Rewriting the Ancient Gods

I took a quick look at it and found it to be pretty good-looking and quite creative. The one mentioned so far is the Chaos Spiritual Treasure All-Seeing Heavenly Book. According to the setting of this book, in the prehistoric times, the Chaos Spiritual Treasure turned into an innate treasure, which is on the same level as the Pangu Flag, the Tai Chi Diagram, and the Chaos Clock. It can imitate human supernatural powers, similar to the enhanced demonic version of the Xiao Wu Xiang Gong. The protagonists also include the Universe Diagram of Taiqing Sage who understands cause and effect, the best innate spiritual treasure, the nine fortune-telling treasures of heavenly secrets, the fortune-telling is not affected by the calamity, the enlightenment futon, the supreme treasure of merit and virtue, and a lotus tube, used for drawing lots, and a golden bell, which is often used to summon the human race. Among the human race, there are also the ancestral pavilion of the human race built by Dachao, the immortal firewood of the Sui people, and the grass skirt of Zhisheng, all of which are the most precious treasures of merit. There is also a holy spring of creation, which absorbs half of the merits of creation. It should have been turned into the Mother River and the Spring of Rebirth by Nuwa. According to the latest chapter, this book should have been turned into the Spring of Life and the Spring of Death by Saint Taiqing. The power is quite powerful. These two springs are used to spread the formation of Liangyi dust particles, which should be the formation of the human race to protect the clan. That's it for now. The biggest highlight of this book, personally, is that the fifty innate human races all have names, and I feel like they all have their own stories. The author can find fifty ancient names, which is really amazing.

It's ridiculous that a saint knows everything. He knows everything and has shattered the ancient world. When he was conferred as a god, did the saint become an actor? The kind of person who knows the future is at least the creator god. He has set a result and is in the process of evolution.

Not bad. Regarding the merits of creating people and establishing teachings, I feel that the cart has been put before the horse. We should do things first and then announce them to gain merits, rather than talk empty words first to gain merits and then do things.

In fact, in history, King Wu defeated Zhou and the Zhou Dynasty established a ritual and music system to replace the bloody sacrifices of the Shang Dynasty. This was a great progress in the history of our country. This was the beginning of the theocratic politics moving towards secular politics. If King Wu had not conquered Zhou, we might now be like the Arab world, with endless religious conflicts between Shiites and Sunnis.

After so many Huiyuan, with the protagonist as a prophet, the human race can only hunt and gather fruits, and they have to wait for Fuxi to invent fishing nets. Don't you think the sense of fragmentation is too strong?

Rewrite shit. Jiejiao is inherently good and bad. If there is a way to truly cultivate, then there will be. Most of them are man-eating monsters and evil spirits. And the cricket is like an ant. How can this trend of becoming a god be changed? At most, it will change the trend. Let Youdao Quanzhen, who is close to you, survive. Let Chanjiao also die a few golden immortals and a group of disciples. Plus some casual cultivators. Just in time to complete this list of gods. Moreover, Yuanshi Tianzun and I must have lost touch. They want to intercept the teachings and fill up the list of gods. Even weakening Jiejiao. But they certainly didn't want to destroy Tongtian's orthodoxy. Because destroying the Jiejiao orthodoxy would not benefit them.

I have commented on many Honghuang novels: Don't write Honghuang novels as fantasy novels, otherwise you will end up writing a eunuch. There are several routines in fantasy writing, including subduing the mind, suppressing the realm, and water word count This article covers all of them, especially suppressing the realm... Readers of ancient novels are the easiest group of people to be satisfied, and at the same time they are also the least easy to be satisfied. The easiest thing is that even if the author just follows the traditional prehistoric style of writing, most readers can still read it except for the occasional complaint that there is no new idea. The most difficult thing is because I hope to have new ideas and expand the traditional prehistoric plot design. Among them, the one who is most likely to be scolded is using fantasy routines to write about the prehistoric times, and he can only be scolded and said nothing 🤭

After reading it in one sitting, I can only say that the writing is very average, with an innate treasure in hand and two saints at my back. As the first batch of innate saints created by Nuwa herself, she did not want to educate the human race of mathematics and science, and did not hold power. Are you still planning for the human race? ? ? ? ? The whole text is full of compromises, including compromises with the demon clan, compromises with the witch clan, and tolerance towards Western religions. You have traveled through time, and you hold a treasure in your hand. How could the backbone of the human race be worse than without you? Then why are you traveling across time? ? ? There are saints in Western religions, but you dare not provoke them for fear of death. But there are also saints in the demon clan? ? ? ? Isn't this a typical case of whoever hits me, me reflecting on my problem, and then condemning him? ? ? ? ?

This ancient world is really small. The modern observable universe is 96 billion light-years, while this ancient world is only 96 million light-years. Ordinary humans can observe 96 billion light-years of the universe. This is not even a fraction of the universe. The scope of the ancient world is less than 100 million light-years. Then you mentioned in the article that Nuwa traveled to the ancient world for 3,000 yuan. How did she travel? With only 3,000 yuan, would you watch The Great Desolation countless times? Let alone 3,000 yuan, you can fly around Honghuang countless times in a day, and the plane can reach 1,000 kilometers per hour. Even if the Earth Immortal is 1,000 times as low as it is, it is not an exaggeration, right? It's not an exaggeration to say that heavenly immortals are 1,000 times more powerful than earthly immortals, right? By analogy with True Immortals, Xuan Immortals, Golden Immortals, Taiyi, Da Luo, Da Luo, you can fly around the vast wilderness countless times every hour. What will Nuwa travel with these 3,000 yuan? Do you take it slowly step by step?

