The Priest's Paradise of the Dead

I was fascinated by the author's Twelve Movements of Creation and never saw the second follow-up. Now the author has finally updated the new book 😭

After reading the first volume, I feel that: firstly, there are fewer battle descriptions; secondly, the non-fan fiction lacks the background of the original work, and the worldview and background are not given much in just a few dozen chapters. The overall feeling lacks enough attraction. If the space is limited, you can consider highlighting only one direction to expand. In terms of classification, Western fantasy is no better than fantasy. There are too many fantasy readers and they are very tolerant. It is easier to attract readers than other genres if you write casually. Although Western fantasy is not a niche genre, there are not many good works. Strong authors either stay in their comfort zone and satisfy a fixed group, or they may write fantasy, while more powerful authors can do whatever they want. An excellent Western fantasy work like Devil's Rules actually left me with very little impression of the combat aspect in retrospect, but the characters, character relationships, etc. Were outstanding enough. As someone who is used to watching fantasy, I would instinctively want to watch exciting fights. I have never written a novel. I feel that descriptions of combat should be simpler and easier to arouse people's emotions than descriptions of machinations. This may explain why more people read fairy tales and fantasy. If the combat is reduced, we must consider whether the strategy, background, dialogue, etc. Can make up for this lack. I don't think it's easy either. I think most of what readers can discuss are content-related issues, but the core is actually about writing skills. I can't really give you any advice in this regard. I guess the author still needs to work hard. If you have enough skills, even water won't matter.

I don't understand the meaning of your Chapter 7 and Chapter 8? The witch in Chapter 8 is equivalent to a person who can switch dimensions in the medical clinic and still be poor? Another witch who can go against the witch of the medical hall, right? Actually stole the protagonist's money? And the protagonist's purification technique can actually purify the corpse of a seventh-level demon?

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I don't understand. Since you know the purification technique, it proves that you are already a transcendent. How could someone become a transcendent person by practicing purification techniques, but then die due to excessive energy consumption?

This way of writing is no longer suitable for the current online writing environment. It would be good if adapted into animation. The current domestic animation adaptations all use Shuangwen to change the plot development, which is too brainless and has no ups and downs. It's a pity that the author persisted for so long

Valhalla Gunslinger fan?

Please collect it, recommend it, read it, and benefit from it ~ Your randomness is the greatest encouragement to the author ~ I beg you readers to stop reading books, it will really kill you ~

. . . . . Can't purification be used on witches? . Just clean it up.

Some time ago, I was thinking about when the new book would be released 🙂 I came over to take a look every once in a while, but there was no notice.