Little Nanny and Great Swordsman

The overall story is quite good, but I feel that the protagonist's brain is not very good, and his outlook on life is also quite strange. His behavioral habits are still the same as playing games to upgrade monsters, and he doesn't think about anything he encounters. If this person wasn't the protagonist, he would probably have to help count the money after being sold.

When I read the latest chapter, I have to say that the pit the author buried was quite big. The first pit was after resurrecting the Silver Moon Goddess. At this time, I met Old John. In fact, the Vatican should have known that there was a problem with the saint at that time, but because there was no replacement, it did not reveal it. Old John should have known it at that time, so when he saw the protagonist, he asked him to be the Holy Sword user. He wanted to The protagonist tricked him into going to the Holy Mountain, and the three bishops of the Vatican also reflected on this, because generally speaking, people from the sky realm are allowed to be Holy Sword wielders, and in the past, Holy Sword wielders have always been male (probably), and Old John also said that he would talk to the Pope about letting the protagonist become a saint. In fact, Old John should be planning to tell the Pope about the protagonist, because the protagonist basically meets all the conditions for being a saint, and he will get it later. Holy Sword, the protagonist is arranged to meet the Pope alone, which is another foreshadowing. After all, according to the protagonist's memory, he was given a good position and a bunch of messy rewards by a cardinal in the past, but this time the protagonist went to see the Pope and touched the protagonist's hand. After the protagonist left, several cardinals were there to talk. In fact, this has shown that they already know the saint. It happened, and the protagonist happened to be here, so they planned to let the protagonist be the saint, and then arranged the protagonist to be a guard next to the saint, just to let the protagonist learn the sacrificial ritual. As for the protagonist discovering something wrong with the saint, it was purely an accident. After all, if they want the protagonist to expose the saint's things so that he can become a saint himself, what if the protagonist cannot find out? The dark thing at the back is also written. If you want to avoid being spied on in the Holy Mountain, you can only be a bishop or the pope, so this also shows that the Holy See has discovered that something is wrong with the Saint. There is also Bishop Murphy who asked the protagonist to guard the Saint. However, when the protagonist found out, the bishop was very unconcerned, indicating that the Holy Mountain had already known about it, and The Holy Mountain also knows every move of the protagonist, so Old John is there when the protagonist is about to kill Lyle and Hanks This is just a little guess on my part, but to be honest, the author's outline is quite good, which means that it is unlikely to be a eunuch (probably). If you have anything to add, you can tell me.

The story is wonderful and the writing is good. Why are the results so mediocre Of course the update is too slow! Please ask the author for more updates ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و

The feeling from the beginning to the middle is still great, the setting is very interesting, and the combat descriptions are also very touching. But the plot begins to fall apart further on. It's not that the plot went crazy, but it moved forward too quickly without sufficient foreshadowing, making the plot twists seem stiff and unnatural, and a bit rushed. It may be because the author is a little impatient or his enthusiasm for writing has faded, but I hope the author can adjust his mentality and regain his strength. Also, there are too many obvious typos and grammatical problems, so I hope you can pay attention to them.

At present, the main focus is on upgrading, and NPCs have no human rights 💔💔💔 Since we have traveled to another world and there is no apocalyptic crisis, it is not good to care too much about experience (personal opinion😜😜) In fact, the author seems to have made a choice whether to focus on the game or life in another world The story is not bad at the moment, please go for the author💪

After seeing the paid chapters, I personally highly recommend it. In the early stage, the protagonist will always look at the world in a chaotic and neutral player state. Around the paid chapters, the protagonist begins to have some recognition of the world (really just a few), and you take off the identity of the time traveler. Look, the protagonist is like an angel descending to earth, and the supporting characters such as the bishop are also very detailed. They will deliberately make the protagonist do things in order to make the "angel" have a hint of humanity, but it looks a bit like being manipulated like a dog. I haven't seen too much poison so far. It is highly recommended 👍

As a web novel, there is no problem at all. I really like this character. Some people say that the gender change setting is not good, that the character is wrong, or that the supporting characters are wrong. You are the one with the problem. As a time travel novel in an immersive game world, it doesn't matter what the protagonist is. It is reasonable to kill people and NPCs, and the NPC's attitude is also handled well. Even if there are some minor flaws in some places, as a web novel, how can you ask for too much? Just hit me as a target. It's a pity that I am relatively poor. I will support you when I have money (◦˙▽˙◦)

The writing is good, but there are too many wrong words and typos; some numerical values ​​in the context are sometimes wrong, and there are also people's names. They are always the same name above, but either the words are changed or the name is changed in the following text, which greatly affects the reading experience. I hope I can change these places when I have time.

