Girlfriend Is a Prodigal? the Unlimited Returns Made Me Laugh so Hard!

I have read the first three chapters now, and I have a small problem. The heroine's transformation is a bit abrupt. Without spending too much pen, the heroine went from crying every day for three years to resisting and alienating the male protagonist. I can understand that the heroine does not want to repeat the marriage of her previous life, but the heroine you describe actually did not make the male protagonist feel a trace of her affection during the marriage, and the impression on the male protagonist is that she is an iceberg beauty. As for the heroine, I think the worst part of the description is when you see the hero again after rebirth. To be honest, it is really unforgettable. The moment you see her, your heart will tremble. There is a saying: "You are still you, with a name that makes my heart tremble when I shout it." If you don't describe this aspect in detail and in-depth, everyone will be a little bit frustrated, and it will be a bit embarrassing. After all, you said that the heroine cried every day for three years, and she cried like Lin Daiyu. Most people are not that powerful. After the car accident, the male protagonist saw the female protagonist at the first sight when he was reborn. You didn't mention whether the female protagonist was reborn in advance and had been waiting for a long time. So from my perspective, the female protagonist lost her life looking for a wedding ring before, but she will turn into an iceberg beauty in the blink of an eye, which makes her look emotionally weird.

Of course, the most important thing is not to finish the book quickly, if you really want to write it well.

Is it on the shelves so quickly? 50,000 Words on the shelves? ?