I Have a Set of Monster Experience Cards

The setting of this novel is okay, but the power system and the overworld are in a mess. I don't know what the author thinks. The protagonist inherits half the power and ability of the tyrannical raptor that has been strengthened to level 13 for the first time. It can be regarded as a little superman level! But they are only twice as strong as normal people in the main world. So what, is the per capita physique of the main world superhuman? When writing novels, let alone how good the writing style and creativity are, at least the basic logic must be present. In all astronomy, the power system is the most important point. If this point is not written well, the whole text will be useless. I hope the author will pay attention to it.

I felt that the world of Pacific Rim and How to Train Your Dragon had too many of the author's own settings and plots, which were too complicated and boring. I skipped more than ten chapters in a row and then read them again and found that the main plot could still be connected. The worlds you picked are all my favorites, but they contain too many private goods and deviate from the fun of the original world. For example, in How to Train Your Dragon, the main character is a light evil spirit, and a long part of his development process is separated from the original plot. Such a complicated character and world plot are like "I am the boss of a group of dragons". After reading more than ten chapters, the main characters in How to Train Your Dragon have only appeared a few times. They are more about various unknown names of dragon species and scenes of the jungle and the jungle. It really seems like a self-acting and singing that is divorced from the public interest.

Didn't see it, come to Shennong? I quite like this type of article, but I'm afraid of the plot of being a dog for humans.

😒 Monsters in the sky, monsters in the sky, why are you creating a bunch of original worlds? I originally decided to pursue it because the protagonist turned into a violent velociraptor. Why did you add a bunch of original worlds and plots later?

In case anyone didn't see my explanation of the gender setting of the dinosaurs in Jurassic Park... You can read the author's words in Chapter 2. By the way, as shown in the picture below, the Indominus raptor that appears in the movie is male, which shows that it is reasonable to create male individuals for the production of dinosaurs as weapons in the Indominus series. Finally, the gender setting of the monsters will basically follow the original work. Occasionally it will be changed due to the appearance of the protagonist. The setting shall be based on the content of this article. If you want to see the protagonist transform into a dragon girl, you can turn left to other novel websites to see if there are any. If there are any, let me know...

The people with this name and introduction are all fans of exotic beasts. If you write that the cow demon is dressed up in the city, it will slap you in the face 🙂

Jurassic Park dinosaurs are all female, there are no males

To be honest, if that doesn't work, don't write about interpersonal relationships in the ontological world, even if it's just a brief mention.

The Monster Experience Card of All Heavens, readers want to see the monsters in various film and television worlds, not the things in your main world.

Some advice and suggestions for the author. I just read the first ten chapters and found that the proportion of content between the shadow line and the main world line is 6:4. I discovered that there is another Chen Zifan in the main world. He is suspected to have supernatural powers or spiritual energy recovery. It shows that the author of the content of the main world line has ideas. I personally feel that writing this way is not particularly good, because there are too many contents and stories that can be written about the time-travel line, and there is a lot that needs to be written. If the main world line also has similar urban powers or spiritual energy recovery, then the story line of the entire novel needs to be more inclined to the main world line. Furthermore, the main world line is the author's original plot, and creativity requires the author to invest more energy, which will damage a lot of content in the other line. If the author wants to operate on two lines, then the whole book will be thankless to readers on both sides, both the readers who come through the system line and the readers who have original urban powers/revival of spiritual energy. So here I hope the author can figure out the theme line of the plot. Dual-line writing is equivalent to two novels. It takes a lot of energy to conceive the original plot itself, and also takes into account the main plot. This situation will have various impacts. For example, it takes a lot of effort to conceive original plots, which leads to a slow update rate; there are also those who come in because of the novel title, but end up running away because they don't like the plot of the main world line. I hope the author can pay attention to these aspects. I personally read the novel because of its novel subject matter. I haven't read the latest chapter yet. This is also my personal opinion and opinion. If there is anything wrong with this, please discuss it with each other without any malice. I also hope that the author can write this rare subject matter well.

The combat power of the original world has collapsed so much that the tailed rat's clone can clean the surface of the earth, but it can't beat a human who doesn't know whether it's a five-star or a six-star. It's quite speechless. At present, it seems that humans have not left the planet to explore the stars. Anyway, the combat power is quite divided.

With more than 2 million words, the exit index is still 1, which shows how shitty this book is.

Novels like this still have to downplay the real world. I originally read Zhutianwen. Those who want to see urban pretentiousness and slaps in the face will not read your book. The plot copy is still quite good.

Make a comment to add some heat to the book. The setting is quite interesting, and the writing is also good. I hope it will continue to be less complicated and confusing in the future.

The copy world is well written, but the main world is poorly written. The background of the main world is too mysterious, the forces are secretive, the division of strength is blurred, and the reading experience is poor. The dungeon world has also begun to bury pits (passages to other worlds). Seeing the back always makes me hold my breath. It's mysterious. The more I think about it, the more uncomfortable I feel.

After reading dozens of them, I can't say they're not good-looking, nor can I say they're poisonous. At least there's nothing wrong with the writing, but it just feels a bit strange. The protagonist looks neither human nor beast, just like a robot that is more machine than machine. It is difficult to have the desire to continue watching.

In Zhutianwen of the Alien Beast style, the plot in the main world is too childish, and the performance in the dungeon world is not very good. The butt is too crooked. I don't ask you to break any taboos, but be decisive in killing. I can only say that it is hay ~ food and grass - level

Since you're writing about this kind of subject, don't write about the heroine.

To be honest, I feel that the author's original writing is more interesting than the fanfic. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

The writing gets worse and worse, and the common problem of alien beasts is also committed again and again.

After watching it for a long time, it became more and more unsightly. I can no longer stand the original world.

Then let me ask, did the author write about Godzilla♿️

Anyone who has finished it can tell me which chapter the original content starts from. I don't want to read it at all.

It's too bland, and those who haven't seen the movie yet don't know the plot will be confused when watching it. Not interesting.

This name first reminds me of Ultraman, and this introduction reminds me of Dragon Cancer🐶

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The original world is so beautiful. I have read so many articles about the fan world that I can't escape the original plot framework after writing about it. Many of the previous fan worlds made me sleepy. On the contrary, the original world brings more freshness, and the construction of the high, middle and low worlds is also quite good.

I thought that the protagonist traveled to a card-playing world, and that the protagonist Goldfinger could travel through time and then make cards of the monsters he traveled to, as well as effect fields and other cards formed by various experiences. It turns out that the main world is a serious city 🙂

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The writing style is okay,,, but it's quite boring to start over every world,,,