The School Beauty Said She Lost Her Memory

Premise: No matter good or bad, pitfalls and foreshadowing are all artificially defined. A thousand people have a thousand Hamlets, and other works will not be ignored. Of course, you are right. Let me talk about something nice: the plot is written smoothly, and the sweet daily life is satisfying; the main line is the emotional line between Xiang Ran and Liu Shuyao, and the main line is fully advanced; the characters appear vividly on the paper, and the personality is very well portrayed; the main focus is on the emotional line, Material life ideal (petty bourgeoisie level or above) (maybe more suitable for female channels?) Something unpleasant: there are few branch plots (personal opinion), for example: ①Who caused the car accident and how to deal with it? Why doesn't Shuyao's family know? ②Why did high school Shu Yao choose art major? I wish the author a bright future.

Wow, oh, oh, I am a bitch who fantasizes about the goddess looking at me every day. This book makes me think that the goddess is my bitch, so I have to read it now. I have now made a decision that goes against my ancestors. I will spend three cents from my dog ​​licking fund of one dollar and forty-eight cents every month to reward the author. After all, I still have to lick my nine goddesses. One dollar and forty-eight cents a month is very nervous in itself. Now I have to spend three cents to reward you. I hope the author will not be ignorant and kowtow to me every day. Isn't it too much?

I personally suggest that the author's male protagonist's state of refusing and welcoming should not continue for too long, otherwise it will appear that the male protagonist's emotional intelligence is low, and other aspects do not reflect the male protagonist's low emotional intelligence. If it is reflected in things like latitude, it is very inconsistent. It is understandable to continue for a period of time because of inexperience at the beginning, but it will be very jarring if it continues for too long. Note: This is just a personal opinion. If the author disagrees, just follow it at your own pace.

It's better to believe that I am Qin Shihuang. It's too science fiction and a bit difficult to understand.

There are so many interactions between the fat man and the heroine, why not just write about the fat man talking to the heroine 😅

You don't need so many professional terms to write a dog-food article. As a coder, I can understand that I want to show off my professionalism in front of people who don't understand, but can I change the platform?

It's understandable that you write a fat man as a wingman, but why is there so little interaction between the male and female protagonists? Who is here to see you write code, buddy?

Can you please stop calling the heroine the school belle? It's as if the heroine's name is the school belle. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

I persisted for 28 chapters and still can't stand it anymore. What the hell is the male protagonist?

I like to watch dogs licking dogs and boiling sheep😭😭

The male protagonist has already let down his guard in Chapter 20. He is completely unworthy of the character design that was rendered in the early stages. He even took on a solo role with a strange adolescent boy. From this point on, it is hard to watch.

So the heating point has not yet reached? Let me tell you if you have finished it. If the ink is like this, I will not read it. It feels like the book "The Japanese Girlfriend of a Top Scholar" that I read a few years ago. However, the writing style of this book is a bit poor and the plot is not very attractive. The book was so sweet that it could make the reader anxious. I quit after reading it halfway. The male protagonist created by the author is like a dead-head. The impression is too deducted.

Is this Liu Cixin's new work?

No, the author doesn't read readers' comments. Why is he still talking about the school beauty after so many chapters? Can't he change his name to a more serious name? Do you call your friend the school beauty all day long? 🤔

Looking at this cover, I thought it was my girlfriend from the future.

Thanks to this novel's popularity, otherwise the content of the first dozens of chapters would be full of Minotaur material and the fat protagonist.

