Showbiz: You Can't Imagine How Fun It Is to Court Disaster

The plot is too clichéd; it's the same old formula from ten years ago. You should try a different approach. This kind of writing definitely won't work.

I want to watch "Go Fighting!", Not your writing about the entertainment industry. You've got the main points mixed up and the plot is so clichéd.

System, transmigrator, martial arts practitioner... I don't know how to describe it. I persevered to over seventy chapters, but I couldn't continue.

What an awkward attempt to show off and get slapped in the face. You pull out an arrow and a professional actor wants to challenge you to an archery contest? Fine, fine.

What a coincidence!

Update

After reading just a few book reviews, I roughly understand.

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