I, Li Xunhuan, Just Want to Become an Immortal!

Character evaluation: double standard monster 🥱

I feel that the writing is indeed interesting. Li Xunhuan can change his destiny and it is a regret. The name of the immortal cultivation technique is a bit like 20 years ago.

Not only is the writing impeccable, but the technique is still trying to imitate Gu Long? ? Painting a tiger cannot be compared to a dog...

The army of immortal cultivators is adding a member, and it will become bigger and stronger soon.

I originally wanted to write this, but you wrote it, woo woo woo

The setting is quite attractive, but the writing is too wordy, which makes it annoying to read.

Did you know that Li Xunhuan's fiancée is his cousin? Use your brain, he is a Tanhualang, good at medicine, martial arts, and solving crimes. Is he stupid? He did it on purpose. He had tuberculosis. In ancient times, tuberculosis was an incurable disease and tuberculosis was hereditary. He was just a trustworthy person. From Li Xunhuan's nickname, we know that he is a decisive person. Little Li's flying swords are not in vain. He is the best in the world. His psychological game is only in duels with people of his own level. Long Aotian is not worthy of him, so he returned to Shen Yuan because Long Aotian failed his cousin. He wanted Long Aotian to be ruined, his wife and children were separated, and he died miserably amidst the scolding. He did it. The two were never on the same level. For Li Xunhuan, he would not marry his cousin. He chose someone to entrust Shen Yuan and his cousin to him. It was not Long Aotian or someone else. It was just that he was too hasty at the time and made a mistake.

Without Gu Long's talent, there would be no hard water. What kind of nonsense would you write on such a well-written subject?

Too weak, just a little stronger than the original Li Xunhuan, without any feeling of cultivating immortality

Originally, what I wrote earlier was fine, but what happened next? If you deliberately imitate Gu Long, you will be in trouble. Both water and grinding. Do you know that you don't have the writing skills?

It's watchable, but it's too watery. It always describes psychological activities and introduces them.

I subscribed, but it's too watery, compared to Cologne.

I came here for Xiao Li Feidao. In other words, I came here for the martial arts IP. Cultivation of immortality in the martial arts world is one thing, but the setting of the martial arts world is. If you continue to write this, it will almost become the world of cultivation of immortals. What else are you writing about Xiao Li Feidao? Don't change it in the magic~_~. Of course, I didn't say that I'm not allowed to change it, otherwise I'd just read the original work, but if you're trying to attract traffic by using other people's tricks, just respect the original work's combat power settings, and don't be too exaggerated. As soon as the Paradise Worms from the Master of the Paradise Cave came out, what did I do? Those group of martial arts masters who can block the sky and the sun can still listen to the instructions. Who are they? What weapons are there? All the insects are eaten by you.

Guo Jing, Murong Fu, Zhang Wuji, Li Xunhuan, which one is this?

After reading more than 20 chapters, I finally ran out of patience. In today's society, the ancient dragon Jin Yong is resurrected at the starting point. They are also the authors of the crime, not to mention the imitators like you.

What you wrote doesn't look like a novel at all. What you wrote is like a spectator commenting on it. To be honest, it's quite unpleasant. I came here to read the novel myself, not to read the commentary. The author can change the way he writes it.

Let's start. Write less about women. It's not that you can't write, it's your writing style that makes you stupid when writing about women. Since I can't write about women well, I'll write other plots. Many authors don't have female protagonists because they know they don't know how to write about women.

Guo Jing, cultivating immortality Murong Fu, cultivating immortality Ding Xiu, cultivating immortality Li Xunhuan, cultivating immortality Who else, please fill in

Okay, okay, Li Xunhuan from the ancient dragon world has also become an immortal, right?

Li Xunhuan, who is a cultivator of immortality, did not write the compelling style boasted in the book. Also, even if Gu Long Risheng writes the current online articles according to his martial arts writing style, the results may not be very good, let alone this book?

When I saw the name, I felt like I had read it before. I looked at it carefully and couldn't say it was exactly the same. I could only say it was copied and pasted. It was good. Now I looked at the date and found that it was the one I read before. The dead eunuch was resurrected.

The writing is too poor and the logic is as weak as water

Oh, this is the first time I've seen someone use this crap to write

Li Xunhuan, a cultivator of immortality, I only know of one novel "Cun Mang"

The writing is too vicious. After all, how can one cultivate immortality in the world of martial arts? There is no such thing as spiritual energy. If there is any reason, others will not be able to discover it. It's too dimensionally reducing.

The writing is so bad, it feels like AI, there is too much nonsense