Love stories, straight shots, cool stories, sweet stories (no nonsense) No villain) 🔥Male protagonist: Xiang Ran, "a scholarly family" "A wooden person in the early stage, but a bit of emotional intelligence in the later stage", "a god of learning", "technical geek", "very good at playing basketball", "taught by the female protagonist to have emotional intelligence", "low emotional intelligence" "Not good at taking photos" "Can't have girlfriends who envy others" ✨ Heroine: Liu Shuyao "from a business family" "Fantasy control" "YY control" "Art control" "Super jealous of boyfriend" "Substitute the fantasy super master" "Move", "Silly and sweet (commentary)", "Clingy bug", "Strict husband control", "Secretly in love", "Brave and straight (brave and graceful state)", "Eccentric (compassionate)", "Full of astringency", "Eager to learn" 🎉Knot Bureau: Ending of Engagement (Met parents, propose, then parents discuss formal engagement) ❤️Personally impressive plot: ①The heroine sits on the hospital bed acting coquettishly, complaining that the hero comes too late. (Chapter 1) ②The female protagonist is disgusted with the "blind date" at home and tells the male protagonist. (Chapter 80) ③The heroine's memory has been restored, the moon is high, and she is in an anxious mental state. (Chapter 82-84) ④The female protagonist had a fever and was sent to the hospital overnight. The male protagonist rushed to the hospital as soon as he learned the news the next day, looking anxious. (Chapter 88) ⑤The female protagonist is painting in another place, and the male protagonist asks for leave to find his wife. Fireworks explode and the male and female protagonists hold hands. (Chapter 114-116) 6 The male and female protagonists play in an amusement park and kiss at the top of the Ferris wheel (OS: sitting in the frame of the Ferris wheel, fireworks bloom, and the two kiss. "Freeze moment") (Chapter 210) ... ⑦ The male protagonist proposes to Liyue Island, with fireworks rising and blooming behind him. (Chapter 218) ... The above can be supplemented) 🥇Highlights: "Amnesia and mistaken YY for reality" "Amnesia at the beginning and a boyfriend" "Memory recovery" "Girl chasing a man at the beginning" 🥈 Evaluation: The early setting is quite good and quite sweet. It gets a bit monotonous later on. The main reason is that the setting of the male protagonist is not particularly good, and the male protagonist programmer does not have much time to fall in love. It is not suitable for writing love stories, so there is no point to write later. There are too many professional words in it, which is really easy to criticize. This book is really sweet, but it's a bit too sweet. "Too sweet will make you tired", please be more lovesick! Spread more dog food! More hidden outfits🖊️! I especially like the part of climbing a mountain to watch the sunset and walking under the stars in the evening. It's really picturesque. I really like it. (The male and female protagonists kiss affectionately while the fireworks are blooming, "Looking up and kissing!!! It's really killing me"~ This is my YY service, it's boring) There are few descriptions of the male and female protagonists' family encounters, and the focus is on "sweetness". If you like to read cool and sweet stories, this book is very good and very sweet. (OS: Although mothers-in-law generally like sons-in-law, they still have to be a little bumpy to make them sweeter and more natural. Now it's a bit sweet for the sake of sweetness.) Note: There is one thing that is particularly important! Don't always be the school beauty! School belle! School belle! Did the male protagonist forget the female protagonist's name? 🙄Really speechless. Rolled my eyes. GDP 🥉Suggestion: This book can bring some high school lines into it, which can enrich the high school lines of the male and female protagonists, and also enrich the content of the article. It can also be written as an extra, hahaha. The setting of the male protagonist is not particularly good. If it were changed, it would enrich the business story. In the commercial article, there is a sweet cross between being a bitch, bitching the male and female roommates, or using the commercial achievements to hide the pretense🖊️. It can greatly enrich the content. (Summary of suggestions: ①Enrich high school lines for male and female protagonists ②Modify male protagonist's university major setting ③Add business segments ④Intersection of business and love, add dog food and hidden clothes🖊️) Read novels and listen to music: Lost Heartbeat (accompaniment) #The above is my personal opinion on this book, please see the comments section for different opinions

The setting is quite interesting, but the overall feeling is average. The most disappointing thing is the performance of the male protagonist. He always rejects the female protagonist, and his attitude is also quite problematic. And according to the doctor, does this count as the male protagonist following the female protagonist's memory and becoming her boyfriend? I feel very hurt that it doesn't fit the setting. How can any normal boyfriend and girlfriend be so humble? We know that the male and female protagonists are not the same, but based on the setting of this disease, it seems that the male protagonist has not followed the female protagonist, and it is all up to the female protagonist's imagination. I have read almost thirty chapters, but there is no positive feedback at all. The only time the male protagonist takes the initiative to send the female protagonist back does not even give her some candy. There is no positive feedback. If you write about the male protagonist's mentality change and there is no candy, then I think nothing of it. And I feel like there are too many roles for other people (especially Fatty, there are too many roles) and I have to say a few words about computer expertise... It's so boring.

Are there too many flaws? The male protagonist's psychological struggle is not written out. He is a school beauty who has lost his memory. The male protagonist does not know that the female protagonist liked him before. Shouldn't he always think about what happened after regaining his memory and then pull it off? Rather than saying a few words and then directly accepting other people's kindness. Then there was a story about a rich second generation pretending to be a bad guy and getting slapped in the face from a few years ago. I jumped right over it. This was too outrageous.

Someone downstairs is right, let the fat man fall in love with the heroine directly, there will be too much drama, the hero is dispensable

Let's rent a car and take the goddess to the hospital.

My goddess is about to give birth to a baby😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 It's just mine 😌😌😌

I came in because of the cover. This cover is the same as "My Girlfriend is from the Future". That book is a few years old. It is possible that you have stolen the pictures or have the author's authorization.

It's over, it's over, I've been caught in a trap 🥵

Why do I think the male protagonist should notify the woman's family as soon as possible? I always feel like the way I handle it is too weird.

After reading the previous 40 chapters, compared to the same type of articles that distribute dog food, this one is really depressing and refreshing.

Episode 42｜Sequel to "Advanced Retirement" #novel

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Is the author still writing? Is he still writing? I have read more than a hundred chapters and found that there has been no update for three days.

Nowadays, when I see the word school beauty, I feel a bit repelled. Moreover, when a woman chases a man, if she shows that she is too strong, I personally find it unpleasant... (I haven't read the article, so I'm just talking)