
Sprint: This Champion Is a Bit Weird
短跑:这位冠军有点怪
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sporting Events
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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What you wrote this time was more rigorous and professional than last time! The world's first non-black to break the 10-second record was Australia's Patrick Johnson in 2003 with a time of 9.93! ! !
Change the cover
I have no problem with you writing about the entertainment industry. If you want to open a harem, I will also host a single. The heroine you choose is Zhang Jialin. What the hell are Karen Mok and Jane Zhang good-looking? Is there no choice? There are a lot of good-looking people in the entertainment industry. I just say that the author is really hungry. Also, Emma chose a girl to be the heroine. How is her face now?
It turns out that the free chapters are the pinnacle of this book. I think the author made a misunderstanding. He desperately wanted the theme of the book to be non-monotonous, but he didn't have the writing power, which resulted in nondescript content. You have to understand that the things you wrote during this period are better than the entertainment articles I randomly clicked on. You have lost the watermelon and picked up the sesame seeds. Let's take a look at the updated titles in the past few days. If it were still some watery and weakly written entertainment content, I think there would be no need to continue following this book.
Like this book, the biggest flaw is the writing about women. Obviously, athletes are pretty good at it, but women are just awkward to write about. If you don't have that kind of writing skills, just go to the entertainment department and learn from it.
Sports writing or harem writing?
I'm really numb. Sports article, brother, this is sports article. You can accept having sex with women occasionally, but now you have sex with women every day, right? What you wrote earlier was quite good, but now you are in trouble and can't write a normal sports article other than having sex with women, right? In the end, after reading the tenth chapter, I still looked like this and closed it.
I can't stand it when I see Mok Wenwei. There are so many actresses and they insist on writing about a huge ugly one. She sings well but it sounds good. But she really can't accept it. The author's aesthetics is really awesome.
Can there be chapter markings about women, or chapters about running? Thank you. Please do not mix the two contents with each other. Thank you, otherwise it will be easy to get nauseated when subscribing.
Of these recent chapters, only one is related to sprinting. . . This is a girl-hunting novel covered in a sprinter's skin, and it is undoubtedly a stone hammer.
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The free chapter has a good description of emotions. After it was released, the chapters started to mess around. The first chapter was innocent for a while, and then turned to the animal world. If you want to start, just say it generously. It feels like you have to finish the formalities after the beginning.
I regretted it as soon as I subscribed to the part on the shelves. If the author wants to write a sentimental protagonist, there is no need to find an innocent heroine. He can just start in Europe and the United States or in the entertainment industry. The first heroine was described so perfectly, and then after a big victory, instead of sharing the joy with this perfect heroine, he immediately found a promiscuous and poisonous European and American heroine to be happy. This immediately destroyed all the good plots that had been laid out before. Currently, I feel that the level of plot design before and after it is released is too different. The protagonist can have many shortcomings, but it is obvious that the author did not let go in the early stage of writing and still wanted to create a perfect protagonist. Then the protagonist's character will become worse and worse later, and readers will definitely not buy it.
This sports book is okay at the beginning, but then it turns into a scumbag article? Abandoned. 🤔
If your culture and style bloom, then your style and style will bloom. What kind of flowers are you blooming in bed all the time? Every day you are either in bed or on your way to bed. You are both literary and artistic. What kind of writing is yours? I'm really convinced, why are you insisting on persisting? You can write more about participating in activities, singing, holding a concert, etc. There are so many entertainment things, but you have no friends in daily life. Why are you not worthy of being friends with a man? Or are you so lacking in women? , I either pick up girls or pick up girls every day. You must be in two minds, A Xi.
You have to be careful when choosing a girl. You have to choose someone who is similar to the older sister. The ones you choose later don't match well! Half of my desire to watch it was gone. I wonder if it's because of the different taste! 😰
Avatar picture, super beautiful sister
Original picture of Lin Yoona's avatar
The system seems a bit weak. Since it is a system, it must be strong.
What do you write about every day? If you are either doing it or on the way to it, why don't you do something else? What a hell you did this article, I won't order it if I see it everyday
Is the innocent persona set up in the front just for you to slap yourself in the face later? It has attracted a large number of readers who like single female protagonists and like Zhang, but you started to slap yourself in the face and become a scumbag after just a few pictures were released? ! Re-screening readers, right? Then you succeeded, farewell!
It's so sudden. I'm really convinced. What about the Olympics? Oh, let me go. You can finish writing about the Olympics in Eunuch.
Yuyu, you are so disappointing! Two bad eunuch books in a row! 😤
No, you finally finished writing about the Beijing Olympics. I'm convinced too.
It's not that I won't let you go about your daily routine, it's just that you have too many of them. It's okay to insert one chapter in the middle of a dozen chapters, but don't appear in large numbers. I turned it on to automatically subscribe. Scrolling down is a daily routine. Opening the table of contents and looking at the next chapter is also a daily routine. I am very speechless. The most important thing is that he also ordered 😡😡😡😡
You can write about daily life, as a seasoning after competitions, but you have written too much, right? There are already more than a dozen pictures, and they are still used daily. I am convinced.
There is no problem for the author to change his writing style. Zhang Zilin is indeed very beautiful, but as a heroine of online novels, she is still somewhat lacking in popularity. Moreover, the author said that you wanted to write more about daily life, but you tried too hard. You wrote for the sake of daily life, and the passionate protagonist was turned into a rotten person.
I'm really convinced. If you don't know how to write daily articles, then stop writing. Your daily articles are about picking up foreign women. If you're not convinced, you can do one after another. I read Chapter 105 and had two, and then you just use women for entertainment in daily life.
Copying songs makes me feel very poisonous! Unexpectedly, the emotional drama was even more toxic, the heroine was indifferent, and her daily routine was boring.
Just let me cast my 500th monthly vote.