The Journey of a Heroine Starting from the Dragon Clan

This book has been ordered since its release. As a cloud player, I didn't expect the author to actually write about Yu-Gi-Oh! But as I chewed and chewed, I realized that the food tasted wrong, and finally I stopped spitting it out, so I would like to give some suggestions to the author from my perspective. Of course - it's just my opinion. If you support it, please give it a thumbs up. If you don't agree, please leave your opinion. Let's get down to the topic: First of all, the book is well written and to my liking, otherwise I wouldn't have followed it up to this point. But looking at the current 5Ds article, I don't know whether it's because of the decline in performance or because the dual game has distracted the author's energy. I clearly feel that the author is getting more and more biased as he writes. I wonder if the author has ever thought about what factors make readers keep reading the author's books? Perhaps 'be more cool and look forward to it' will be the standard answer for many people. In fact, my answer is pretty much the same - I think it is dramatic. What is drama? Unexpected developments and interesting plots are generally like this. It would be more intuitive to explain it using the author's works. I remember reading "Personal Heroine" n years ago, so I recently read through the beginning of the author's works. The opening plot of "Asura Field Players" is very well written. The original protagonist, a scumbag who dated more than a dozen girlfriends in the eyes of ordinary people, was transported by the protagonist and accidentally helped the heroine exorcise the spirit, so he was tricked into becoming a boss by the heroine. Then the heroine, ghosts, and relevant departments all started to pull around the protagonist's waistcoat. This kind of development made me look forward to the follow-up. This is a drama that is well created by using information gaps. The opening chapter of the spiritual sequel "Doomsday Players" is all about the settings. What is the end of the world, what are the people of the doomsday, skills, paths, and unique professions? The game is full of gameplay, and there is no sense of doomsday crisis. Big head... This kind of development is written as an explanatory text, and there is no dramatic development. Sorry... I really can't chew this kind of thing. Back to this book, which is the true sequel to the unique heroine: I have never read the original versions of Dragon Clan and Shana. But the Dragon Clan Chapter is undoubtedly the best written. It is long and many characters have separate plots. Except for a certain passerby Zero... All have character arcs of supporting characters. You can clearly feel what kind of impact the protagonist has on them, what kind of changes they have made, and what different actions they have because of the protagonist. This is very dramatic. After the main goal of the pure white heart was clarified, this direction changed. Entering the Shana chapter, it gradually turned into Mu Qingzhi's personal show. Although there are many interesting things in this world, the only character that can really be remembered is Shana, who plays opposite her. (Because Shana is called the Shakugan in this world...) Similar to the personality problem of the heroine, after going to Noragami, her personality inexplicably changed from a young Karami to a Kannakata... Or a god? (It's been so long that I can't remember) This book is almost written like this. I don't know which chapter after which the protagonist's status suddenly became high, high, high. I started to distance myself from the characters in the new chapter. The identity I used was fake and the purpose was fake. It was difficult to have in-depth interaction. In a world crisis or something, the characters in the new chapter just need to lie down. The protagonist is always busy doing things, and in the end it is the protagonist who escapes to death and is moved. You must know that sincerity can be exchanged for sincerity... This is also the reason why readers will come out and say they still want to see dragon characters as the new chapter is being written. It does not integrate into the atmosphere of the protagonist team of the new chapter. There is another point that I find more uncomfortable, that is, this book does not have a real climax, but it should have. In the Shana chapter, Mu Qingzhi was fully prepared to become the evil in this world, and the foreshadowing was sufficient. I originally thought that we could see the two sides working together to fight against the Lich King Zhi from the inside out, but it turned out that everything was over as soon as Shana woke up. The Black King who can destroy the world when he wakes up, the final boss is suddenly replaced by the abyss, invincible! Stronger than the Black King! Mu Qingzhi was fully prepared, but she blew herself up as soon as they met face to face. Wow, author, why do you always lay the groundwork so well before the climax, but then you just throw away the outline when it comes to the main scene, and it's a disaster? How about the author read the first volume of "Who Hide My Body" on the list and learn from others' explosive points... I originally wanted to persuade the author to arrange a better ending for the 5ds ending, but now it seems that this article is already a dead end. Let's finally come to the main point, the 5ds chapter with the worst data loss and the one I want to complain about the most: The characterization in this chapter is a disaster, many plots jump like an outline. The reason why the protagonist seeks Brother Crab (Fudo Yusei) is because the duel elves are looking for a savior. The main plot should be Brother Crab's appearance, and Mu Qingzhi becomes the grandfather who opens the seal card for him, but playing cards is still firmly locked to Mu Qingzhi - using the identity of the Duel Elf. Basically all the card games that are not the protagonist are passed, and not playing cards in King of Cards is about 0 shaping, so you get the passerby Brother Crab and the rest of the pure passers-by. Of course I understand why the author didn't write it, because there is still some data when writing about daily life, but all is lost when writing about playing cards. Why? Now we have to talk about the audience of Yu-Gi-Oh! The audience of Yu-Gi-Oh must have been exposed to the derivative works of Yu-Gi-Oh, whether they are animation parties, game parties, or real card parties, but in the final analysis, these people are all ignorant of how to play Yu-Gi-Oh. Therefore, fan authors who directly write about Yu-Gi-Oh don't need to, and won't go out of their way to write down the underlying rules. Yu-Gi-Oh players are like this. The author only needs to write down the card game fiercely, but the players have to type the three words Yu-Gi-Oh in the search box. So inspiring! Of course, the above situation has basically nothing to do with the author of this book... Your book cannot be found in Yu-Gi-Oh! The direct audience of your 5ds article is not Yu-Gi-Oh players, but dragon readers based on the title of the book. He is a Yu-Gi-Oh player sifted from the Dragon Clan fans. Even Yu-Gi-Oh players who are sifted out from the Dragon Clan fans and are Shana fans! ! ! So it is very important that other readers who are exposed to Yu-Gi-Oh for the first time can also understand Yu-Gi-Oh! The focus of the first duel should be to explain the underlying rules concisely, at least to make it clear what can and should be done at which stage in a round. But the author focuses on various complex card effects, or original cards... I feel so brain-stricken just reading it, or do you think you will carefully read the skill instructions of each character in each game? Dragon readers can't even understand the first scene, so there's no need to read the rest