The writing is very nice, but the update is too clumsy, and it doesn't even skip a beat.

I read the latest chapter in one go. Apart from a lot of typos, the book is still good. The author will continue to work hard in the new year

The author writes well. Remember not to be fooled by readers. As long as the book has not collapsed, write according to your own outline and ideas. Don't be influenced by some readers who want a harem, a harem, a bachelor, a single, a marriage, or they will abandon the book. No one's book can be liked by everyone. The book chooses the reader, and the reader chooses the book.

The final redemption was too hasty and did not have the feeling of a goddess shining in the world. A person as pious as the Pope did not know that the heroine was the person he believed in all his life until his death. This is not perfect for a person who has been loyal to his faith all his life. The heroine gave up the memory of the goddess in the end, which was actually a kind of escape. Since she had the consciousness to save the world, why did she not inherit the courage to bear this pain? This memory is definitely a treasure in the world, not strength or power, but a proof of the existence of the goddess in the world. Alas, it is uncomfortable.

I am a novice author and I don't know how to write complicated things like emotional dramas, so the protagonist will be single, but because of the charm of the protagonist, many people will like her. Many readers ask this question again, so I need to reply to readers.

I came here from Daily Guide, and after reading it, I was very disappointed with the game "The Other World". Here is a brief summary: Emotional line: single, basically fine√ Plot: 2 points ~ 7 points, totally ruined by the game system World settings: 6 points → 0 points, the same reason↑ Viewing experience: food and grass, a little moldy at the back Overall evaluation: If you are bored, you can read it. It is recommended to give up when you can't stand it. There is no wonderful rebound in the follow-up.

There are frequent exams during the exam month, so updates will not be available until around the 4th or 5th of next month.

Write less 🐶Crab crab, these sand dollar supporting characters will not appear more in the future, why write disgusting people. Wouldn't it be nice to write more about young ladies?

Author, please take a look at your contract to see if there is anything wrong with it.

Don't understand. . . Why in recent months have the chapters always created a negative image of the protagonist who is selfish and doesn't care about other people's feelings? Is this a big game of chess or does the author just want to write like this? To be honest, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

It looks disgusting. As a player, the protagonist has no freedom at all, just like a dog.

A game is not a game, and another world is not like another world, where you are always jumping sideways. The result of repeated sideways jumps is that the worldview will completely collapse and the game will probably end unfinished. I gave up after reading a few chapters. The world view jumps over and over again. Only a novice author would dare to try it to death.

Thousands of coins are offered to the author, please give me some credit ps: For the sake of someone being so good at copying and pasting...

Have you noticed that you can't find the transformation story of Qidian directly by searching for it? You have to link the works to find it.

This is more of a stand-alone online game than time travel. The protagonist has no real sense of time travel, and the characters in it are equivalent to the protagonist's NPCs and wild monsters.

How can I put it this way? It's pretty good-looking, but I really can't stand the character of the protagonist.

In the latest chapter, the goddess of light, I suddenly remembered one of the four evil books - Dark Summoner, Goddess of Light Li Jiayu

I feel that judging from the current performance of the protagonist, she is too utilitarian and has no patience or faith at all. Everything is to become stronger and enjoy a better life (for her, becoming stronger is the basis of enjoyment, so the priority is higher). She doesn't value friendship and family affection, has no firm and persistent goals and pursuits, and treats herself as a guest who stays out of things. It is undeniable that such utilitarian thinking will be very helpful for her to become stronger, but it will also lose a lot of spiritual enjoyment.

It is really baffling to give up the memory in the end, and then the protagonist is portrayed as a completely cold-blooded person, who only takes advantage of his friends, and never actively cares or anything else. It neither fits the character of a savior goddess nor the image of a player who inherits memories. He has no IQ and stands out as a reckless person. The story is very good, but the portrayal of the protagonist is really not good, and he is not very charming.

This book is a rare masterpiece in the Western fantasy genre, but the title is not right, plus it is about gender reversal and the subject matter is relatively niche. More people should read a normal strong female novel.

Why do so many people think that using a sword is more handsome? I feel that the nanny has a balanced intelligence and is not capable of this skill even if she does not use the cross.

I didn't expect this book from a few years ago to be included in the introduction. I didn't read the ending of the last two chapters, but I can still read it here.