more than 200 of them, but I still keep saying that everyone treats the protagonist as a retarded cheater or a cheater, and looks down on him and wants to hunt him down. No, bro, are you better than the cheater in the game? What do you want to do if you are there to chase him? Didn't you just kowtow and beg for mercy when you see Brother Gua? Don't kill me? And isn't it that the B-level described in the description of the Uneasy Land is so high, and then the protagonist's points in the competition area are thousands of times ahead of the second place. The harvest in the Uneasy Land is several levels higher than others, and is also chased by the God of Uneasy. What normal people understand is that you win hundreds of thousands in the lottery or get something that is rare for ordinary people. How did you get to the protagonist who is ahead of all kinds of spiritual princes? What kind of hidden top power elites can also say that other people think that the protagonist picked up the leaks? Can you become the richest man in the world if you pick up the leaks? Can you become an Olympic champion? Can you win first place in the Olympics? Every time I see that passerby narration, I feel sick and have to complain.

It's two hundred chapters, and I really don't want to read it. The realm, strength, and power are unclear. Moreover, it doesn't reflect the impact of the game on the world, but it is written in such a way that it feels like it won't work if I don't play it. . .

I just want to laugh when I think of the main character's body still lying in the game cabin.

I have been raising so many people saying you are stupid, what should I do? Do I want to scold you too?

What makes me most uncomfortable about this book is that almost all low-sequence characters think that Su Buxian is lucky. Brothers, let's think about it carefully. Even if you think that a very famous person is difficult to live up to, shouldn't you still be highly vigilant before contacting him? Can you do this step of Su Buxian? Most of the bottom sequences can't, so why are they all so confident and can easily take advantage of Su Buxian? Everyone talks about having experienced bloody battles and cruel eliminations, don't they have any awe of the unknown? It's better to patch it later. In fact, Su Buxian also has an ability, the intelligence-lowering halo, which can proportionally reduce the intelligence of nearby hostile elements. Except for this, which really made me a little disappointed, the author is very slow to update. I spent two months saving and finished reading it in more than an hour 😭😭😭

The author deliberately suppresses the protagonist's combat power. He doesn't even fight at all. He always makes some characters so that the protagonist can't beat him. How to weaken the boss in various ways and add restrictions, but the protagonist is always able to restrain him. It feels too stupid.

This author is really a talent. The protagonist of a novel can make you write such a wonderful story. Also, authors should never write about a heroine. When writing a heroine, you must write an emotional line. This emotional line is a big pit. If it is written well, it will be fine. If it is not written well, it is estimated that 30% of people will not write the book. You are the first person in a Mugenliu novel with this theme to make a protagonist so funny and invincible. But there are also many similar writing styles that are all focused on the heroine. Because writing a heroine or emotional line requires a certain amount of skills. Don't be obtrusive, don't be too pretentious, don't hold anything back, and don't be too crooked. It's like walking on a tightrope and walking on the edge of a knife, and then someone asks you to dance on the edge of the knife and tells you tongue twisters. The kind that can't make a single mistake. If you make a mistake, you will die. So don't write about a female protagonist. Ninety-nine percent of fan fiction or unlimited fiction falls on this heroine. Because he couldn't write well at all, he was criticized and criticized by others, and he had a bit of a mysophobia and gave up the book on the spot.

At first I thought this was a good grass

I can read the front part, but I can't stand the back part at all. The starting point is really bad. After the free chapters, the quality plummets. This is the case with many books.

If I had known earlier, I wouldn't have spent money to watch the ending. It's not as good as it seems! It's better to just let him become a god and everything return to its original state!

It was so funny that I saved 300 chapters of money.

The first one to appear is the Black Shadow Legion Ganwen Cui, Then is Brother Starfish [Pat Star], Finally is Brother Cat~