because everyone has finished. The focus of Yu-Gi-Oh is dueling. How to write a duel that most people can understand? For example: You, the author of "Game of Life", have definitely seen it. The chess played by the protagonist [Blank] in the King Selection Battle has nothing to do with chess, but does it not prevent people who do not understand the rules from watching it happily and full of drama? Language confrontation, delaying time, winning by surprise... It was a textbook game. Not to mention playing cards and spinning tops can also destroy the world. The protagonist cannot appear in the play. The story is far greater than the logic. The same applies to Yu-Gi-Oh! The key point is to arouse the audience's emotions. If you don't understand the purpose of both parties, add a psychological description. If you don't understand the situation, add an off-site commentary. The passer-by and the old man watching the game of cards are actually not watching the game of cards, but the game between the two parties. The structure written by the author is too dry. It is purely about playing cards. Once the game starts, both parties only see playing cards. All operations are playing cards. The dialogue only explains the effect, and there are no unnecessary operations. It is simply beyond the top Mingjing Shisui's heart! Playing cards is written too harshly, and the key point is not grasped. What we are looking at is not what you call out and then play. Storytellers are the most boring people. What real players see is the reverse chain, while passers-by see the dramatic effect. Just like the B-station Yu-Gi-Oh! Ups, they will consciously speed up or skip the storytelling stage, and finally tell you how awesome the last few big brothers are. Then with a "pop", several of your elder brothers were eaten by the opponent and turned into eggs with 0 attack and 0 defense. Isn't this very dramatic? In a wonderful game, both parties need to hide the card effects from each other. The effects only say the ones used. Rare cards are always explained when the opponent steps on them. This creates an information gap. It is very important to only tell the effect when using it, or only show the effect from your own God's perspective! It is a great pleasure to rely on the information gap to break the opponent's defense. On the other hand, Mu Qingzhi always activates a card and explains all the effects once, which seriously reduces points. The bloated text of one page and one paragraph also loses the information gap. With the lack of dramatic conflicts, the plot becomes dry. Even if the author's original card effect should be hidden, it must be hidden, because there is no difference. In addition to the commonly used original cards, we are also blind. There are more than 20,000 cards in Yu-Gi-Oh! There is no need to talk too much about the development of the game, but it should be concise. The mobs that have appeared many times are omitted except for their names (such as offensive and defensive card effects, appearances, etc.). The mobs used as springboards are less inscribed, and the trump cards are detailed. Just talk about the effects of the scene after the two sides unfolded. The focus should still be on the combat stage and writing down the tactical purposes of both sides. Psychological reactions, complaints, explanations, and the effects that some small combos can achieve. You can also write down the audience's reaction, your partners' shock, etc. Appropriately. How to write a dramatic duel? The underworld deck is definitely the most representative. The so-called duel in the underworld that the author begins in Chapter 24 is really sunshine. The Maybach Viaduct can at best make the dragon readers smile, but it is not the real underworld. The underworld is not about having 5 blocks in the backcourt. It is not about the opponent inflicting damage on you and rebounding, the opponent summoning you to be ineffective, the opponent attacking you and destroying it, and then adding a "..." To the opponent when you are done. It is the underworld. The core is to break the opponent's mentality and destroy the opponent's game experience. Not allowing the opponent to play Yu-Gi-Oh, allowing the opponent to break defense and twist is the right way to the underworld. You have to write about your opponent's mentality from being proud to struggling to collapse... On this basis, the simpler the card effect, the better. What is the effect of writing it out? Ahem... I am the King of Strong Mouth. I have never written an article, but I will try my best to simulate it: "Duel!!! " [Mu Qingzhi's hand is 5 → 1] Four covers in the backcourt, please give me more advice! Zayu a: "Tsk... Are you stuck because you didn't get the monster? A true master's duel must grasp the balance of the deck, let the seniors teach you! My turn draws cards! " "Wait..." Mu Qingzhi poked the palm of her right hand with her left index finger: "The moment you draw the card, I activate the trap card to knock it down. You must send the drawn card directly to the graveyard. " [Zayu a's hand is 6 → 5] Zayu a frowned slightly: "This kind of trap is harmless. I activate the magic card fusion and discard the two monsters in my hand to fuse and summon the Flame Winged Man. " Mu Qingzhi raised her hand: "The trap card forced escape device is activated, and the Flame Winged Man on the field will be bounced back to your hand according to the effect. " [Normal Trap Forced Escape Device: Select a monster on the field and return it to the owner's hand] Mu Qingzhi: "The fusion monster cannot be added to the hand, so it returns to your extra deck. " Zayu a: "This... But I haven't done a normal summoning this round. I usually summon the demon blood stone. " [Enchanted Blood Stone: 4 stars, attack power 1950] "Wait! "Mu Qingzhi waved his hand again: " Activate the trap card to force the device out of the device and bounce the magic blood stone back to your hand card. " Zayu a: "..." What a familiar scene, Are they actually two identical trap cards? Zayu a: "Tsk... I can still operate it, even though it has been normally summoned, and monsters with 4 stars or above require sacrifices in the duel before they can be summoned. But the 5-star Trickster can be specially summoned by discarding a card in your hand. I discarded the magic blood stone to specially summon the Trickster. " Mu Qingzhi raised her hand gently... Zayu a: "? ! " He stared at Mu Qingzhi at this moment, feeling uneasy in his heart. This red-haired kid can't force himself out of the device with three cards in a row, right? ... I saw the red figure opposite yawning sleepily, with no extra movement in his hands, Ha... That's good! Zayu A: "In the combat stage, the Trickster attacks directly! " "Wait! "Mu Qingzhi's eyes suddenly became sharp: "At this moment, I activate the Gaika force escape device on the field again, and bounce your Trickster back to the hand card! " [Zayu a's hand is 5→2→1] Zayu a: "..." Looking at the only trickster left in his hand and the empty field, Zayu a only felt a little ridiculous. A red-haired kid who is riding a horse and is born evil. , Are your cards stuck together with glue? Who is a good person fighting like this? Is this still a duel? Now the red figure reflected in Zayu A's eyes has turned into full of resentment... ... I don't know. How is the writing of the duel? It's not rigorous, but it seems to be easy to understand, right? A bit dramatic, right? In fact, I also wrote a short story about Mu Qingzhi's introductory battle with Yu-Gi-Oh, but I suddenly found that it's almost 4,000 words long and it's too bloated to fit in. I won't release it anymore. The author has already written the final duel, and the 5ds chapter seems to be coming to an end... I really don't know what to say in the end, I wish the author better writing and a prosperous literary career.