This novel is particularly poisonous, how can I put it? This protagonist has nothing but his mouth and keeps maintaining a low level.

It's a very poisonous story. The male protagonist can't cheat the system. He has to possess a treasure. Those saints and powerful people are blind, even the Holy Mother, they don't take action. The most ridiculous ones are the Great Dao, the Way of Heaven, and the Saints. Pangu opened the sky and was actually a Saint. Nuwa was also a Saint and could only mend the sky. Hongjun only had the Dao of Mending the Heaven. Before the Tribulation of the Gods, the two saints established Buddhism in the West. Did Hongjun, the Taoist ancestor teacher, die? There are countless messes and poisons.

In general, as mentioned in the introduction, creating a martial art is also related to the cause and effect of the Wu clan. It cannot be said to be a creation, but can only be said to be an imitation. It's just a copy and paste. It won't work well after it's put on the shelves. There are a lot of poisons and things like reducing intelligence.

The human king is the co-owner of the human race, but in ancient times there were many obscene and evil sacrifices who used the name of gods to control the people. They relied on divine power. In the final analysis, the human king was still human rights. Nowadays, novels often make it appear that my fate is at my own discretion, and that the title of "Emperor" is an insult to the King of Humans. This is simply nonsense.

What nonsense! With 10 Huiyuan, the time traveler can play tricks on the human race! Also made a god

Too much bullshit! At least 1/3 of the latest chapter is water word count.

This protagonist does not dare to accept any magic weapons, nor does he dare to ask for any merits. Instead of taking advantage of Nuwa's protection to improve his strength, he goes out to wander around, without improving his strength at all. Like trash. People born later are better than the protagonist, so what's the use of you. In order to make up for not being able to collect magic weapons, the author brings his own plug-in to copy other people's magic weapons, which is 10/10 of the power. I don't dare to ask for a bunch of merits that can make up for the Heavenly Way. In order not to invent the merits of my surname, I even changed my name. I'm afraid of this and still think that I can win by becoming a god. It's really retarded.

This is the most spineless human race time traveler I have ever seen.

Pangu demonstrated the Tao with force and transformed into the prehistoric world, so the prehistoric world is the world of force. The brute force usually referred to is just the weak interaction force. The power of various rules, the power of merit, karma, the power of heaven, and even the power of the soul are all forces. There are also tunnels, which are not tunnels underground. Tunnels are more likely to be physical rules, taking the path of science fiction. Pangu incarnated in the prehistoric era, and all living beings in the prehistoric era were part of Pangu. The evolution of the prehistoric era was just Pangu's deduction for advancement. When the ancient world disappears, it means that the deduction has failed, and Pangu will appear again to reopen the ancient world and start the next round of deduction. The so-called time travel may be Pangu's experiment in this round based on the ideas from the last deduction.

How could an ordinary person go through it and rely on an innate treasure to fight against the entire prehistoric force?

After more than 30 chapters, I no longer have any desire to read.

Why is the human race the protagonist of heaven and earth? Who are you fooling? The true protagonist will be played like this. Look at the dragon and phoenix, the protagonists of heaven and earth in previous eras. At least they were glorious. The protagonist of heaven and earth has always been Pangu!

Nuwa didn't know that the protagonist had an innate treasure at the beginning, so why didn't she come and grab it?

Do you, the diode authors, really understand what an emperor is? Do you know what the emperor means? It's right there. What emperor can't compare to the human emperor? After King Zhou, no emperor has really convinced you. King Zhou himself is the emperor. Where did the human emperor come from and was he conferred by Zhou Wenqiang? 😅😅😅

This book is not interesting. The way of heaven is like a plank, and saints are like smallpox. Together they are like a ceiling. The setting is a bit incomplete. What is the realm of Pangu? There seems to be no such thing as Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian. There is only one way to become a saint.

Is the title of the book rewritten as "Feng Shen"? Has the whole book been rewritten? It's not the same that the human race is the pawn, but it's also the human race that makes the gods die? Oh, if you change it again and again, you will die in the end. Where are your efforts? There is no change at all, there is no change after hard work, the golden finger is of no use at all, it is just retreat, and then, there is no more!

1. The size of the prehistoric boundary is fixed. (Other prehistoric texts are boundless expansion to the outside world.) 2.1 A calamity of 50,000 Huiyuan? (In other prehistoric texts, the number of 1 Yuan is 129,600 Huiyuan). 1 Huiyuan is equal to 10,800 years.

Apart from the Three Emperors, how can future human kings be on an equal footing with the Great God, and what merits they have? The author's introduction is too loud.

From this novel, except for the Second Saint of the West and some monsters, they are all good people, and their personalities have been completely changed. You must know that everything in the prehistoric era is all conspiracy. (The protagonist did this for the human race, which made Fuxi the co-leader of the human race. Fuxi promoted fishing tools and similar things, surpassing the protagonist in terms of influence???) The protagonist has obtained merit many times, but the Second Saint of the West doesn't even know about it. It's really speechless.

Come on, watch more if you like, don't be a eunuch.

Some prehistoric times are too conspiracy theories. This novel does the opposite. Everything is for the good of the human race, but the human race is getting weaker and weaker.