The Witcher: the Witcher of the World

The fusion of wizards and dark souls is good, the old man's portrayal is very charming, and the care for the protagonist can be seen with the naked eye. The writing of Lambert and Triss is also very good. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are still very good, and the characters are not stereotyped. Keep up the good work!

The author does a great job, the characters are accurately controlled, the writing is smooth and vivid, and the protagonist is also a very lively young man. The only shortcoming is that it is too short and discovered too early. I wanted to knock me out and sleep until the end. Update soon 😡

Shet! The writing is good, the fighting is smooth, and the author's comments seem to be based on enthusiasm for the book. Why was it cut? ! I don't understand.

Isn't this well written? Why isn't it updated?

The author has a lot of practical spells in the first and second generations Although they are not strong in the game, they are very practical in reality.

I just found this book yesterday, and then I lost it

How can a baby pass the Trial of Green Grass directly?

Come on, come on 😡😡😡😡

Learning spells with Triss just feels like that. It's better to discover the spells in Dark Souls.

Evidence that the protagonist is the descendant of the eldest lady The eldest lady has white hair/the protagonist has white hair the eldest lady has snake pupils/the protagonist's eyes are like a demon hunter (snake pupil) the eldest lady has white skin/the protagonist has white skin the eldest lady is called Belga's mother (god descendant, but not dragon descendant, I forgot), and the protagonist looks directly at the opening panel and is a god-race ancient dragon hybrid So... Who did the good thing?

It's a good book, but it's too young, so I'll just raise it first (

The writing style is pretty good, and there aren't any weird points. I just haven't played Influence before, so I can't understand some parts.

The plot is so confusing, after reading forty chapters, there is no hint of the main plot.

Well... Dark Souls. How can I put it, I really can't understand how you can connect these two completely unrelated worlds. This is like putting Kamen Rider and Ultraman together (two works that are similar to some extent but completely different) But the way you write it and some conjectures in the article make me feel that putting Super Sentai and Super Star God together is a bit inconsistent, but it does not affect the elements and content settings of the two parts being combined into one.

Um! I haven't read much yet, but when I saw the update, I thought he was entering the palace?

It's so well written, why don't you update it?

The strengths and weaknesses of this book are clear. However, I still hope that the author can change the introduction. This broken introduction is really discouraging! Let's talk about the advantages first: the creative writing is very good and the integration is also very good. So far, the worldviews of The Witcher and Dark Souls have been relatively harmoniously integrated, and there is nothing uncomfortable about the author's detailed description of the characters. Let's talk about the shortcomings: (This shortcoming is that as a reader, I feel uncomfortable watching it. It does not represent the views of most people, and maybe the author has his own opinions) First of all, the protagonist in the author's writing is too naive. The protagonist obviously has memories from another world, and he can be considered a middle-aged and elderly person in his two lives combined. Why do you act so out of the ordinary? It feels very unreliable. The second thing is that the actions of the protagonist are a bit unworthy of his name. The protagonists of the Soul series basically fall into that category. Kill most living creatures in sight. Defeat the enemy by any means necessary and obtain all available supplies. There are a few fanfics of the same type that don't like to get handsy. Its own combat power level was also very high at the time, and there was no need to kill additional people to obtain souls to improve it. The last problem is that the protagonist obviously needs a lot of souls. The easiest way to gain souls in Black Soul is to kill the weak in batches, or to kill the strong with high intensity. The protagonist is obviously incapable of killing strong men. But he also has an almost pathological obsession. Clinging to his chaotic moral system. For example, when two armies are fighting, humans can kill non-human races. But non-human races cannot kill. Because when humans kill non-human races. Not in front of the protagonist, although the protagonist himself is considered an inhuman race. But when the inhuman race wants to kill humans, it's right in front of the protagonist. The protagonist thinks that he is a member of the human race, so he wants to prevent this. When a person chooses to become a soldier, it shows. He was ready to give his life. As a group of people. When reality is distorted for entertainment, or in other words, for profit. They are no longer qualified to continue to enjoy their lives. The protagonist is very strange. I feel like I'm a bit of a bitch who needs to be beaten. If the protagonist didn't kill the guards because the guards were just fulfilling their duties, then why did he kill the wolves in the first place? The wolves are just fulfilling their duties, hunting and strengthening themselves! Why doesn't the protagonist feed the eagle with his own body? Another point is that in the coming troubled times, there will be robbers, scum and soldiers. Basically they are just different forms of the same thing. Why can robbers and scum be killed, but soldiers cannot?

Interesting... But I hope those hypocritical priesthoods will be killed! Waaaaaagh……😏

You can say anything, you can ask anything.

I just finished reading it, and such a good article was interrupted. It is rare to find a good and clean article. I have read other Witcher fics, and I still like this one the best.