After reading it, let me tell you what I think about this book First of all, I like changing the list very much because I can see the interaction between the protagonist and the male/female characters. Because she was a man before, she communicated with boys like brothers. Because she is a woman now, she communicates with girls like sisters. This equality and sincerity made her the most trusted and admired person among her friends. The protagonist also does not accept emotions beyond the relationship between brotherhood and sisterhood, and the current viewing experience in this aspect is particularly good. Secondly, the decisiveness, strength and calmness brought by the soul of a young man are reflected. The cuteness, beauty and cuteness of the girl can also be seen unintentionally, but the protagonist seems to be a bit too coquettish Finally, the protagonist is not really Yun Kanshana, does he not know the Fire Mist Warrior (sad)

All for you

As a fan of the original "Dragon", I have also read a lot of "Dragon" fan fiction. Up to now, I am a little surprised by the author's writing skills. It has the feeling of describing the world in a leaf to the extreme like Jiangnan. It reminds me of the days in high school when I hid under the quilt and read the original book "Dragon". What the author depicts makes people feel like the other life of the characters in the original work: "Xia Mi held a paper cup and stepped on her feet to receive the free Coke." Zhi really works hard and is very loving! How I wish there really was Zhi in "Dragon", and the story of Shai Zai wouldn't be so uncomfortable. Thank you to the author for bringing us this story. I also hope that the author will work hard and update it. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot!

Let's just say that, overall, I don't like this book very much, because I don't like the flow of the world, that is, traveling back and forth, but I only look at the part about the dragon clan. It is definitely not bad in the fandom. The ones that should be saved are saved. Compared with walking with you, the details may not be so detailed, but the identity and daily life are more reasonable, and it does not look uncomfortable.

Without discussing about traveling to other worlds in the later period, I feel that it is the best one I have read so far among the Dragon Clan fanfics. The writing style and rhythm are relaxed and interesting. I highly recommend reading it. Even if you skip the plot of other world lines, just reading the Dragon Clan part is still a complete story.

