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What is the gold content?

Sleeping with sister-in-law😅This...

This author must be immature. When writing a film or television fanfic, you must first understand the original plot, and then you can change the character description and plot direction. If you look at the plot and character relationships you wrote, it seems as if someone owes you eight million.

Overall, the first two dungeons were okay. If the first dungeon wasn't all very good, the results would have been much better. It's just that your pace is too fast. There are only so many chapters in one dungeon, and it's over as soon as you read it. It's very frustrating. Now the copy you wrote about living together is a lie. It is obvious that the gap between before and after is too big. Before, Xiao Huanxi was still a prodigal, but now he wants to share the same heart. If you write it like this, it will feel very fragmented. And you can add some original plot, you don't have to follow the plot all the time, you can write some comprehensive copy, for example, if you write it in Magic City, you can combine Thirty with Golden Years, Ode to Joy and start your own business (weaken your golden fingers). Or a copy I saw before was about traveling back to the Golden Years where the heroine inserted herself into their lives in high school. It's much better to read like this.

The one in the front was a character of a philandering CEO, and suddenly there was a plot involving him and his sister-in-law in the back, which instantly made me feel low. There are so many women, why not switch to a star model?

You are really in need of girls, young and old take it all. An 18-year-old guy likes a girl in her thirties or forties, and she can't stand it. You have to say that you can still understand it if you are 38, but if you are 18, man, you have three views.

Talent

It is my first time to write a book, and I have many various problems. If readers feel there are any problems or shortcomings, you can comment in detail to avoid the same problems in the future. ps: If you have any questions, please tell me. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. Don't curse anyone😁

Each world can be written longer. It ends as soon as it is introduced, and the little joy that has just been brought in comes to an end. I couldn't get enough of it.

There are too many student dramas, and they are not easy to write about on campus. .

Is the car fast or not?😏

If your classmates want to see what world they want to see, you can leave a message here and the author will try his best to satisfy you!

The author's writing style and sense of immersion are quite good! It's just that my classmate took too big a turn! Don't listen to other people's blind comparisons. You will become a thief in the first world, which means that the book friends you attract are all good at it! Suddenly a pure love warrior comes, isn't this an ex?

Love apartment, the elite of trouble

I can write about the most earthly fireworks.

The author can often change the introduction and write about the world he has experienced, so that others can see your book when they search for related titles.

Awesome, everything is good and you can play with it

Dude, what you are writing is a fanfic and you have a real world. You also want to add a fictional heroine in it. Dude, you have to distinguish the priorities. You were the main character by yourself, because you repaid him for giving birth to you, and you gave him two thousand a month, and then you took him shopping, took him to eat, and acted as a nanny for him. Then the heroine's father gave him money to start a business, and then he traveled back in time and couldn't find another woman, so he was manipulated. This is a bit too dramatic. Are you playing Wu Fei or your eldest brother? You are a filial person and they haven't divorced yet, and then the added girl is very pitiful. So just listen to her. This is too fragmented. You can write about your senior year in high school and Wu Fei and then she went to the United States. How did you talk to Wu Fei about going to school in the United States and working in the United States? It's a bit abstract.

Xiao Huanxi is a bit short. It's time to accept the three heroines. Li Meng can also accept it. Qiao Yingzi is pretty good.

It's all very good and well written. Especially the plot with Wu Fei is very good. The rest of it feels mediocre. Maybe it's not my favorite TV series and I can't watch it.