I Can Draw Templates of Marvel Heroes

I read the first few chapters, and I felt the setting was really bad. Superheroes in a world where cultivation is possible just feel out of place. If you're strong now, will you still be strong after ten or so chapters?

Yes, I thought it was direct inheritance. ™ There are still tasks to complete.

Will you be as saintly as Superman and Spider-Man?

Every time I see the town government portrayed as weak while the corporation is portrayed as powerful, I feel speechless. It's not like America; in any country with even a hint of Chinese influence, it's not the corporation that's become so dominant. I suggest you start a new story.

These days, how twisted and dark are your hearts? Was it because you had an unhappy childhood? Why is it that when someone has the ability to do a good deed or show a little kindness, you call them a saint? Your own hearts are dark and twisted, that's all. You can't even stand seeing others do good things.

Honestly, it's ridiculous that a hero hasn't shown all of their abilities for so long. Giving them more abilities is pointless; it's better to specialize in just one. And where are you going to find so much evil to exploit in one city? Plus, they're all fixed abilities; they won't grow. What level of ability extraction is used for mutants like Magneto, Cyclops, and Apocalypse?

I tried it out, how should I put it? The author has many ideas, and the book is readable, but it has some issues. The protagonist's self-introduction using the Spider-Man template—not the friendly neighbor Spider-Man, nor the talkative Spider-Man—is understandable and minor.

The beginning was fine, but chapter 22 suddenly started to show a complete lack of intelligence and became extremely toxic.

The beginning was fine, but after 60 images, it started to feel increasingly awkward.

... Author, why don't you take a look at the Spider-Man lore? 😰