It's really strange to readers today that so many people who are obsessed with beauty have no one to criticize them, and then they get a lot of scoldings like becoming a literary artist or getting married? I think it's a two-way choice whether you want to read it or not. There's no need to be so violent. Is this uncomfortable in reality?

Being liked by girls and being liked by boys are the things that most affect the tendency of female protagonists. Although many male videos seem gay, there is no male character possessiveness or romantic tendency towards the protagonist or other male characters. For example, Naruto. Naruto and the two pillars interacted with so many people, and their inner activities ran through the whole Naruto, but in fact, from our perspective, it is actually friendship and bonding. Because the two parties are not in love or possessing each other. Although they regard each other as a very important person, it is just trust in the other person and wanting the other party to recognize their own ideas. The same goes for the Dragon Clan. If Chu Zihang was a woman, nothing would happen to Nono. This argument is just a joke. Chu Zihang and Lu Mingfei felt more like they saw their cowardly self and wanted to give him a hand. However, if Lu Mingfei's attitude toward Chu Zihang wasn't very critical and his eldest brother, who had always been trying to support him, unexpectedly wanted him to get closer to him, then it would have been a success. Similarly, for male-female stories, the male character can trust the protagonist, be a bond, or be an enemy, but it must not be possessive or romantic. Because it's published on a male channel, you have to take care of boys' feelings. No normal boy would hate a man's possessiveness over him, and when reading novels, the reader becomes the protagonist.

Recently I read a few books that were labeled as being single and then had an affair with a male character, which left me in a bad mood. I hope this book is not the same.

The writing is quite smooth, changing from single to married. Old bookworms never care about this. As long as there is no sexual intercourse and the logic of the writing does not conflict, you can read it.

Lu Mingfei: I met a good friend on the Internet. 😡Why did he turn into a girl? 😭I apologize to my brother. ... A female netizen came to China. She said she would pretend to be my girlfriend to vent my anger. It is said that she is the eldest daughter of the underworld and has practiced swordsmanship since she was a child. I asked her her age and she refused to tell me. He seems to be younger than me. When I thought she was illiterate, she gave me a hard look and even recited the list of apprenticeships and the preface to Prince Teng's pavilion for me on the spot. I don't dare to underestimate her anymore. She speaks Chinese so well that I can't even tell that she is a foreigner by her voice. ... She gave me a lot of comics and Shana figures. It's great to have such female netizens! ... You didn't even let me tell them that you were Japanese. You pretended that you were a girl who dropped out of school from a poor family and was already working. You even said that you were now a female network administrator in an Internet cafe and that you were in love with me online. When they laughed at my "girlfriend" for being illiterate. ... But you took out the admission notice from the prestigious Cassel College and slapped me hard in the face. Young girl, you have played too much pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. You didn't know how to solve quadratic equations, derivatives, and solid geometry before. You were just pretending. You always had the admission notice from the famous Kassel school in your pocket just to wait for them to laugh at you and then slap you in the face. Your previous sentence of "thirty years to the west of the river, thirty years to the east of the river, don't bully young people who are poor" was also deliberately said for this moment. Then you clapped your hands and asked the female translator outside the window (from Lu Mingfei's perspective) and a large number of subordinates to come in. They all bowed and still spoke in Japanese, but you began to speak Japanese and asked your subordinates to report the numbers one by one. ... I understand, this is to prove that you are indeed a foreigner and that your men are not temporary actors. You actually brought your passport and showed it to them. It's really yours. 🤓 Today, I, Lu Mingfei, am really the winner in life. I asked the translator lady to translate it into Chinese, 6, and she leaned into my ear and said, "Don't be afraid Mingfei, A Zhi, I am the Dragon King and God of War." Girl, you know how to act cool and show off, and you have a very good command of your temperament and momentum. ... Now my classmates don't believe that you have been practicing swordsmanship since you were a child and have never gone to school, because you recited the Preface to Prince Teng's Pavilion again. ...... Hey, hey, you're overacting. You even deliberately held my hand with both hands, staring at me with big eyes. This is my first time holding hands. You even pretended to whisper, I admire your acting skills. Why do you want to act like a Japanese mafia lady who is obedient and loyal to me at first sight? Hey, you are not like this at all on the Internet. Hey, I almost laughed out loud now. It was difficult to hold back my laughter, which made me almost laugh out loud. ...... Is it charged? Ah? $10,000 Appearance fee? The landlord doesn't have any food left? The charge is actually just to tease me? ... Sister, I'm really scared by you. I was already thinking about the scene where I was scolded by my aunt, a woman's mouth, a liar 😳 Humph, I don't believe in girls anymore. ...... If there was a good friend like you in Kassel College, I would be willing to go. PS: If the author sees this post, please reply to me~

Either you delete my comment directly, or you act more grandly. What's the point of doing these little tricks? The three replies below my comment are gone. This book is originally written in Chinese for teasing, which is somewhat different from the singles book I think. Is there anything you can't say, or is it that you want to trick other readers into coming in.

Is there anyone (づ ●─● )づ

The handwriting is very good, we like it very much, and hope the author will continue to work hard.

