Hogwarts Across the Universe

I found that many fans whitewashed Snape. The Shadowless Blade developed by Snape when he was in school was not meant for cutting watermelons and eating them. Only Snape could counter-spell that thing. Strictly speaking, that's an unforgivable curse. The Fuchsia was also developed by Snape. Snape and his companions used dark magic against Muggle wizards. He bullied Lily's best friend more than once. Snape didn't care at all when Lily came to him. He doesn't care about bullying Muggle wizards, nor does he care about using dark magic against Muggle wizards. Snape has always been a pure bloodist. Nothing had changed from before school to Lily's death.

White Devil Tom Riddle Lily's husband, leader of the Marauders Snape True Adventurer Lockhart Dark Lord Harry Potter Minister of Magic Malfoy Saint Ron Hogwarts Principal Grindelwald

The idea is good, much better than those people doing Gwent in school.

After watching a few pictures😂, I didn't understand who Pigfoot was. If it was little Tom, then his only role in the front was to open the portal😂

Hogwarts School of Music! The ancient wizard understood the true meaning of magic from music! He understands the rhythm of the heart sounds of all things in the world, so he has the magic musician! A powerful magician can use singing to cast magic, but this requires a little bit of the magician's mouth, tongue and throat, so he uses musical instruments more often to cast magic! Therefore, "Ollivander's Musical Instruments Store" has provided high-quality musical instruments to British magicians for thousands of years! Compared with the wizard, the magician may be a little slower in casting speed, but his attack range is extremely broad! Therefore, this world has a magic name "Team Connection" to avoid accidental damage to friendly forces.

Click on the table of contents and see the first chapter: Tom Riddle, the White Devil. I didn't dare to click in... 🥵 Damn it! I'm afraid of being poisoned... So, please ask Shen Nong. Anyone who has seen it and is still alive can tell me, can I watch this?

Finally, I came across a Harry Potter fanfic that is not the same as the old-fashioned ones. This is fanfic, not the ones (going to school → teaming up with the protagonist → fighting Voldemort) which are really boring at all. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs.

The idea of ​​Hogwarts Magic Chef School is really interesting. Coupled with the setting of Hogwarts Multiverse, this book is currently full of ideas.

Personally, the idea of ​​a magical world with different technical routes like "Magic Chef Academy" is the winning point of this book compared to other books. So I personally hope (emphasis: personal opinion) to see more magical worlds with "skewed technology trees" in the future, rather than pulling people to change the original story line. Suggestion: After the protagonist has passed through the world of Magic Chef and his strength has almost reached the top, it is better to hide behind the scenes in the main world. The subsequent multi-worlds will write this kind of different magic world, and the main perspective can bring some young wizards to experience different magics, such as Neville (swordsmanship → magic and martial arts), Hannah, Seamus (explosion → steampunk). (This narrative perspective can also copy and paste the original narrative rhythm)

I feel really weird about clearing James' name, because the bully Jin Pen has washed his hands, so he is a good person! No matter what bad things he has done before, he can be forgiven! Although Snape was a good person at first, he took the initiative to join the gang because he was bullied. Even if he later changed his ways, he would never be forgiven! The truth of this value really surprised me!

The more I write about it, the more I lose my standard. It looks like it was written by two people compared to the previous dozens of chapters 😅 The original characters written by me are not like the original characters. Most of the time, the original characters have nothing to watch. These chapters were read in ten seconds

If the author wants to be vertical, don't write about the Demon Chef every day. You have to change it, and who is your protagonist? Group portraits are not like group portraits. Write Voldemort fiercely at the beginning. What's the difference between changing the protagonist later?

I was enjoying reading the Demon Chef volume for a long time when I suddenly found out that a certain chapter mentioned that the main world of the protagonist was under the wizard-Muggle war launched by Grindelwald, and the number of Muggles in the world was reduced to one percent of what it was before the First World War (the original saying is that there is no one in a hundred). So cruel? Isn't it true that a certain country whose name cannot be mentioned has 400 million dead and is even more cruel than little Japan? How does this make readers feel about Grindelwald?

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What the hell, the front part is obviously very good, but the back part is okay even if it is weak, but you feed me such a big lump at the end? ? What is the difference between this and 2.5 Enlightenment?

It's a pity that this book is not popular. It has great ideas, good writing style, and high quality. It's a pity that the results are not good, and it is not popular.

Since ordinary people can also give birth to wizards, and the descendants of hemp wizards are also wizards, why do we say that wizards are not new humans? Wizards are obviously a higher evolution of human beings on the road from adapting to nature to transforming nature (after all, the history of wizards is short in the history of evolution). Muggles are proud of their offspring as new humans and send them to school and enter the world of new humans. In the end, if things develop, won't they all be wizards?

As a poor man who prostitutes himself for free, I only read an advertisement in order to make a statement I think this novel has something that many other novels don't have, namely creativity. I don't know what's going on with novels now. I don't know if it's a problem of the times or if novels have reached a bottleneck in their development, or because there are too many tutorials for novices. Many new writers lack creativity. I think a novel can be poisonous occasionally, but it can't live without it. I really like this novel, it's very creative and the author also has his own understanding of Harry Potter.

This book is really well written by the author and it is full of laughs. I won't go into the previous plot. After all, the author has explained it. Anyone who didn't insist on reading it will leave. It's quite enjoyable to read it until the end. It's understandable that Snape's death in his father's world was very sudden, and there might be some external cause in the real world. But I saw a few problems from 64% to 72%. One is that when you move from the father world to the food world, you change the world. Why does the protagonist's personality seem to have changed? It's not the character expressed in the text, but the way of doing things. It feels very fragmented. Your power level has been raised to the peak under Voldemort, and then you go to the food world. Just switch to Dumbledore's method of doing things. Do you think it's strange that Grindelwald handed over Dumbledore? You took into account the rules of the world, glory and dark rituals and didn't kill anyone. Maybe your setting is that everyone knows how to do the magic kitchen, but there is always a question of priority. All kinds of little rubbish are a bit too much. It seems that the author's moral level is really high, and this is also the case in reality. A good person, but as an ordinary person, I feel a little frustrated watching it, so I have a few words to complain about. The second point is that a long text was written in a very short plot time, so I feel that the golden finger and power have been extremely weakened in ability and presence. Although the author has the ability to complete the subsequent plot, but the part with the wandering magic chef looks really weak, I feel I didn't control the overly childish and cowardly look. What kind of trash can't even block the group soul-stealing curse and still negotiates. In any world, strength will always be the first thing to tear off the fig leaf. Lily can break the dark ritual. I feel that the author is not afraid that this will completely change the style, so I didn't want to write it like this. So I don't feel much after following it every day. The longer the readers read, the stronger the tearing feeling.

I think the author said he wanted to write under a trumpet, could you please tell me what the author's trumpet is?

This book looked good at first glance. The more I write, the worse it gets. Disappointed

It's better to be original. The soil of the original work is only so small, and the world view created by Rowling is so big. There are many problems in her setting that cannot be justified. The story surrounding the seven years of Hogwarts has been written badly by countless fans. Almost all ideas have been used, including other possibilities of if. The main plot of "Harry Potter destroys Voldemort" is too small. Writing fan fiction is always limited by the rules of the original work and it is difficult to expand, just like it is difficult to cook with a few fixed old ingredients.

Brother, I just ordered all the orders. Stop being a eunuch.

As long as there are no eunuchs, I will definitely get married🙄💅💅

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Where have all the subscriptions gone? I remember this was a book on the shelf. Could it be that I turned on automatic subscription?