I Have a Game Factory

It takes a long time to create a game with more than 30 chapters. If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about it. How about just starting with the background of an orphan. I have to jump through more than 30 chapters. Only a few of them are about games and the feelings of players. Can you make it clear that you are writing about games, not about love and entrepreneurship.

It is recommended that if you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't write about it and write about the game properly, otherwise it will be easy to not watch it.

I read your book just for the game. In just a few chapters, how many women did you count? Moreover, your emotional scenes are not very good, and these female characters don't feel necessary. Why can't you concentrate on writing the game plot?

After seeing Chapter 40, I really can't stand it anymore. A game company, after almost half a year of development, has already produced Plants vs. Zombies and Chicken Dinner?? Chicken Dinner has not been launched yet, but there are a lot of women. I think one or two female protagonists are enough. After all, your main line is the company, and the college entrance examination is also a failure. Also, Since this is a world with a shortage of games, why not create more small productions?? I can guess the main plot without you writing it. Next, the chicken game will be online, pick up girls while playing, and then there will be Resident Evil. How many games will it take to create a single game platform? 40 Chapters, and only a few descriptions of the company, most of them They are all daily stories about picking up girls, with five female protagonists, two of whom are faced with being raped because they have no money, and the protagonist is a hero who saves a beauty? Isn't that disgusting? The author must have been writing novels about heroes before, right? Apart from the different way of getting money, the rest is no different from copying. What I said at the beginning is that I have been an otaku for thirty years, have a lot of gaming experience, and have strength. , The result?? The first game system is sent intact, and the subsequent steam and chicken games are all done directly by system NPCs. The protagonist has any sense of participation???

I didn't grasp the rhythm well before, and there were a little too many emotional scenes. I'm sorry, I will modify the rhythm later! The rest are mainly game-related. Excessive daily routine! Thanks to book friends for their corrections and criticisms!

I can only say that the more a person lacks something, the more powerful he becomes. Let's talk about the male protagonist? Time travel and rebirth, with its own system, there are two beautiful and outrageous women who are childhood sweethearts, and they save one from the teacher with a bodhisattva heart, and then save the other from the live broadcast company, all relying on the system. Then, you are still a top student. After reviewing, you can go to the university of your choice? Oh, he is also a master of chicken eating. Two of his childhood sweethearts are also masters of chicken eating. Chicken Start the game by yourself, and win the chicken game champion by yourself. What else do you need other extras for? If you make your own game, do you still have the nerve to participate in a competition of your own game? Do you, the author, dare to show me your losses while eating chicken? What? A competition where you write and create a game and form your own team to play your own game. How about just awarding the championship to yourself? Than what? When game developers participate in their own games, are they really playing professionally? Are you here to write about game creation? Or are you here to write about the professional league? Oh, you are here to write "My harem is not only beautiful but also capable of everything"

I bought a copy of Plants vs. Zombies for RMB 58, but I still don't have the habit of spending money on games. Other games at the same time sold for less than double digits.

I watched it in one sitting, leaving aside the emotional drama, and it was so satisfying! The writing is smooth, the plot is okay, the pace is good, and the characters are also somewhat reflected. There were some poisonous things in the past, such as parents, such as the monitor... Maybe the author wanted to create a happy atmosphere, but now it seems a bit too much, and it is not easy to substitute. As for parents, readers actually feel that the sense of immersion is very poor. In one sentence: What does the protagonist's parents have to do with me? If I want to take on the role of the protagonist, I have to be "beaten and scolded" by two unfamiliar characters? So there are mostly orphans in the starting point. But it's okay, just jump over. Overall, skip the previous poison, it is worth watching.

Do you want to include the latest hit game, Phantom Beast Parlu? It's really fun 😆

If you like content other than the Momoji game, you can skip one chapter. If you just like to watch the development and operation of the game, I recommend skipping to chapter 50. It has basically no impact, so I canceled it.

This update is at 8 o'clock every day, on time.

The bloody plot of missing the exam, the female supporting role was also killed by the plot and missed the exam. She relied on the college entrance examination to change her destiny.

Stop worrying about the broken game console and screen, update the Resident Evil release as soon as possible! 😡

It's well written. Although Plants vs. Zombies is a bit long, it's pretty good. I look forward to the follow-up PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds and other games.

Update it quickly, author, you don't realize it! ! ! !

There is a bit of literary youthfulness, which will still affect the perception. I hope there will be no smart shut-down operations in the future...

Why do you, a game maker, need a stuntman?

Why is every protagonist so miserable?

It's obviously a game novel, but you give me a harem

I'm really impressed by your update. Who can keep waiting for an update like this? There's not even a hot update.

With your update speed, if you wait a day to push a little plot, the number of words will only be that much, right?

I know why the creative writing is good but the results seem to be poor. The female character in Chapter 8 gave me a great, great, great disgust. It's not that she disgusted me, on the contrary, I especially sympathized with this kind of girl. Because of my sympathy, I probably expected that this girl would be with the male protagonist after being rescued. When there was such a good childhood sweetheart in front of me, I felt that it was terrible to let this girl go. I was reluctant to let her go and felt that it was because of PUA that she escaped from one sea of suffering to another called Xiaosan. Her existence itself is a character that makes me feel uncomfortable physically and psychologically. This is the reason why I began to reject many female protagonists more and more after reading novels for many years. Don't talk about rescuing the woman. The woman is just a paragraph about being your mistress or something like that. The novel gives such a long space, but in the end nothing happens to her, so why write about her? Do you want to use her length to make more money from us, or do you want to win the Mao Dun Literary Award to reflect the depth of literature? I think my three views are still positive. Coming from this modern education system, I can't take things like cheating and raising a mistress as a matter of course. And I think not only myself, but also the heroine in the novel must have self-respect. Love yourself instead of being a mistress. This in itself is an attribute that greatly reduces the inner charm of the character. Therefore, I can accept multiple female protagonists in ancient times. This is how people were taught in ancient times. But I, who have a modern urban background, cannot accept it at all. It looks awkward.