My Bookshelf

I used to like watching porn, until a lesbian next to me stole my girlfriend👆😳

Between Systems "Cheers!" With a clear clink of glasses, two beautiful girls drank Coke from the glasses. Under the blue sky and white clouds, in the grass, a girl with black hair and black eyes and a girl with sky blue hair were drinking. Behind them is a dreamlike and beautiful castle, but it's a pity that this castle is a bit fake. "This time I was really exhausted!" Said a girl with black hair. "Indeed, indeed, who would have thought how the Black King could be so strong? The strength he shows now is completely inconsistent with the original work and previous history. How was he killed before? Is it really not a suicide? This time I really burned my coffin completely." The girl with sky-blue hair complained. "Are you sure we really can't return to the dragon world?" Mu Qingzhi stared seriously into Shi Fang's eyes. At this moment, Fang Fang looked away with a guilty conscience [Who knew that the Black King was so ridiculously strong? He was already on the verge of bankruptcy, but this fight has completely ruined him. Although anchoring a world does not require much, it will completely trap us in the long run. There is only enough power left to search for the world again. The world of dragons has little value left to replenish. The world timeline is completely different without an anchor. It's possible for thousands of years at a glance. ] At this moment, Fang Fang thought of various reasons to convince himself, and then firmly moved his gaze back. With a positive tone, he said to Mu Qingzhi, "That's right, we can't go back. Even if we encounter another dragon world, it will no longer be the one we are familiar with." Mu Qingzhi looked at this side with firm eyes, a positive tone, and a sincere expression. "Really? Well, in that case, let's forget it." "And how long do we have to drift here?" Mu Qingzhi said a little bored. "Who knows? After all, I really don't have much power now, so I can only move forward at the most economical speed." At this time, Fang shrugged. "It's a pity that if there wasn't the curse of dying in childbirth. As long as you are pregnant with the male protagonist's child, we might have succeeded this time." Immediately, Fang stared at Mu Qingzhi with strange eyes, and used the words that he had systematically used to seduce Mu Qingzhi again to seduce Mu Qingzhi.                                                                                                                                                                    " As long as I make some money in the next world, I can solve this curse first, and by giving birth to a child for the male protagonist, we will achieve wealth and freedom in a short time." [Unexpectedly, I have become the most annoying person I used to be. This may be the price of growth. But now I am really poor! Maybe it's the power of poverty. At this time, Fang Fang thought with some sadness. "Never!" Mu Qingzhi said with a dark face. "Would you like to try it? Anyway, I can make a new body for you at any time. You just experienced it, but your body is still brand new." At this time, Fang continued to bewitch. "Haha." Mu Qingzhi's hand was already stroking the handle of the knife as if he was about to pull it out at any time. "It really makes me sad that you didn't prepare a glass of orange juice for me at your party." Saying that, another girl with sky-blue hair walked out of nothingness. Her face looked the same as it did now. "The power to prepare orange juice for you has become this scene, how can there be any excess energy now." Shi Fang curled his lips. And who knew you'd wake up so early. The girl who looks the same as Shijifang is none other than Kamjifang. Shen Fang ignored her, took out a glass of orange juice from nothingness, drank the orange juice in the glass with an elegant expression like high-end red wine, and looked at the distant scenery with a smile. What she was looking at was naturally not the fake sky that looked like a p-picture made by a bad student. Her eyes traveled through space and looked at the long river of time in the dragon world. In her eyes, the long river of time in the dragon world is like the upper reaches of a waterfall at the beginning. It stops at a certain point and cannot move forward, but the flow of time is still slow. And now he has become a top, a top that is being whipped with a whip. As soon as it showed signs of slowing down, it was whipped hard with a whip and started spinning crazily again. For Shen Fang, who has traveled the great roads of the heavens and has experienced many experiences in the world, although this scene is rare, it is not unheard of. This was the beginning of the creation of the world. In order to protect itself, the world accelerated the flow rate of the branch of the time river where it was, so that it could quickly survive the weak. When powerful and intelligent beings appeared, the world would slow down to the same speed as the main stream of the time river. And so many accelerations and decelerations meant... Shen Fang glanced at the two people who were still bickering about death due to pregnancy and dystocia, and showed a smile. After drinking the last sip of orange juice, the red wine glass in his hand turned into a trace of white smoke and disappeared. "Okay, I'm going back to rest first. It's nothing serious, so don't call me." Shen Zifang stretched his waist and said. Only two people were left looking at each other. "I'm afraid this person is not seriously ill." "Indeed, why did she come here? Just to take a sip of orange juice?" After having a common goal, the two became good friends who talked about everything.

Shana

I'm so happy. This book completely meets my definition of a transformation novel. The starting point of a bunch of transformation novels is either about turning into a woman and then Feng Aotian, which is no different from ordinary novels except for the gender of the protagonist, or the writing style is bad. This kind of writing style of casually flirting with an innocent boy after transformation is the kind of transformation novel I want to read.

