Daming Escaped to Me

I have to say that the author's imagination is very powerful. He can think of Ming ➕ Warhammer, but the identity of the protagonist is still too embarrassing. Once he does something, even if it is beneficial to the country and the people, it will be misinterpreted by those in the cabinet.

In fact, it should be included, fantasy novels are better.

With subspace technology, if you don't cultivate and develop it to stimulate internal circulation changes, then f2A will go up. What's the point of playing there? The Chinese captain will go to the East with his left and the West with his right. If you are in a hurry, just rebel directly. If you are not in a hurry, just play it as a strategic game. What's the point of going to the West? Doing business? Make money? Enlighten people's wisdom? To open the eyes of the people of Ming Dynasty? What's the point of being Machiavellian? If you don't want to be a master, just brainwash and hypnotize yourself, and go out directly with an epoch-making warship and a 3-meter-armored army of big guys, wouldn't it be better than what you are doing now? Everyone is here to see you use Warhammer elements to form an organization and ravage the world. I have written two or three volumes and I am still working on something I don't know. The design of the anti-Japanese war was extremely sloppy, and now I want to go to the West to open the country. Brother, can you position yourself clearly? You are here to destroy traditional history and make the article more enjoyable, not to join them. Let us watch this There are some old things that can be found in any good history book, such as "Let the emperor steal hundreds of millions from the central government, let the Western barbarians understand the vastness and magnificence of the eighteen provinces of Han Dynasty, admire the advanced centralization of the Central Plains dynasty, and marvel at the cunning and mellow astonishing wisdom of my wealthy landlords in doing business." Can the above points be regarded as the points of a hammer novel? After two or three volumes, I improved the gunpowder, rolled a small ball, made a hang glider, a sailboat, and a Chinese captain (the most difficult thing to do). He didn't even have enough to eat for the common people, so he was ready to take the tenants of the Ge Lao family to go out and proudly puff out his chest?

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Could you please stop writing those limericks? Sick?

There is really no need to write an end-of-chapter poem. 90% Of people who have written it will not read it, and it also exposes the fact that the author cannot write poetry at all.

When I saw the introduction, I thought it was about climbing the science and technology tree, using black technology to go to the universe. Who knew that when I clicked into the text, it ended up being a cultivator?

After reading two pages, I was dissuaded by the poem at the end. Although it was very elegant... But I came to read the novel for entertainment, not to study poetry and sentence construction. One or two sentences are enough, but it is so long... It is too inconsistent with modern people's reading habits.

Someone told me that the poem at the end of the chapter seemed unfamiliar. Starting from the second volume, I no longer write poems at the end of chapters, and I have more time to elaborate on the plot and come up with ideas.

Silver Big Guy, Black and Red Big Guy, Daming Shenji Camp

Ah! When I read the introduction, I thought it was about traveling through the Ming Dynasty, pushing across the earth, and then heading towards all realms. As a result, the protagonist is a feudal king, and he can only rely on mathematics, physics and chemistry to leverage some "Tao". It is not at all the so-called great power attributed to the body or the dynasty pushing forward with one word and one mind being the will of heaven.

How many Imperial Guards can you shake from Old Man Huang to push the Earth flat? What mysterious idea

This is a good idea, but the writing is half-written, and it makes me confused, half-understood, and confused.

I feel uncomfortable watching it. Is this for ancient people or for modern people? The writing is still in vain.

The sky is full of water, and there is nothing to say. The six names have neither personal characteristics nor independent plots, but they are mentioned again and again. The beginning of the book is completely different from the last dozen chapters. The author has probably changed. A studio article again.

How many chapters has this gone into? I don't see any plot at all.

Author, if you don't change your writing style, other readers will definitely slip away like the title of your book. Either two-thirds of a chapter will be popular science or all of it will be popular science. Popular science, popular science, or TMD popular science.

No, those poems really make me unable to stand

If you delete those poems, the book will be better.

Was it already two years ago?