The Trials of Qingqiu

Are you handsome?

I just read the first five chapters, the writing is good and the plot needs to be polished Including but not limited to: The introduction of Xinyi's name is too abrupt The curling name is unnecessary The princess calls herself an orphan, which is a bit strange Characters with names should be introduced with a brief introduction, such as Chuncheng, and characters that have no impact on the plot can be unnamed The emperor said that it is a bit awkward to divide the country Is the giant python still female? Isn't the princess seven years old? She doesn't speak like she is seven years old Shouldn't the princess wonder how Ru Song knew about the beast tamer? The princess survived the assassination, shouldn't it be the author of this online article who traveled through time? You should write about your experience after time travel from a first-person perspective, whether you have any previous memories, and why the author of this online article likes Ru Song. Wait until you read a few more chapters before commenting

The characterization in the novel is excellent, with unique personalities and characteristics, and the author is also very good at describing details, making the whole story more real. There is no poisonous point to get into!

Old fans have come to follow it. It has strong appeal, delicate emotions, twists and turns in the story, and a tight rhythm. The first chapter makes people want to stop! A good book will be popular. The new book "Family Cultivation of Immortality: Rebirth in the Monster Farm"

Come on, come on, take this opportunity to self-recommend the book "Douluo: I Am Tang Wulin"

Occupied my own sofa🤫

It's very interesting. I was so happy when I saw the dialogue between the fox and the snake. It was so interesting. I kept chasing it.

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What should be done about this? Who doesn't want a story about a heroine to turn into a story about a heroine? Wry smile

There was a section in the middle that I found very painful to write, but later on I felt a little better and finally managed to separate the fates of the four male protagonists! It feels like the beginning is really full of flaws and the characters are all cohesive. In the later stages, everyone will have things they fear and things they value. I remember once reading such a passage. Readers will not like a character because of a good-looking resume. They will only judge his character background because of his personal charm and his choices, and then like him based on whether he has feelings for himself. Therefore, every time I set up a character, I try to avoid the kind of setting that is the best in the world, a noble person, let alone the kind of tall, majestic and upright character. My characters will grow up bit by bit. Like us, they all have different experiences in life. Keep searching for your true nature How can you know what kind of person you are until you get to the end? Therefore, I hope that dear readers, whether they are there or not, can see their changes and their steps of constantly searching for themselves through their step-by-step exploration. For example, he was cowardly in his childhood, reckless in his youth, and brave in his youth. He was also a crying boy. Although he eventually became a greedy and fearful person, he was righteous throughout his life and never did anything that went against the country. For example, Jing Mo, who looks carefree on the surface, seems to be a comedian, but is actually the most tragic character in the book. He always remembers his promise and silently accompanies the heroine so that she is no longer lonely. He shoulders a mission, but is unwilling to sacrifice innocent people for the mission. He firmly believes that people can change their own destiny, and finally passed this spirit to the heroine. He embodies my greatest resistance and persistence to the world and to the fatalism in Western philosophy. For example, Tu Shansong, who has always had a vague personality and is a bit timid, this handsome man who has been gloomy from his childhood to his youth (forgive me for calling him so bluntly, hahaha, after all, he did only have this setting in the early stage), for a person with little status, It doesn't matter what opinions he has. For a person with little ability, no one cares about what he wants to do. Therefore, for a long time, he seemed to be a little transparent, occupying the throne of the so-called male protagonist, with a bad personality, and nothing outstanding, which is quite unpleasant! An official once commented that even if it is a plot with a female protagonist, readers will not like a weak and incompetent male protagonist. Only truly outstanding men can win the favor of readers. No one's charm will be revealed when they are attached to others. Therefore, I arranged for him to go back to the place where he should go back. I gave him time and space to grow into the person he really should be. This process is inevitably long. Maybe it is because I am self-conscious. Having read too much traditional literature, I still comfort myself that a good work requires a certain amount of patience. It requires the author to have more patience to describe it, and it also requires the reader to have more patience to wait, but people don't know and are not stunned, so I will just let it go with my patience here. Finally, looking at my own work, I feel that the heroine is really superfluous, haha. As a bystander, I didn't think too much about her character. People are blind to themselves, and the only choice is to listen to the reader. As for the regret that I didn't form a cp with some outstanding male characters, my understanding is that there are always encounters in life, and it doesn't have to be in love to make them perfect. Yours sincerely, Jubilee Sishui