Cultivation: Start from the Perfection of Golden Elixir

What is the protagonist doing? The plug-in is very powerful, but my brain is not working well. I stayed outside for a few months, and when my talent points are full, and I break through the Nascent Soul, even if I return to the sect, who cares whether you have completed the task or not? It is purely for the sake of the plot, and it is all about such a big thing. If that is all about the sects that only have the Golden Core Nascent Soul, shouldn't all the sects be exterminated?

The action of Pig's Knuckle must be based on Goldfinger, otherwise most readers will not be able to accept it and will feel that Pig's Knuckle is a retard.

When I read the title of the novel, I expected Jindan to be pretentious. A Jindan monk is like the ancestor of a sect. Yuanying is rare, and no matter how advanced he is, he is very rare. Instead of this, there is no sense of violation if you change your cultivation level to the Qi training period. But the site is just like that, there are very few that can write well. Once the map reaches the level, it will be changed immediately, and only the perspective of small characters will be written.

He doesn't have the magnanimity of a Jindan monk, he looks like an outer disciple of Qi training.

After recovering from a serious illness, he can beat people in the whole sect, which is very powerful.

Wuxia and Xianxia have fallen into a vicious circle of upgrading - fighting monsters - upgrading again - fighting monsters again. Why do people practice martial arts? From a high point of view, he is a great chivalrous person who serves the country and the people. At the lowest level, it is for power, fame, money and women. Not to fight monsters. Is it always martial arts and skills that defeat people? It would be better to hold a martial arts Olympics. What is the most powerful thing in Jianghu? It's conspiracy, it's poison and gunpowder, it's the hero's shortness of breath, it's the love between his son and his daughter. The current protagonist is simply more of a model drama than a model drama. Gao Weizheng, who is so slick, doesn't even have normal emotions, let alone a sex life.

The book is okay, but the writing style is too immature

Quickly, take out his stones. You see, he is in so much pain that he is almost hysterical.

It looks like the male protagonist is responsible for pimping the supporting characters so that the supporting characters can open a harem. The male protagonist plays the role of a phoenix at night and begs for a phoenix to work as a eunuch and find someone to fence with.