There Is a Big Problem with This Sequence Game

Quite retarded and looks down on fighting skills. Can the protagonist ensure that his attributes far exceed those of his enemies every time?

I have fully booked and read it. The full score is 5 points, and the tentative score is 4.5. If there are no major problems in the future, everything will be booked to completion. The following briefly talks about the world setting of this book, the protagonist setting and plot focus, and some points of dissuasion that vary from person to person and may be intolerable to you. After reading it, you will know whether this book is suitable for you. If you have any questions about this book, you can ask below and we will answer them when we have time. If you have any books that are similar to this book, please recommend them to me. Thank you in advance♪(･ω･)ﾉ. 2 out of 4.5 Points are given to the world setting. The world setting of this book is probably that the male protagonist's original world has disappeared, and his soul has traveled to this earth-like world. It was also selected by a sequence game similar to the main god space and projected into the magical world. In a way similar to a real game, the player completes tasks and selects the savior. People in the magical world can attack the player's body in the earth-like world through the player's projection. It is unknown whether the magical world will attack the earth-like world in the future, but the earth-like world is not a fuel-efficient lamp, and the streets are full of ghosts. I hope we won't talk about these ghosts in the future. The government has no knowledge at all, and the situation will be small. The government should know about these mysterious forces and manage them accordingly. The government should even be the biggest mysterious force. The summary is that it is a big world view, and there is a lot to write about. I also like the game mode in the magical world. I like this kind of thing with detailed descriptions. Simply put, the data is intuitive. I hate the vague description that this move is strong and this move is stronger. This is why I like systematic writing. 1.5 Points out of 4.5 Points for the protagonist setting The protagonist of the book is not Long Aotian. To put it simply, the plug-in provided is very strong, but not so strong that it can kill people randomly even if the protagonist is replaced by a dog. When the protagonist is in Sequence 9, he may not be able to beat Sequence 8, let alone Sequence 7. If it is Long Aotian, he is probably refining the order of the heavens, uniting them all into one, and I am God. If Sequence 9 is to challenge Sequence 7, and Sequence 8 is defeated, if you are prepared, Sequence 4 may not be impossible to defeat. I hate Long Aotian's setting where plug-ins have too much influence. In my opinion, the greater the plug-in, the lower the author's level. It's like giving the protagonist a mind-reading ability in a witty novel, which is really a big departure. It relies entirely on plug-ins to advance the plot. Even without plug-ins, he can give you the feeling of Long Aotian. It is very smart to write the protagonist directly. The protagonist knows what is going on at a glance, and then makes arrangements to trick the enemy. It's really difficult, even more exaggerated than directly reading the protagonist's mind. I can only say that you should not write that the protagonist's IQ is higher than your own. Writing this kind of thing is completely ignorant. It is better to just give it a plug-in, as long as it is not too strong to affect the plot. For example, other people's talent plug-ins in this book are also very strong. [Appraisal of All Things] can reveal information about all things, including the other person's personality and his favorability towards you. However, the amount of information obtained will be determined based on the level gap with the opponent and the amount of mental value invested. This is a very reasonable plug-in. Those in Qidian see everything at a glance, without any consumption, and see no difference between humans and gods. They are so stupid. Of course there are some more outrageous tricks, such as invincible tricks. By opening it up like this, it can only mean that the erotic world surrenders under my crotch, and I can do it myself. The protagonist of this book is not someone who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. To put it simply, I won't show weakness deliberately and act like a yin. In my opinion, pretending to be a pig is also a pig. You should show your strength and take the initiative. In the end, pretending to be a pig is not about who is stronger. Being able to survive to the end does not depend on pretending to be a pig at all, but depends on strength and luck. On the contrary, losing the initiative because of pretending to be a pig is a loss. Anyone who wants to make a profit by pretending to be a pig is a pig. One step is the first step, and the other is the first step. This is true whether it is a game or reality. 1 out of 4.5 Points for plot focus. It can be said that once the world view and protagonist are set, they will start running by themselves. It depends on which aspect the author wants to write in detail and which aspect he wants to omit. The book does not focus particularly on the plot. It includes exploration of killings, daily jokes, and a lack of descriptions of human nature. Thankfully there is no in-depth description of human nature. Let an Internet author describe human nature in depth, so please don't embarrass me and the author. Basically, it's either a child playing house or a child going crazy. I really don't want to see the protagonist repeatedly wondering whether what he did is right or not, and shouting that I don't know, I don't know anymore. It gave me a headache. Of the 0.5 Points deducted, 0.3 Points are deducted due to unclear explanations of some settings. Although subsequent patches have explained a lot, the overall look and feel is a bit bad. Having sorted out these settings from the beginning, I can give it a 4.8 Rating. The remaining 0.2 Points are due to the overall writing style and detail processing. There are some inconsistencies, which is nitpicking. But after all, if you want perfect scores, you have to be picky. The rest are some points that vary from person to person and may be difficult to accept, which may have been mentioned earlier. 