Mystery: I Am the Chosen of Khorne

As Khorne, he is not a warrior, and he uses magic instead of melee combat. He immediately uses his ax to blast the enemy's head.

It's an ordinary Crane-style mystery fanfic. It can be seen that the author doesn't want the protagonist to be a character like Khorne, which is probably an old trick of the Savior. If the protagonist and Khorne were tied together to perform a blood sacrifice to the Blood God Skull Sacrifice as a group of Outer Gods, it would not only be novel and consistent with the first impression, but also millions of times more interesting than the current plot. You don't have to create a new hunter by selecting a hunter in sequence. It's easier to advance by getting a force like the Church, and it's easy to set up with the blessing of Khorne. The ending, of course, is to provoke a war, become a god and unify the world, and then have a big fight with other monsters and monsters. You can even write a paragraph about international politics and national governance that P Society war criminals love. As for the plot between Xiao Ke and Lu Mian... This needs to be dealt with according to the circumstances, but according to this context, it will probably be cut (laughs)

Let's see if he will become a pure believer of the Blood God, or if he will suddenly become an official and serve the country through life and death.

What about the Order? What about the Blood Army? Where is the big devil? What about Jingguan? You tricked us into watching the savior you wrote, right? We are tired of watching the savior. Why not let the protagonist become a demon?

I originally thought the protagonist was a time traveler. First I went to 40k to get strength for nothing. Then I ran to the Mysterious Wave, but I didn't expect that four vendors came here to develop followers. Will the other three come over later? It's impossible for just this one to come over. And it also developed a single protagonist.

Book friends, please write down some of your favorite Khorne titles.

This has nothing to do with rivers of blood. Are you saying that a coin that plays magic is blessed by Khorne? It may be a bit difficult for the author to write about Tzeentch. Even if he writes about Slaanesh, it fits the theme better than Khorne.

I gave up. After reading the latest chapter, the plot is getting more and more confusing. It used to be a mid-to-high-level mystery fanfic with some elements of Khorne, but now it is even good enough to be considered a good mystery fanfic. There is nothing that everyone wants to read. If you say you can't write a serious Khorne, then you don't write like a formula, right? You don't write a mystery plot at all, so why did you bring in these two audiences in the first place? You might as well write an original one.

I don't know if it's good or not, but there is a novel called (Viking Warband). That one is a real rogue, who is blessed with armor, sacrifices to the four gods, human fairies and the Jingjing Temple, and plants people in the ground. It's a pity, it must be gone. This is the first time I read such a well-written novel.

It is better to write about Khorne than to write about Tzeentch. He can mess up things everywhere and still say that everything is according to plan. If Khorne can take action, he will not force and plot more, and it is also for greater killing.

Kill, kill, kill, kill! You despicable things, low-level creatures, all die under this god-breaking thunderbolt!! This is my stereotype of Khorne warriors

Killing, killing, killing, killing, finally found a novel about Khorne

A river of blood is nothing to write about. It is very dangerous for the protagonist to kill innocent people indiscriminately. I don't want to be banned yet, so I'm sorry to the book friends who want to watch The Killing Quartet, but I can't write 😭😭

Don't let down the grumpy red kobold sociopath maniac in a wheelchair, he has no patience and will unleash his dogs on you!

What a heck in Uncanny Khorne, a little god who can only live in the small river system?

A small quirk - Russell once mentioned the God of All Machines

Rivers of blood, rivers of blood, boring, I want to see rivers of blood

What I am writing now is like a medieval alternate world series. All events are basically triggered by the actions of the protagonist. It feels like the world will not move. It lacks a sense of urgency. It is one-on-one for a long time. It does not have the style of Khorne God Chosen rushing into the enemy's formation in front of the two armies and using two big axes to chop the fallen into mincemeat. Secondly, Intis has completed the bourgeois revolution long ago. The main components of the upper class are capitalists rather than landed aristocrats.

Well, it's a bit boring, it doesn't feel like Khorne, there are too few kills, and there's too little blood.