American Comics: from the Old Uncle Wolf, He Becomes Omniscient and Omnipotent

Hello, I feel that the mutant ability of learning and evolution has been used well. You have been running away for more than ten years without learning any fighting skills. I don't understand the firearms. You were threatened by a gangster and there were at least a dozen poison points.

These recent pictures are really disgusting. Why is the main character still a cowering disgusting person? Asking Captain America to help hide the truth? Why are you always hiding? If you really want to hide, then don't do those things? Eugene is being pushed around like a dog. Do you really think of Eugene as your boss? For you group, he protected you? Do you need his protection? If you are being chased and have no place to hide, then I am helping you, but are you? After I subscribed, I was really pissed off. I feel like the author himself is not very old, and his handling of interpersonal relationships is really bad. I feel really angry after reading these few pictures, they are slow and verbose. If this is the case, I have to leave. Of course, you are not worse than me, right, but there are definitely many like me. I can only say that you should try your best.

The protagonist's ability is said to be learning ability, but he only learned mutant abilities. He didn't learn any other language, knowledge, shooting, fighting, or fitness. He ran around for so long without making any progress. When encountering difficulties, his mutant abilities were revealed, haha.

It looks okay, but can you not bring traditional web novel routines into American comics? What are you hiding? Hiding, people's lives depend on it, and it's really inexplicable that you are still hiding your ability. This is not a slap in the face story that pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. You hide it, but you feel that the protagonist is awkward and not like a man.

I feel like a loser. Apart from my mutant ability, I'm just a loser.

I'm almost fed up with the protagonist. In the previous part, including the part with Eugene, I just felt that the protagonist still needed to be hidden, but now the more I watch, the more frustrated I feel. You say the protagonist is weak? Spider-Man's abilities + youth version of Magneto + youth version of Professor You are so strong, but you are still restrained, and you don't even dare to spray trash that you know is Hydra. If you can't protect your own people, even if you can't save your own people, you still have to go to SHIELD with all your shame. They are played like monkeys by Snake Shield, and they don't dare to expose the fact that SHIELD is Snake Shield. I really don't know what the protagonist is doing. Originally the writing was quite good, to be honest, but now the more I read it, the more rubbish the protagonist feels.

The protagonist is a hypocrite. He can't even be called a villain. His level is too low. In order to show off, he risked his life. He experimented with spider senses in front of the enemy and exposed all his abilities. He was so strict about hiding it from his teammates. He forgot to mention that he had his own secrets. It's really disgusting.

. . . . It's still too slow. What can I say? The overall feeling is that the performance is very awesome, but in fact the main character looks very rubbish, so it feels very rubbish and a bit awkward.

At first it felt like it was eye-catching and the setting was good. But I have read nearly 100 of them. The protagonist is very capable, but it can be said that it is ineffective. He is timid. I wonder what you are guarding against? There are more than a hundred photos and it doesn't feel good at all. Give the protagonist such a big deal. What's the use? It felt like it was the same with or without the protagonist, and the more I watched it, the more disappointed I became.

The plot is a bit unsightly, even being threatened by someone named Xie, is Pigfoot a fool? Bai has been on the run for 2 years, can't we just kill him? This is written a bit poisonously

It turns out to be you, the big red supermarket disgusted many readers last time. Let me see how this book turns out!

It's not just the readers who feel aggrieved, but the characters also feel aggrieved. Oh my god, a glimpse of the past reveals that the author may also be aggrieved. At least when he wrote the article, he had the idea of ​​​​writing a plot of aggrievedness. He handed over Magneto to Hydra, hid it for so many years, and then was found. The author is really not afraid of being arrogant in this way of writing.

After reading more than 140 chapters, I really can't help but complain a few words. This is a novel that is not very satisfactory in terms of plot and character description. The author uses his literary talent comparable to that of a junior high school essay to describe to us a compromising faction with low sense of existence, low IQ, a virgin, and excessive care about the government. You must know that the highlight of this book is the post-mutant era and the ability to learn and evolve, but I only saw the intrigues with the underground base and S. H. I. E. L. D., And did not show the Omega-level abilities it should have at all. I hope the author can make the protagonist a little tougher and highlight the highlights in the future.

What I wrote above is okay, but it has been strange since I learned Spider-Man's abilities. The protagonist's abilities are too complex, and he has everything he lacks. It's not that satisfying. I just feel it's a mess. Let's sort out the plot first.

It's all up to now. The author, you are talking about how great the potential of the protagonist is and how powerful he is now. What's the result? Being manipulated in various ways, being barked around like a dog, among other things, you are here to help, and you are being held accountable by a small agent? Can I still save some face? Since you're so bad, don't act like you're so capable, okay, it's disgusting to watch.

I probably know why I can't stand this book. He is submissive in front of his teammates, not daring to reveal his strength or use his abilities. Punch hard in front of the enemy, regardless of whether the violence is exposed or not. Don't tell me that you will kill all the enemies in the later stage. If your teammates are not worthy of your trust, then what teammates do you want?

Didn't you check it at all? You have many sentences and few words, at least four or five times. I want to tell you in the comment area, you also set up a reward of 100 points.

Let me put it another way, those who come here for omniscience and omnipotence, thinking that you want to follow the path of God and become God or follow the words and deeds of the powerful, now give people the feeling of being useless.

I don't understand why you need to hide your abilities. Why don't you just tell Professor

I rewarded another 500 points. I know it's very little 😟😟 but I hope you can keep updating 😄😄

The writing is very good, moving forward slowly and slowly.

Nice writing, look at it

Can it be refined?

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