Battle Through the Heavens: Xiao Yan, Demon Emperor

How should I put it? Author, you gave Xiao Yan a half-emperor predecessor, but after his rebirth, I felt that he was particularly dependent on Yao Lao. So don't you have any fighting skills?

There is a loophole or poisonous point in the author's novel that cannot be ignored, that is, Xiao Yan suddenly shielded his soul from Yao Lao several times. How did he get past it? My suggestion is that there is no need to shield Yao Lao. Then write about Yao Lao discovering who Xiao Yan is. Whether you try to change him or guard against him, it will shape the conflict points in the development of the novel's plot. In other words, it's shielding, but he gave some psychological description to Shi Lao, and wrote that he discovered some clues and something was wrong. A normal person would know that something was wrong, and wrote about his response.

Don't write about the ambiguous plot between Xiao Yan and Aunt Yun. According to the author's experience of Xiao Yan's previous life, what the Yunlan Sect did is probably not just shaking eggs and turning them yellow, earthworms chopping upright, and dogs passing by being beaten, but when writing about the plot with Aunt Yun, the character will fall apart.

I don't know who said that the protagonist relied too much on Yao Lao. As a result, Yao Lao has been offline for a hundred chapters now.

Are you, Hun Daier, worthy of touching porcelain white ice? Didn't she immediately send a Dou Zun out to kill Xiao Yan after she was reborn? That is pure wisdom. Dou Zun is just a small soldier in the Soul Clan, will he not be able to send it out?

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There is no Yun Yun as the heroine in this book, so if you want to read it, you can give it up. The author also has some Yun Hei elements, and the protagonist's love for Yun Yun and her lack of attention have various connotations. Personally, I think if you don't like it, just don't write it. There's no need to dislike it.

There are also many little poisonous points, such as the Three Mysterious Transformations of Heavenly Fire and Black Flame, which you can say are the inheritance left by the Chengxiao clan. You want to write a story about deceiving a three-year-old child to save the old man and the flames that appear inexplicably in his body. But since it is written like this, there can be a showdown in the later stage. Xiao Yanyao teacher Tuqing reconciles, Yao Lao confesses Yaochen's identity and Han Feng's hatred and all kinds of doubts about Xiao Yan. Xiao Yan can't explain his past life, so he simply confesses that this is the inheritance of the Xiao clan, and he used soul shielding on him in the early stage because of distrust.

I don't understand what some people think. Not to mention that a master of alchemy refining can be a teacher. If you become a disciple, you can get someone who can provide you with safety protection, technical guidance for alchemy refining, support for low- and medium-grade elixirs, and companionship when you are idle and bored. Accompanying a tool man who provides all kinds of services, and offering Fenjue, the strongest skill in the Dou Qi Continent, with both hands. Compared to being friends with Yao Lao, it is just a small price to pay for a little face plus the price of helping people refine their bodies. Why not do it?

There is no good review of Yun Yun, God of Gods has nothing to say, Two Yun Yun are Dou Po fanfics of Da Fu, one of the protagonists smashes the resources to Zhu Dudu, and the other is set for Yun Yun to be an orphan of the spirit race However, in fact, Yun Yun has no other use except to satisfy the collection addiction and Xingyu. The collection addiction is only available to time travelers who know the original plot. This thing is only used for Dou Po, and it is just a laggard in the world. As for the legs, Nalan Yanran won't talk about them. This one is not as good as Yun Yun. It's a pity to throw it away if it tastes tasteless. There is no need for the Yun Family Army to build a team. Author, Xun'er Ziyan, Medusa, the Little Medical Fairy, who can you tell Yun Yun with your conscience? , The author didn't even confiscate Yafei. Yafei can manage finances after all. Yun Yun was neglected by Yun Leng when she was in charge of the Yunlan Sect. She seemed very busy. She had to take care of the sect, the disciples and cultivation, but nothing happened.