1. This book has a female protagonist (Gu You), and if the male protagonist falls in love with her at first sight, he will definitely pursue her. If you only like books that don't have a heroine or a harem, and you can't stand girls chasing after you, you can just abandon the book. 2. The book contains humorous descriptions of daily life, such as hoeing, working in the afternoon, and humorous descriptions of monsters. The female protagonist will definitely take part in the follow-up. If you can't stand the daily joking descriptions, you can just abandon the book. 3. The protagonist does not pretend to be a pig and actively contacts other players. Later, a player opened a player forum, and the protagonist went there without hiding his level. If you can't stand that the protagonist doesn't show any weakness and hides that he is the mastermind and strategist behind the scenes, you can just abandon the book. 4. The protagonist is not Long Aotian. Although the protagonist's talent [Killing Enlightenment] can plunder other people's extraordinary characteristics, it cannot be fused. Different extraordinary characteristics will conflict within the body, so after the protagonist chooses the Demon Wolf God-level path, other extraordinary characteristics will have to be stripped of their seals. Paths are divided into levels, probably low-level upper limit sequence 9, intermediate upper limit sequence 7, advanced upper limit sequence 4, and god-level upper limit sequence 1. Players will accumulate blank extraordinary characteristics as their levels increase, and after level 10, a complete set of blank extraordinary characteristics will be formed. Then, by taking the token of the existing path, you can transfer to a Sequence 9 Transcendent of that path. However, the difficulty of upgrading increases sharply after level 8, so the best option is to use other methods to complete the extraordinary characteristics of a desired destiny after level 8, and directly transfer to a sequence 9 extraordinary person of that path. While becoming stronger, the projection time can also be changed from 8 hours a day to 12 hours, which quickly snowballs. If the path does not match the talent, after changing jobs, either the talent will suppress the path ability, or the talent will be eliminated. I really can't find a path that matches my talent, and I want to keep my talent, or the upper limit of the path that matches my talent is too low. Then you have to develop your own high-level or even god-level path, or redefine the path by yourself and break through the upper limit. The difficulty is very high. It is difficult to open up a path, let alone open up a high-level or even god-level path in a short time. Basically impossible. After so many years and so many people, the Magic Kingdom has only come up with three advanced paths. They are the warrior paths taken from the dwarves. The Knight Path split from the Warrior Path. And the most mysterious way to be a magician. Redefining the path and breaking through the upper limit may not be any easier than opening up a new path. It may be even more difficult. In order to break through the upper limit, the witch and the werewolf exhausted the generations of heritage of the two races. An accident occurred, and the cornerstone of the inheritance became a little girl and ran away. However, if you choose to break the upper limit, you can at least change jobs first, and future problems can be considered later. Players at the beginning are short of time the most, and they will die if they cannot complete the main storyline. The protagonist's talent is compatible with all paths. When he was level 9, he directly chose to switch to the god-level path, Demon Wolf. The upper limit is about sequence 1, but it does not mean that he can jump through levels casually. The protagonist may not be able to beat sequence 8 at sequence 9. If you can't stand that the protagonist can't smelt the Sequence of All Heavens, unite as one, and open up your own path to level 0, Sequence 9 will challenge Sequence 7 alone, beat Sequence 8, and kick Sequence 4's ass. You can discard the book directly. It can be said that the protagonist's talent [Killing Proof] is indeed very strong. Through killing, he can obtain the opponent's extraordinary characteristics, skills, and attribute values. Even if the level gap is too large, the attribute value gain will be very small, but it is still very strong. But this is not my favorite talent, because it absorbs extraordinary characteristics, but cannot integrate extraordinary characteristics. It is entirely due to good luck in the early stage that I obtained the prop (Rashomon), and I will definitely obtain the prop (Holy Grail) in the later stage, which can peel off the excess extraordinary characteristics of the seal without loss. Otherwise, conflicting extraordinary characteristics will result in the faster you kill, the faster you die. Among the top talents of players currently displayed, my favorite is [Miracle]. The effect is miraculous. Probably everything is possible, and if it is possible, it will definitely happen. Although the greater the miracle, the greater the consumption. If you cannot pay for the consumption, there will be no miracle, but this is a completely universal talent. The second is [God's Perspective], which has the effect of observing the world line and witnessing different future developments. Although the future is very blurry, the future of strong people with too big a gap will also be disturbed and distorted. But this talent is also invincible as it grows. What you can see will become clearer and clearer, and there will be less and less interference and distortion. Then there are [identification of all things] and [resurrection from the dead]. [Appraisal of All Things] As mentioned before, the effect of [Resurrection from the Dead] is that you can resurrect yourself and others. As your talent grows, the number of times you can resurrect yourself at full status increases, and the status of others when you resurrect others. The greater the difference between the status of others and others, the weaker the effect of resurrecting others. As for [Crazy Gambling Dice], I don't think it is a top talent. The effect is to temporarily increase various values ​​​​according to the number of points cast, which can be cheated. But I think it's better than the protagonist's talent [The Way of Killing]. [The Way of Killing] without props like (Rashomon) and (Holy Grail) would be a complete pitfall.

