Game Travel: Awakening the Power of the Sky God at the Beginning

I have read several novels written by the author before. In each novel, in the middle stage, the protagonist's IQ will rise and fall depending on the needs of the plot. The character is also the same but not too much. It is very uncomfortable and awkward to read. At the beginning, the protagonist's identity is free, and then he is restrained and led by others to act like a novice. It is irritating to watch. I hope the author really pays attention to these plot issues

Regarding the issues that you may be concerned about just say it directly.

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I read the first few dozen chapters. The protagonist's main energy is spent on being cute, and the remaining small part can be allocated to the brain, so that the IQ is like riding a roller coaster... What an ancient transformation novel, it has long since withdrawn from the environment 😥

The setting is too rubbish, and half-elves are despicable? If elves and humans can act together, it means that the relationship is still okay. In this case, don't have too many half-elves, and don't underestimate human genes. If there must be a base consensus, then it is impossible for elves and humans to act jointly, and they are 100% incompatible.

The clichéd beginning is a common problem with most Qidian books, but I won't go into it, but the beginning doesn't attract people and the excessive plot of the maid is really discouraging. There are too many plots like this in the novel, and it's too aesthetically exhausting.

Update, this one is obviously better looking, okay?

Alas, I didn't find any books I wanted to read at the beginning, so I went around and read the books on the bookshelf again.

I don't understand, why did you let the other party take the key away? Even if you can't successfully stop it, let's try it anyway, and then say that you are involved, and you have to look for someone with a brain disease.

After reading the author's first two books, I feel that this book has made great progress. I just hope that the author can keep updating it. It is a pity that the first two books were a bit unfinished to some extent 😵

Let's talk about this book in full. There are so many typos that are scary, the combat power level is a mess, the fighting scenes are poorly described, and the protagonist's character is contradictory.

After reading the beginning, I feel like there are a few questions, so I'll mention them. First of all, it's about discrimination. I personally don't understand why half-elves are discriminated against. Is it because humans have racial discrimination? Or is the relationship between elves and humans hostile? In many cases, even illegitimate children can live quite well, but here the noble blood directly becomes slaves. It is better to explain the background issue in detail from the beginning. The second thing is that there is too much emphasis on being a lowly slave at the beginning, which is very annoying. Thirdly, the so-and-so brother is a little too facialistic and feels soulless. Normally, even if you hate a noble, you still have to have a palace. You can hate him, but this kind of constant emphasis like a brainless person makes people doubt his IQ. The success of such a person in the future makes people lower their expectations for this story.

This book was thrown into the pigeon group by me, and it was revived again.

The original version is not as good as it is, and it is far worse than Sword Princess.

It's so bad that I can only subscribe to the genuine article 😭😭😭😭Is this a niche article?

I've been waiting for you to write a new book for a long time after the completion of "The Witch", but there has been no movement. "The Witch" has finished and I have come back to fill in the gaps in this book, but I haven't finished it. But I don't care, I just want to know if you will write a new book.

I've been sinking in the abyss for thousands of years. It's great. Can you continue writing that book? I will definitely support it, as long as it's not too bad.

Is Star Fantasy a holographic consciousness game? Why does it feel like the author's description of players of this game is like real people? Boys and girls rush forward! It seems easy when you watch it on TV, but you realize how difficult it is when you do it yourself. As long as you can play King of Glory, will you be able to penetrate all the heroes in the city and have continuous combos? Winning the first place in a racing game means that if you drive a real racing game, you can understand all the key points and win the first place immediately? The more I look, the more confused I become.

All my previous expectations were wasted. What I got after waiting and waiting was not a new update, but a completion mark.

I'm sorry >People<, I saw "Jade Lotus is Pink" and "Taking Off Socks" in the first few chapters, so I couldn't read the rest of the content at all. I kept thinking about the previous paragraphs in my head, and I couldn't read it, so I ran away QaQ

I looked through it today and found that it has not been updated, but the status has changed 😭 What is going on? A eunuch? ! No! ! ! ! From the initial investment in the new book to the latest chapter of the book, it turned out to be a eunuch 😢 Why is it so sad! ! ! I quite like this book and am looking forward to the follow-up content. I didn't expect it to end with a forced eunuch 😆😆😆

Resurrected? That's okay. Even if I update one chapter in a few days, that's fine. By the way, do you remember that this is only white?

When will it be finished? I feel like I'm running out of time

You are not the trumpet account opened by Zhuang Bifan, are you?

What's going on? Why do I see that I've finished the book?