Shana

It's so bad. There's no secret about life and death like escaping. Moreover, even though it's known that people here have been snitched on, they're not prepared yet. It's really unbelievable.

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It is simply invincible. The protagonist is an invincible double-standard dog, and at the same time, it depicts how good and righteous his character is. In the end, Ren Eliyi killed so many people and put it into his mouth. He just regarded everything as a game. She was not guilty and was a good child.

One hundred thousand years later. "Lu Mingze, you lied to me! This Bai Wang is not Zhi Zhi at all." A very beautifully decorated and warm tree hole, the hole is full of furniture carved with modern craftsmanship. The emerald green branches and leaves decorated the tree hole like a dream. On two beds placed side by side, a boy who looked a little weak was roaring at a very beautiful boy. "Maybe it's because we evolved the world too fast. The world that originally took 100 million years to evolve has now been forced to evolve by you, brother, in 100,000 years. Maybe it's because of this that something went wrong?" Lu Mingze answered with a frown. "What should we do?" Lu Mingfei asked eagerly. "This time we reserve our strength in advance. When the White King rebels and the Black King dies, we will directly destroy the world and create it. Then we will start another reincarnation," Lu Mingze said calmly. "This is the only way. There are still nearly a hundred years before that time. Go to sleep first." Lu Mingfei sighed and calmed down. In the past 100,000 years, except for a small amount of waking time, he and Lu Mingze spent their time in a deep sleep in order to keep their memories from fading. "It's begun!" Lu Mingze watched the Black King's final wail with joy in his eyes. The humans around the Black King raised their weapons in excitement. They looked at Bibi with smiles on their faces, because they knew that the era of mankind had come! But soon they stopped cheering because the Black King's body disappeared without knowing when.        ， Emerald green light emitted from the sky, flooding the world. After the light faded, there was no world anymore, only a white ball of light remained. "This time it's much faster than the last time!" A male voice chuckled. "This kind of thing doesn't matter at all. Let's start quickly. This time, we will follow the normal order of time development. This will be a very long sleep." Another boy said with some displeasure. The white light group was covered with colorful brilliance, and the world began to move slowly. "... No, wait... It's not her, this is not her..." "... Then let's do it again..." The tenth reincarnation "... No, what's going on?" "... Let's do it again..." "... Okay, let's do it again..." The hundredth reincarnation "... Why? Why on earth? Why doesn't she want to see me..." "... Brother, do you still remember the last words she said to you?" "... What's wrong? She told me to let me find her..." "There's really something wrong with your memory. These hundred reincarnations are too difficult for you." Lu Mingze said with some seriousness. "What she said at that time was that you must be happy! Find the girl you like the most. She didn't say let you find her. She said she was going to travel." Lu Mingze said calmly. "What's the problem?" Lu Mingfei asked blankly. "In our hundreds of reincarnations, the time when the White King appears every time is several years later than the time when Zhi appeared. It would be fine if there are only a few times, but each time it is several years later. Coupled with what she said, this means that she may not belong to our world." Lu Mingze analyzed. "What should I do? I want to find her." Lu Mingfei said firmly. "Then let's go find her. This time we won't evolve the world. We will use all our energy to strengthen ourselves. Let's take a trip to the heavens. This trip is destined to be long. And we can't rely on sleep to pass the time. We must use all our energy to search and visit every encounter. World. Search for monuments and people in every world. Follow her footsteps and get closer to her. Maybe she has already forgotten us when we find her. The greater possibility is that we will not find her at all. "Lu Mingze asked. "Do you need to say more? Following her back is the whole meaning of my life." Lu Mingfei said with a gentle smile. "Then let's go. From now on, we will support each other and never forget our original intention." [My original intention is to be with you forever, brother] Lu Mingze thought

Let's just say, since it's not a remarriage, let's not write about those ambiguous and secret love stories, and let's go to jail.