I think the current rhythm is okay, why do so many people say it's not good? ,, And some people say that it devours all paths, this kind of book that wants everything is almost ruined from the starting point, haven't you tired of reading it, most of them fail to write about the combat power in the later stage, don't do it, as long as the protagonist has characteristics and the plot rhythm is good. The main thing is the plot. No matter how talented the protagonist is, no one will watch it if the plot is not well written.

After reading Chapter 14 for the time being, I was very confused by the way the protagonist looked down on skills. The protagonist has always preached that one strength can reduce ten levels, which is true, but is it possible that the enemies you encounter in the future will all have lower attributes than the protagonist? Not to mention cross-level challenges, even if you meet people of the same level, they have various techniques for exerting force, but the protagonist here only uses Wang Baquan. How to fight?

I hope to switch to a magician instead of a hunter. After all, the protagonist's talent becomes more powerful as he progresses, which is a perfect match for the magician profession. Moreover, if you don't master the destructive power of magic in the real world and finally become extraordinary, switching to a hunter profession that can be practiced in the real world will be a waste of the protagonist's talent. You can learn some hunting skills in the real world and spend the early stages of the game. Once you become a magician, you will destroy the world. Perfectly adapted to your talents.

Very nice, really. The first few chapters are average, but then the rhythm enters. If the writing is not crooked later, it can be compared with "Sequence Player" and "Player Fierce"

The rhythm and plot of this book are well grasped at the beginning, but from the moment the protagonist changes his job, it becomes difficult to explain. The first point is the protagonist's job change. Although the protagonist's demon wolf is also very strong, it's a bit embarrassing. Werewolf path + demon path = demon wolf (epic path)? It's not impossible, but it really doesn't match the protagonist's talent. The second point is about the strength of the path. First of all, what is the werewolf path? The intermediate path of the dark camp has been abandoned by the moon. It lacks a path of ability. Then it can beat the hunter path that is favored by the moon. Let's look at the protagonist's demon wolf path. It is known as the path of the gods. The former demon wolf can even hunt the gods. , And then such a powerful path sequence level 9 cannot defeat a weakened intermediate sequence 8 werewolf. It can only be said that the author did not grasp it well and exaggerated the demon wolf path too much. In order to facilitate the plot, he suppressed the protagonist later, causing the reader's expectations to be too different from the actual situation. He also exaggerated the werewolf and hunted the dragon. Isn't this nonsense? It is as outrageous as saying that hyenas or wild dog packs hunt African elephants in Africa.

No, what do you mean by giving the protagonist an all-powerful talent and then limiting the protagonist to only one path?

Hurry up and cut this book out. After the talent turned into a negative effect, not many people have the heart to continue reading. Hey, I see you asked for leave every three days, and it would be good for everyone if you cut it half dead. But to be honest, the writing before turning to the Demon Wolf was very good. From the perspective of normal online articles, I started by relying on the talent to kill the gods, and this is the only golden finger. If others say that the Demon Wolf can kill gods in the later stage, I will directly switch to it, and directly use the talent to develop a career, j8 Isn't it unreasonable for the protagonist to open a new profession? Can't he also become a god? Can't gods kill gods? It would be better to just open a profession to kill gods than now. A good person shouldn't have to be a determined dog. From now on, what is enough for a hybrid breed? Use it. In the novice stage, just push it and it's over. It's still very laborious to make a small 🐺dog fight a Sequence 8 Nightmare. In the early stage, I always wrote about pushing horizontally. Just press and hit and it's done. If you are a big muscle dominator, you can just push it and subscribe based on your performance. It's getting better now, but it's not getting better, it's really embarrassing. If you want to make up for it, just make up a divine villain when you help Little Red Riding Hood get the Holy Grail in the ruins, and design a foreshadowing or a level so that the protagonist's extraordinary characteristics are absorbed by the Holy Grail (for example, the divine villain turns into the Holy Grail's cup spirit, etc., And extraordinary characteristics are needed to restore the broken Holy Grail).

There are all kinds of boasts in the past, and then the author keeps adding patches, knife after knife, and cuts the god level into rubbish.

