Restarting My Investment Life

He's only a high school sophomore, too young. He'd be more like a college sophomore.

Does the author even read books? You've fallen into every trope imaginable in online novels. With your writing style and plot construction, nothing you write will make a difference. You should read more of what other people are writing now.

The protagonist graduates from university; this book is now complete. 🤫

This is all meaningless stuff, jumping from chapter to chapter, just the same old monologues.

My friend's work feels like dumplings in a teapot—it has substance but can't be poured out. It contains valuable information, but the writing style is still immature.

Stock trading is simply buying and selling, but behind these two simple actions lies complex research and information gathering. I think writing about stock trading could expand on these elements, and then, using initial capital to successfully navigate a few major market trends, that would be about it.

Even the best stock market savvy can't compare to a top-tier company.

The writing is too bland; be prepared for it to fail before it even gets off the ground. It also has a certain barrier to entry; it introduces too much information, similar to *Capital Legend*, which doesn't include any romance 🙂, focusing entirely on the stock market.

I misread it as Gao Qiqiang 😅 and was startled.

Poor drafts