From Ratman to God King of War

This book is extremely strange and awkward! Why? Because I want to write the history of the Skaven into an epic, that is, a legend. I also wanted to mix the embarrassing experience of the protagonist with it! But this is very contradictory! The protagonist's situation determines that he cannot let the rat man develop on his own! But for the sake of the author, the literary youth wants him to have miracles and heroes! For example, the Craftsman's Heart clearly needs weapons at this time. In order to create characters and create an epic feeling, the author had to be discovered and used by a ratman. In short, the author made too many accidents in order to shape and portray the character, but the protagonist's situation makes it difficult for the Rat Man to let himself go (that is, to maintain his aloofness), so it seems that the protagonist is a fool, but the protagonist has never been a fool, so who is? Of course, the author's writing style is great and I like it very much, but there is something wrong with your idea.

I feel that the writing is a bit awkward. The writing is obviously good, and the protagonist is completely useless. Shen Zhiwen needs adventure, but he also needs farming planning. Surprises should be born in the protagonist's plan, rather than the protagonist being surprised and making a false alarm. It is a blessing rather than a disaster. Moreover, for a second generation, dragons and beasts have been taken out. Yalong can still accept it. Is he able to have a giant dragon without wisdom?

1. Let us be grateful to the messenger in black. Because it was he who built the towering Dark Tower, which has since housed the sacred bell. 2. Since then, the light that exudes darkness has continued to take root in this land 3. Thanks to his grace, the chosen ones have grown sacred horns. 4. Since then, the chosen ones have been working day and night to understand those dirty and cruel philosophies in depth. 5. They strive to have all the neat and tidy stupidity purified by the sacred clutter. 6. Let us be grateful and take care of the female rats he has given us. They can allow selfishness and offspring to grow uncontrollably and die uncontrollably. 7. The thinking he gave us allows madness to be displayed sincerely and continuously. 8. The gem that shines with bright green light in the dark gives us the ability to spread pollution and be polluted. 9. In the continuous reincarnation, the Chosen One teaches his followers to prove his existence and to be evil and unbearable. 10. Teach our compatriots whose life and death are insignificant to feel their own insignificance. 11. Let the incense burner carrying germs wander around the world day after day. 12. Deeply realize that death and survival are the eternal symptoms of us rats. 13. Unity! Because the horned rat will surely walk among us! Yesyes!

This is a novel that I like very much. It truly feels like a Rat Man epic The Rat Man has the advantages of having many people and all the shortcomings except having too many people. So how to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses? A god provides faith and strength to integrate the rat people There are many rat people, so we don't treat the low-level rat people as human beings, and directly turn them into fuel for the advancement of the rat empire. At the same time, relying on faith to achieve the most basic unity of the rat people A major feature of this book is that the protagonist, as a god, rarely interferes with the rat people. The protagonist is more like a symbol of the rat people's desires, so the rat people worship the protagonist very much But this is the shortcoming. When the rat people entered the universe and colonized the planet, I knew that this book was going to collapse. The Rat People need a hero/tyrant to lead them, but after entering the universe, the requirements for a hero/tyrant are extremely high. Ruling an empire and ruling the universe are not the same concepts. And obviously the author can no longer describe a character who is qualified for this position In the early stage, the author arranged for a god-chosen high priest + army commander to rule/command the operation of the rat kingdom and the battle of the army. But in the universe period, the older generation of heroes has passed away, who in the new generation can take on this responsibility. Similarly, in the universe period, who is worthy of being the enemy of the Rat Man In summary, the Rat Man is suitable for rolling in the mud with the enemy, dragging the enemy to the same level as himself. The universe should not be a place where rat people can set foot

You can refer to the Skaven. There is a plague and you can choose to develop technology.

Rat man? I suggest Skaven here. Yes! Yes! Poison, assassination, technology. Biology. Frontal combat

It looked good at first, and it was good to write something epic with this style of writing, but it became more and more difficult later on. Generally speaking, it would be on the eve of unification or the decisive battle with the quilboar before it was released. But now, even if you fight a lizard, there will be a dragon from nowhere to cause trouble. Isn't it interesting? Even your writing style becomes more and more confusing and boring. I didn't know where the divine eye came from before, it was inexplicable.

First of all, he deliberately suppressed the protagonist. Secondly, the protagonist didn't write clearly about the work of the Evil God Chamber of Commerce. The author wrote about a hammer here and a broom here and there. It's a mess. You can't say that it's a big jump. He just wrote wherever he thought!

In fact, it can be written with reference to the medieval Warhammer Skaven

After reading it for one day and 200 chapters, it didn't feel like a divine story at all. There were no college competitions, no adventures, not many divine domain cards loaded, and no divine domain development (there was only a small plane where all the students were), and there was no manifestation of the power of the gods. It neither understood the laws and priesthood, nor paid attention to and guided the dependents. The priesthood was not reflected, and there was absolutely nothing written about the murderous priesthood. It's so special. The protagonist in the article is completely invisible and has no idea what he is doing. Especially after the priesthood is confirmed, he falls into a deep sleep. The author writes two sentences about his incarnation when he thinks of it. It feels like he is waiting for the race to pull him to become a god. It is more like a group drama. Except that the dependents are more novel, it is completely a story about the rise of a fantasy race. The protagonist has no use anymore. He has not appeared as many times as the supporting characters. I can't remember the name of the protagonist after reading it.