The front part is good, but the latter becomes more and more poisonous. It can be seen from most of the resentment that everyone is very disgusted with the protagonist's insistence on the demon wolf path. It is clear that there is a chance to find a way to fight against the magic wolf. In the end, I think the magic wolf path after it is put on the shelves is not very strong. There is also the fact that the author is obsessed with the Demon Wolf. Someone suggested that a patch could be made to change the protagonist's talent transfer from forced absorption of characteristics to absorption of characteristics and then save the path to complete the path from the Demon Wolf path to the omnipotent path. However, the author chose not to write it. No wonder the more people read about it, the more people complained and scolded it.

In terms of the protagonist's talent, the most suitable path is omniscience and omnipotence, followed by killing. Using mages, warriors, or creating your own paths are all good, but it seems that the author is determined to transform into a wolf.

It looks pretty good now, but this is it. Every time it has to strip off its Beyonder characteristics, this is too poisonous. If this point can be changed, the results will be much better. Now that there is Rashomon, if the level of extraordinary characteristics is higher in the future, and the rare level of Rashomon cannot be used, will it be necessary to buy new props? If you can't find the props, doesn't it mean that it won't work if you don't have talent? You can obviously kill and become stronger, but you still have to restrain yourself when the time comes. This is too poisonous. Even if you don't talk about the way to become a poor person like other people say, you will be much better off even if you turn your extraordinary characteristics into expertise or something like that. Just like that, I really didn't target Master Fa. He just becomes a specialty after killing him

The protagonist is so cruel. Look at how he beat his classmates and their parents. How painful it is for them. Will it leave a psychological shadow in the future? He has been there for so long, and not to mention the psychological shadow, what should he do in the future? Can't the protagonist just endure it? Wouldn't it be better to wait for a while and send them away together with the dog and the whole family? Don't let go of the earthworms, just chop them into two pieces, and you have to chop them vertically.

Isn't it too sudden that you, the heroine, appeared out of nowhere? You just took a few glances at her and you were fascinated by her after traveling through time? If the emotional scene doesn't work, then don't force it to be written, okay? Or just downplay it, don't end up looking like a pig brother.

I think, as for the demon wolf profession that the protagonist has switched to after it is now on the shelves, I can only say that it is very average and does not have as high potential as a pure werewolf or a pure devil.

Upgrading from level 10 to level 13, the three-dimensional attribute is increased by 1 point, and the upgrade is still based on talent. Does this divine path upgrade not increase the three-dimensional attribute at all 🤔

Is this really the path of the devil wolf? Is this a combination of demons and werewolves? This skill is neither a demon nor a werewolf, and has nothing to do with wolves 😅😅😅 The demon wolf path can transform into a wolf, or summon a wolf... This skill set is a berserker with stealth 😅 Oh... Assassin's Creed 😁

Features? Brother, Goldfinger has changed halfway through playing. If the Devouring Path is strong, wouldn't Prediction be stronger? The key is that it is not as good as his plan to integrate characteristics and professions. The protagonist becomes a demon wolf and has the potential to become a god. The previous characteristics are regarded as garbage and no further exploration of his own abilities is done. Even warrior skills can be practiced diligently without digging deep into one's natural talents. The b level is not high enough, others are on the road to becoming a god, and the protagonist is a demon wolf who can compete with the gods, but he is still not close. It feels like teammates become gods in the later stage, and the protagonist's future is not as good as that of his teammates. There are a lot of foreshadowings, but I don't see the future of the protagonist. The whole Demon Wolf was praised at first and then I felt more and more that it was too crotch-heavy and not as good as the gods. The mage who became a god was said to be the most awesome. The style is getting lower and lower, which makes me angry. After waiting for a week, I thought the author could give me some information, but there is no information at all. I am not happy after reading it.

Now if the protagonist cooperates with the moderators to hunt down werewolves and gather extraordinary attributes, that would be awesome.

It's okay. Although there is a sense of gap between the six characteristics. After all, as mentioned before, how awesome the Demon Wolf is, it is still acceptable. After all, the author set the priesthood to have six characteristics, and other high-level professions only have four characteristics. The main thing is that the protagonist took one look and fell in love for no reason. The original owner had confessed to her, but the protagonist had no impression at all, and fell in love at first sight, which was inexplicable. Author, you don't need to add this plot. It's okay to write the foreshadowing that this woman can see ghosts. After the semi-open beta of the game, let her enter the game, awaken her talents, and then upgrade with the protagonist. This way of writing is also good.

Come on, author, the writing is great, the reality is not toxic at the moment. The game is not toxic at the moment, and overall it's great.

I've spent over an hour now, going from the first page to chapter 55, and all I can say is that up to chapter 55, it's pretty damn good to me.

The writing is very good. I like this simple system. The part where the protagonist is in reality is so cool! It's just too little. Brother, please update more and the update time should be more stable. I look forward to your explosion.

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