This is a dying world. The brown earth is torn into countless fragments, and the bottom is bottomless when you look down. The gray sky is densely covered with black space cracks that look like spider webs. From time to time, new cracks will appear in the sky like lightning. The most terrifying thing is that there is a huge circular hole in the center of the sky that almost fills half of the sky. New cobwebs disappear and reappear from time to time, and the cracks become smaller and then suddenly larger. It can be seen that there seems to be a force repairing this broken world, but it is obviously a drop in the bucket. This apocalyptic scene constantly reminded Lu Mingfei that it was time to leave. But Lu Mingfei just stretched out his hand blankly, as if he wanted to hold something. At this moment, Lu Mingfei seemed to have returned to ten minutes ago. The girl's last words were all in my mind. "Really, I came here alone because I'm not good at saying goodbye to others. I didn't expect you to come here." The girl frowned slightly, as if she thought of something that made her very distressed. Lu Mingfei looked at the girl, but could see the ground behind her. It was as if the girl was a ghost that did not exist in the world. "You... You..." Lu Mingfei's lips moved, but he couldn't say a complete sentence for a long time. The girl, who was between reality and reality, smiled, stood on tiptoes slightly, and stretched out her hand, as if to touch Lu Mingfei's head. After running her fingers through her hair, the girl was slightly startled and retracted her movement. He said in an unintelligible voice: "It seems the time has come."          :"，，，…"         "What about you? Where are you going?" Lu Mingfei interrupted her anxiously. The girl smiled and said, "I'm going on a trip!" Even at this time, Lu Mingfei said something in vain in his heart: "Travel, are you going to travel to hell?"                                                                                                                                               ‐ been given to me. There was only one thought in her mind [She is leaving... She is leaving...] "Finally, there is one more thing" the girl said with a big smile on her face. He had never seen a girl with such a bright smile, and Lu Mingfei couldn't help but feel a little crazy. "You must be happy! If you want to chase Nono, go to Brother Chu for help. If you want to chase Chen Wenwen, go to Caesar. You must be with your favorite girl to be happy!" The girl said as her body turned into a point of light and disappeared. Lu Mingfei subconsciously stretched out his hand, but the girl completely dissipated before he touched her, leaving only some light spots flying in the air. Lu Mingfei looked at his palm blankly, as if the girl was still in front of him. [Zhi, you told me that you wanted to be with the girl you like the most. But my favorite girl is you! Orange! It's a pity that the girl will never hear these unspoken words again. Lu Mingfei half-knelt on the ground, his hands firmly inserted into the stone. Ah! Ah-ah! It let out bursts of wild animal-like cries. It was terrifying to hear. At this time, Lu Mingfei's ears rang with a huge sorrow that seemed to drown the world. Lu Mingfei looked up. I saw that the world in front of me was no longer the Nibelung that was about to be destroyed before.                                                             In front of the person who is radiating holy light, wearing a pure white priest's robe, seems to be a God, praying for him with a loud and holy voice. Giant dragons in the sky, red gold, green, and fiery red, were circling and flying, letting out a moan, then leaning down and lowering their heads. Looking further into the distance, I saw that the people below were all densely packed with humans, with white hair, blond hair, black hair, white skin, and yellow skin. Wearing various costumes, they prayed for him with a sad face. It was only then that he realized that he was already on a high platform of pure gold. Black feathers flying all over the sky slowly floated down from the sky and disappeared before touching the ground. The little devil? No, it should be said to be Lu Mingze, wearing a tall black suit. There is a white rose on her chest. He stood quietly beside the priest with a serious and sad face. "Where have you been?" Lu Mingfei asked Lu Mingze unusually calmly. As if he knew what he was going to say, Lu Mingzhu shook his head slowly, "I can't save her. But you can."

It was my first time to read a comic book, and I sat down with Wenzhao Gong. It was completely a two-dimensional self-pleasure story, and it was so embarrassing.

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As Lu Mingfei closed his eyes, the illusions around him gradually disappeared, revealing the reality beneath the prosperity. The dense space cracks in the sky were connected to the abyss on the earth. The whole world is like a glass that has been broken and then shattered. Only countless thin, almost transparent lines can be vaguely seen that barely connect the cracks together. Lu Mingze took one last look at the world, and for some reason he suddenly felt reluctant to leave. This feeling dissipated as quickly as it came. Just think of it as one life for another. ] Lu Mingze looked at Lu Mingfei, who was floating in mid-air with his eyes closed, and slowly floated towards him. What he didn't tell Lu Mingfei was that he needed an introduction to restore the true form of the World Tree, and as the second-generation Black King, he was about to leave the World Tree but not yet leave the World Tree. He died before he was born, his body was buried with the World Tree, and his soul wandered with the soul of the World Tree for a lifetime, accompanying the World Tree for countless thousands of years. He, whose whole body is already closely connected with the World Tree, is the best introduction. The end result of being an introduction is death.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                [Hopefully the back-up plan left behind will work] Lu Mingze thought with some sadness. After all, it would be very lonely if you were separated from your brother The two closed their eyes tightly and hugged each other tightly, as if they had been like this for thousands of years, white silk threads gradually entangled the two of them and turned into a white cocoon. With the emergence of this cocoon, the countless transparent threads between the cracks in the world also broke off one by one. The two bodies slowly merged, and an emerald green seed appeared in the center of the two merged bodies. As the fusion between the two intensifies, the seeds become bigger and bigger. In about a quarter of an hour, a delicate, fist-sized emerald green seed appeared on the spot, and a bud slowly broke out. The emergence of the bud brought endless vitality, and the broken world around it also trembled.         ， The buds rolled up a black skeleton as huge as a mountain. The seeds disappeared in an instant and appeared in the skeleton the next moment. Countless roots penetrated directly into the bones, and the emerald green light surged. For a moment, a green sun seemed to appear in the black hole. After the light dissipated, a sapling only as thick as an arm appeared in mid-air. With the emergence of saplings, the broken world began to slowly heal. But unfortunately, the roots of the saplings surged countless times in the next moment, and countless roots cut through black tracks.          ，，，，， "Look!" With a shout, the people around him looked in the direction he was pointing and suddenly stood there. The people in the room looked at the scenery outside the window and slowly stood up. People looked up in confusion. At this time, the indigo blue of the sky has been replaced by a red that is full of apocalyptic atmosphere, and dark clouds cover the sky. The world seemed to be crying and roaring, lightning flashed and thunder began, and it started to rain lightly. But huge transparent strips like giant dragons rolled and squirmed in the clouds. Rather than thinking about the endless sadness that just happened for no reason. The sudden appearance of strips like transparent dragons in the sky frightened them even more.          ， Soon, the roots found their position and stopped, and the whole world fell into the stasis of death. Then countless roots shook together, and everyone from the four dragon kings to the mortals turned into ashes and disappeared in an instant. After the roots grew a little bigger, they began to suck continuously. As this sucking world began to gradually become smaller. Until a big tree reaching the sky and the earth appeared and took the place of the world. The originally green leaves of the newly emerged trees began to turn yellow. The branches gradually bent, and only a group of emerald green light in the heart of the tree became more and more obvious.          Only a white ball of light the size of a human head was left in a void that could not be explained by color. The pure white light group flashed through countless rays of color and slowly expanded. A colorful prototype of the world appeared in the void.

