Rebirth in the Apocalypse, Build a Battleship at the Beginning

Is there a female protagonist? Let me ask first, if not, I will go by myself.

To be honest, I don't know when and why she became the Virgin to save her fellow humans 😭😭😭. It's as if all Chinese people have no morals and want to be the leader. Don't add fuel to the fire in the dark, nor try to blow it out.

Funny. If you want to write about the Holy Mother system, don't write deliberately as a hooligan. No need. Your system obviously needs to protect the human race, and it needs to protect the weak on a large scale. Just maintain a positive image of Wei Guangzheng and don't know how to write. Still don't know how to copy? Write in the image of Jesus. Even if you knew Judas was going to betray you, you still smiled and invited him to dinner and gave him 30 gold coins. Just arrange for Hitler to massacre the Jews behind the scenes. On the surface, my enemies have abused me thousands of times. I treat my enemies like my first love. I will either accept them as dogs in the North, or let them be captured and grilled by the Inquisition.

By the way, why are there so many doomsday articles recently? Can I write again?

After watching it, the progress of the main plot is too slow. It doesn't matter whether there is a heroine or not, but a woman must have one. Finally, as I look at it, why does science fiction seem to be turning towards fantasy?

This book is not long. It is about the difference between a Holy Mother and a good person. I give you things that I don't need but you need. This is called a good person. I give you what we all need, this is called the Holy Mother. If the protagonist doesn't die immediately at the beginning, it's a paradox of this system 😒

It feels too violent and murderous.

Just because the Holy Mother doesn't mean killing people, not to mention it's before the apocalypse. The protagonist is too murderous. After six or seven chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

This book always gave me a stiff feeling, with forced pacing and unsmooth plot. I felt that the author wanted to express the cold-bloodedness of the protagonist so as to fit the readers, but he couldn't express that feeling. Saving people is said to be due to the system. Maybe the author didn't want to write a book that was too ruthless, which resulted in conflicting plots and awkward reading. After reading twenty or thirty chapters, there is another common problem. There are many women in the plot, and the system has become a girl. Author, if you want to express your personal heroism, try not to write too many female characters who reduce intelligence. Otherwise, you will lose many readers. I can't read it anyway. Maybe the author is a newbie and his writing skills are not enough. Come on.

Just saying so much is just pretentious, and my sister doesn't want it anymore. It's been dozens of chapters and I still haven't explained my sister clearly.

The physique of an awakened person, the fighting skills brought back from the apocalypse, fighting a mercenary, and letting him gain the upper hand, what are you writing about? The physique of an awakened person is equivalent to that of a mercenary, right? Write a novel and fix such a big loophole?

When it comes to the Holy Mother, regardless of whether it's good or not, you can't watch it anyway. They will become extreme or pull bullshit from left to right.

I gave up after reading Chapter 19 of the mandatory mission.

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

Starting from Chapter 18, the system looks very awkward.

Is "build" a verb or a noun?

Is there a female protagonist? If there is, then you don't need to read it.

For a ship of the same size, the smaller the tonnage, the less effective it is. The tonnage is the load displacement tonnage, not the weight of the ship itself. The author couldn't understand this, and came up with a strange ship that was the size of a battleship, but only had a displacement of 11,000 tons.

There are good points in the writing, but there are also poisonous points. The tone at the beginning is cold-blooded and ruthless, which is actually quite good. But with the cat and the system, turning into a little girl started to feel like a different person. It's too rigid to find a reason. Saving a few people and using them as crew members is not a waste of resources and plot, so it is better to go find my sister as soon as possible. At first, I said that the only person I believed in was my sister, but in the end, I didn't know why I had to bring a few useless women with me when the ship was being upgraded. The plot can only be said to be tough and it doesn't agree with the setting at the beginning. It's tough!

Damn, this is a good post-apocalyptic hero novel, but couldn't your whole unnecessary system be a godsend? Even if there are no conditions for universal integration or awakening, you can continue to read the book while you are still writing it. You have broken the whole system and accepted it.

It looks okay, not as bad as you all say.

Is there a ship name? The ship's name may be Zhenyuan😄