Rewriting the Investiture of the Gods in the Primordial Era

It's ridiculous that a saint knows everything. He knows everything and has shattered the ancient world. When he was conferred as a god, did the saint become an actor? The kind of person who knows the future is at least the creator god. He has set a result and is in the process of evolution.

Not bad. Regarding the merits of creating people and establishing teachings, I feel that the cart has been put before the horse. We should do things first and then announce them to gain merits, rather than talk empty words first to gain merits and then do things.

In fact, in history, King Wu defeated Zhou and the Zhou Dynasty established a ritual and music system to replace the bloody sacrifices of the Shang Dynasty. This was a great progress in the history of our country. This was the beginning of the theocratic politics moving towards secular politics. If King Wu had not conquered Zhou, we might now be like the Arab world, with endless religious conflicts between Shiites and Sunnis.

After so many Huiyuan, with the protagonist as a prophet, the human race can only hunt and gather fruits, and they have to wait for Fuxi to invent fishing nets. Don't you think the sense of fragmentation is too strong?

I took a quick look at it and found it to be pretty good-looking and quite creative. The one mentioned so far is the Chaos Spiritual Treasure All-Seeing Heavenly Book. According to the setting of this book, in the prehistoric times, the Chaos Spiritual Treasure turned into an innate treasure, which is on the same level as the Pangu Flag, the Tai Chi Diagram, and the Chaos Clock. It can imitate human supernatural powers, similar to the enhanced demonic version of the Xiao Wu Xiang Gong. The protagonists also include the Universe Diagram of Taiqing Sage who understands cause and effect, the best innate spiritual treasure, the nine fortune-telling treasures of heavenly secrets, the fortune-telling is not affected by the calamity, the enlightenment futon, the supreme treasure of merit and virtue, and a lotus tube, used for drawing lots, and a golden bell, which is often used to summon the human race. Among the human race, there are also the ancestral pavilion of the human race built by Dachao, the immortal firewood of the Sui people, and the grass skirt of Zhisheng, all of which are the most precious treasures of merit. There is also a holy spring of creation, which absorbs half of the merits of creation. It should have been turned into the Mother River and the Spring of Rebirth by Nuwa. According to the latest chapter, this book should have been turned into the Spring of Life and the Spring of Death by Saint Taiqing. The power is quite powerful. These two springs are used to spread the formation of Liangyi dust particles, which should be the formation of the human race to protect the clan. That's it for now. The biggest highlight of this book, personally, is that the fifty innate human races all have names, and I feel like they all have their own stories. The author can find fifty ancient names, which is really amazing.

I have commented on many Honghuang novels: Don't write Honghuang novels as fantasy novels, otherwise you will end up writing a eunuch. There are several routines in fantasy writing, including subduing the mind, suppressing the realm, and water word count This article covers all of them, especially suppressing the realm... Readers of ancient novels are the easiest group of people to be satisfied, and at the same time they are also the least easy to be satisfied. The easiest thing is that even if the author just follows the traditional prehistoric style of writing, most readers can still read it except for the occasional complaint that there is no new idea. The most difficult thing is because I hope to have new ideas and expand the traditional prehistoric plot design. Among them, the one who is most likely to be scolded is using fantasy routines to write about the prehistoric times, and he can only be scolded and said nothing 🤭

Rewrite shit. Jiejiao is inherently good and bad. If there is a way to truly cultivate, then there will be. Most of them are man-eating monsters and evil spirits. And the cricket is like an ant. How can this trend of becoming a god be changed? At most, it will change the trend. Let Youdao Quanzhen, who is close to you, survive. Let Chanjiao also die a few golden immortals and a group of disciples. Plus some casual cultivators. Just in time to complete this list of gods. Moreover, Yuanshi Tianzun and I must have lost touch. They want to intercept the teachings and fill up the list of gods. Even weakening Jiejiao. But they certainly didn't want to destroy Tongtian's orthodoxy. Because destroying the Jiejiao orthodoxy would not benefit them.

After reading it in one sitting, I can only say that the writing is very average, with an innate treasure in hand and two saints at my back. As the first batch of innate saints created by Nuwa herself, she did not want to educate the human race of mathematics and science, and did not hold power. Are you still planning for the human race????? The whole text is full of compromises, including compromises with the demon clan, compromises with the witch clan, and tolerance towards Western religions. You have traveled through time, and you hold a treasure in your hand. How could the backbone of the human race be worse than without you? Then why are you traveling across time??? There are saints in Western religions, but you dare not provoke them for fear of death. But there are also saints in the demon clan???? Isn't this a typical case of whoever hits me, me reflecting on my problem, and then condemning him?????

This ancient world is really small. The modern observable universe is 96 billion light-years, while this ancient world is only 96 million light-years. Ordinary humans can observe 96 billion light-years of the universe. This is not even a fraction of the universe. The scope of the ancient world is less than 100 million light-years. Then you mentioned in the article that Nuwa traveled to the ancient world for 3,000 yuan. How did she travel? With only 3,000 yuan, would you watch The Great Desolation countless times? Let alone 3,000 yuan, you can fly around Honghuang countless times in a day, and the plane can reach 1,000 kilometers per hour. Even if the Earth Immortal is 1,000 times as low as it is, it is not an exaggeration, right? It's not an exaggeration to say that heavenly immortals are 1,000 times more powerful than earthly immortals, right? By analogy with True Immortals, Xuan Immortals, Golden Immortals, Taiyi, Da Luo, Da Luo, you can fly around the vast wilderness countless times every hour. What will Nuwa travel with these 3,000 yuan? Do you take it slowly step by step?

This novel is particularly poisonous, how can I put it? This protagonist has nothing but his mouth and keeps maintaining a low level.