Another World: Starting from Awakening the Lowest Level Profession

The writing is very good, with some foreshadowing at the beginning and not too sudden at the end. I don't want to be a newcomer. Added to bookshelf and other updates.

Please. No matter in ancient times or modern times, it is impossible for slaves to make friends other than slaves. Do you like being a slave for so long if you can resist?

It was so cruel that I vomited 5 ml of blood.

The lowest level profession, no system, not a brainless novel, but also a lot of emotional lines Let me think about it Isn't this equivalent to "I worked as a manure digger in ancient times but fell into the Shura field"?

Take a woman who deceives you and meet her three times, and then she falls in love with the protagonist at first sight and is speechless😒. Generally, this kind of person either doesn't interact with you, or they just cheat him back together. Fortunately, I should just accept it later. I couldn't bear to say goodbye.

I haven't read the book yet, but after reading the introduction, I felt like I was dreaming back to more than ten years ago 😁

Character emotions and logic cannot withstand scrutiny

If you don't know how to write emotional lines, you don't have to write them. Thanks!

Looking at the introduction, I didn't expect this book to be included in the introduction.

Although Goldfinger is written, the improvement effect is not written clearly enough, there is no comparison, and the plot is awkward.

Judging from your content, it is indeed not for light novels. No wonder it was moved to the fantasy section.

I have read the latest chapter. I just want to give you some suggestions. If Lilith wants to accept it, it's better to do it as soon as possible. I feel that this kind of familiar saint is easy to hate. Don't do things like separation and misunderstanding or the male protagonist being suppressed by the church and slaughtering the church. If it can't be handled well, I will give up the book (I was fed Ollie before)

You can write whatever you want. It's amazing.

Let me first state that I think the author's writing is very good and I will definitely book it all in the future. I saw a place where girls are sent to school. Let me tell you how I feel. Subjectively, Lilith is the one who cares about the protagonist the most, but objectively it is definitely Lilith who hurts the protagonist the most. Lilith knows the protagonist's predicament, knows the solution, and knows how to do it. But in fact, she just looks on with a cold eye. What she really gives to the protagonist is the cheapest psychological comfort and a slap. (In the final analysis, the saint had a crush on the male protagonist because of his personality, but she never thought about solving the problem.) I think it is best to understand that the male protagonist has feelings for the magician. The invitation to the male protagonist to resist the enemy is regarded as an investment. Both subjectively and objectively, the male protagonist is given resources. The ones who let the male protagonist become cannon fodder are other adventurers (in the workplace, there are always leaders who need cannon fodder~). Because of this, the male protagonist quickly accumulated funds. As for the magician, the male protagonist helps others deal with their enemies. He is also a decent person, and it is normal to have emotions. As for the priest, he was just a man who lived a carefree life and then the world collapsed. Although the male protagonist threatened others, he also gave them a beam of light, so they fell in love with the male protagonist. I hope the author will make more appointments and like your book!

After reading the introduction and chapter names, I felt indescribably outrageous.

I just read Chapter 2, and I don't understand that the memory of the past life is awakened by the soul traveling from the mother's womb. Even in the magical world, the mother passed away at the age of 7, and the father brought the protagonist into the bride's house and was sold into the bride's family as a slave. The protagonist's parents were there before he was 7 years old. It is not a problem to be rich and wealthy to have enough food and clothing, and there are no natural or man-made disasters. I just said that the protagonist's father is delicious and lazy. Even if he was a slave from the age of 7 to almost 15 years old, the protagonist has not been well-conditioned and has nothing after 7 years. Is this too serious of assimilation? The protagonist has decades of life experience in another world from the mother's womb, plus the 15 years after rebirth. How many years has passed? Is he still a slave or a slave with poor health? There's nothing clever about this background design. You can either write about Awakening Su Hui, or you can just stop writing about time travel. It makes sense to write like this. A 20-year-old magician or professional from another world travels to China on Earth. He doesn't even have enough to eat and can only get food from garbage dumps to survive. There is no logic at all.

With the skill of "Absolute Digestion", if you are ruthless, you can directly fuck people and monsters.

If you want to kill Nathan, let him kill him. If you have the highest combat power, you can directly surrender to the enemy. What are you trying to do? This plot is a bit outrageous.

Character description and positioning, strengthen points

Don't you have a sense of involvement as a novice author?