I, Li Xunhuan, Just Want to Cultivate Immortality!

The writing is indeed quite interesting. Li Xunhuan's ability to change his fate can be considered a relief. However, the name of the cultivation technique, "Devouring Heaven and Earth of All Realms," sounds a bit like something from twenty years ago.

Not only is the writing poor, but the style also seems deliberately imitative of Gu Long? It's like trying to draw a tiger but ending up with a dog...

With the addition of another member, the army of cultivators is poised to grow even stronger in no time.

I originally wanted to write this, but you did, sob sob sob.

The premise is quite appealing, but the writing is too verbose and annoying to read.

Did you know that Li Xunhuan's fiancée was his cousin? Use your brain. He was a third-place scholar in the imperial examinations, skilled in medicine, martial arts, and even crime-solving. Was he stupid? He did it on purpose. He had tuberculosis, an incurable disease in ancient times, and it was hereditary. He simply entrusted his fate to the wrong person.

If you don't have Gu Long's talent, don't force it. What a piece of garbage you wrote on such a good subject.

Too weak. He's only slightly stronger than the original Li Xunhuan; he doesn't give off any sense of cultivating immortality.

I've subscribed, but it's too weak, comparable to Gu Long's works.

It's watchable, but it's too superficial; it's mostly just descriptions of inner thoughts and such.