
Pirates: Get the Phantom Beast Devil Fruit at the Beginning
海贼:开局捞到幻兽种恶魔果实
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 70k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Second Generation
The phantom beasts of the Warring States Period are all in the form of the Great Buddha, not the Tathagata Buddha form. It's a bit weird to call it the Sun Wukong form. You might as well call it the Stone Monkey form.
I can't bear it anymore! * Today I went to watch some Sun Wukong videos and finished reading your novel. The more I thought about it, the more angry I became. I understand that the protagonist's mentality needs to change, but what did you cultivate during those three years of practice? What the hell is this mentality? Just go with the flow? Depend on! The Jade Emperor recognizes me, the King of Heaven follows me, the twenty-eight constellations are afraid of me, the Lord of Nine Obsidian Stars is afraid of me, the gods of prefectures and counties kneel to me, the Heaven of Dongyue is afraid of me, the ten kings of hell are slaves, no matter the three realms or five divisions, all the gods in the ten directions are familiar with me, and I am known as the number one demon in the past! The ability of Chinese mythology to handle things is not as good as yours! I really can't stand it anymore!
Sun Wukong is the male protagonist of Shuangwen! What are you being afraid of? What Sun Wukong form? If you really want to write Tiao Chong and dare not call him Qitian, I will admit it, but you are also a fan of the Great Sage and I am speechless. If you write this novel as a cool male protagonist, no one will blame you, Great Sage! It's strange that he keeps a low profile despite his ability! The Dapeng bird in the original work was also enhanced by the TV series. The original work could not defeat Sun Wukong at all. On the way to the west, the Monkey King suffered the disadvantage of having no magic weapon. He only had one skill and an iron rod that could only grow bigger and smaller, but he was still invincible!
It's not to be arrogant, but to be proud. When it comes to dressing up and going to a restaurant to eat, the protagonist should go back to the first house after hitting the wall one after another and force his way in. In the temple in the Wuji Kingdom in the novel, Tang Monk went in and was polite to each other. He looked at the four Vajra statues and respectfully paid homage. When he saw the three golden Buddhas, he lamented why there were no golden statues of Buddha in the Tang Dynasty. Then he saw the host. After saying hello politely, he was ridiculed for his tattered clothes. He almost cried with grievance. Then Sun Wukong went in and saw the four kings completely ignoring him. When he saw the golden Buddha, he cursed you for being a false statue made of clay. What kind of golden body did you want? When he saw the snobbish host monk, he even yelled at him. Finally, the host led five hundred monks to welcome Tang Monk into the temple.
How is the writing? Please give me your comments.
Author, you don't actually have to suppress the protagonist like this. The blazing eyes, the copper skin and the iron bones, the seventy-two transformations, and the clones are all possessed by Sun Wukong. Moreover, adding a great sage to the Fa Tian Xiang Di feels very lousy, just like a nouveau riche. The phantom beast itself is the biggest cheat. What does it matter if it goes against the will of heaven? After studying for three years, Sun Wukong can already fight with the first-tier people in the heaven. There is something wrong with what you wrote. You can actually read it. The book "One Piece, I Want to Be the King of the Navy" feels like it is written like the Monkey King. The fruit form is also the Monkey King. Nika dares to call himself the Sun God. Why can't Sun Wukong be called the Monkey King? Could it be that the Great Sage is not as good as that grass-headed god?
It is useless to eat any fantasy beast if you are weak. The Nikka that Luffy eats is not very strong from the beginning. If you are not strong enough to eat it, it will just change from a trash fish that can be killed with a knife to a trash fish that can be killed with a single shot.