"How?" Lu Mingfei asked eagerly. "Is all the life I have left enough?" "Not enough, but the lives of all living creatures combined are enough." Lu Mingze hesitated but said it anyway. "All living things?" Lu Mingfei muttered to himself in confusion. "Yes, but if my plan succeeds, it will just be a sleep for them. The next day they will live their normal lives." "What plan?" Lu Mingfei asked. Following Lu Mingfei's inquiry, Lu Mingze looked around in silence. The black feathers in the sky still fall and then dissipate. Lu Mingze looked up at the sky in a daze. Look at the black feathers flying in the sky. This scenery reminded him of Black Swan Harbor. On that night, the scenery was very similar, except that it was white snow in the black sky. But this time, black feathers were flying in the white sky, and the voice of the dragon lowering its head and wailing below the high platform became increasingly sad. Drops of blood and tears oozed from the faces of the crowd in the distance. The pastor's voice on the top of the high platform became louder and more shocking. Look at all this. Lu Mingze said, "Actually, all this is not entirely an illusion. When the two of them died, all the creatures in the world were sad. These dragons are those who are still in the chrysalis or the dark side kings among humans. I intervened all their mental fluctuations at this time into this illusion." Lu Mingze no longer knows what he is talking about now. It is difficult for him to appear. Because seeing Lu Mingfei like this now, Lu Mingze felt very strange. He didn't care about those creatures. Even if all the creatures in the world died billions of times, he would not feel the slightest bit uncomfortable. Instead, he would happily sing a song at their funerals, because they were just rebellious ministers to him, and what really frightened him was the current Lu Mingfei. He had anticipated such a scene after knowing Mu Qingzhi's true identity. With my understanding of Lu Mingfei over the past ten thousand years, I had thought a lot about what Lu Mingfei looked like at this time, but I didn't expect Lu Mingfei to be so calm. It's not as if a civilization's life or death depends on it from now on. And when Lu Mingfei asked what to eat this morning, he answered steamed buns. Lu Mingfei said casually. He hopes that Lu Mingfei can be like a tyrant and stop being as gentle as before, because the world is very cold. If you treat the world gently, the world will pierce your gentle heart with a needle. So he always hoped that Lu Mingfei would stop being so naive, but it was too fast. Before coming to this Nibelungen, Lu Mingfei was still his stupid but kind brother. In the blink of an eye, he could no longer understand him. He doesn't know that Lu Mingfei is still his brother? "Brother, you should have realized your uniqueness a long time ago." After Lu Mingze thought for a while, he shook his head and answered. "Yes, I have known it for a long time. After all, there is no demon who trades souls in this world. Even if there is such a thing, he will not find someone like me. You finding me can only prove that I have the value you need. But I don't know what to call you. I don't know how to face my own uniqueness. At that time, I didn't want to stand too far away from the crowd, so I kept this status quo, and you have been accompanying me to make up such games" Lu Mingfeidao "Actually, brother, you are the World Tree. The World Tree is the transformation of the Heart of the World. In a sense, you are the world itself. But since the creation of the world, you have divided too much power and have been degraded from the Heart of the World to what it is now. If you want to restore it to its original state, you must get your original power back. My plan is to let you eat the Black King first." As he said this, Lu Mingze looked up at the huge black hole in the sky. That is the manifestation of the power of the Black King's Dragon Bone Cross. The Black King's Dragon Bone Cross is in the center of the black hole. "Acquire enough power to transform into the true form of the World Tree. Use the true form of the World Tree to devour the world. Transform the peak power of the World Tree into the Heart of the World. Finally, re-evolve the world. Only in this way can we save her. We can also change the world back to what we want." Lu Mingze said flatly. "What should I do?" "Close your eyes, don't resist, just leave everything to me." Lu Mingze said strangely and gently.