Versatile Mage's Undead Victim

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It is recommended that the pace be faster. Too many people wrote in the early stage of Bo City, which made readers not like to read the Bo City volume. Many people also wrote the Pearl volume. If the author insists on writing the Pearl, it is recommended that the protagonist not repeat the grade. The original Mo Fan was delayed by one year. If you don't consider writing the Pearl, I suggest you go to the ancient capital and learn about the undead system. If the author is not strong enough in writing, he can only follow the original work, and pretend I didn't say it above!

There are all undead victims. I feel like I can fuse the evil armor of the ancient king in the evil abyss. After all, it has the power of a small emperor. It's a pity for Zhan Kong. Zhan Kong doesn't know how to use it and just wastes it.

I've just read a few chapters, and it's outrageous that the patient suffering from the undead system awakens the space system first.

Why is it the space system? Where are the undead? Don't talk about this, how come you go to high school and talk about this here and there? Now you go to hunt monsters, and now you go to see something about Ye Xinxia. If you don't even know anyone, you just call her sister. What's the point of acting like a hero saving a beauty? Isn't it about a single female protagonist?

The undead victims do not have the undead system, which is excellent

This review is just my personal opinion and understanding of this book. I have read the first five chapters and want to complain about it. Although you can't tell much from the first 5 pictures, after all, the writing at the beginning is bad. Who is the protagonist's teacher Zhan Kong (Zu Xingyi) (the leader of the Guofu team). The curse system is blocked, only wind and fire, high-level cultivation (I think so). Even the curse system may reach the super level. He will not teach the protagonist how to use his mind to control the star path connection of Void Claw. After all, Mind Control Void Claw is the most practical space skill before high-level. If you want the protagonist to realize it on his own, you have to teach him basic skills. After all, the author said that in a small city like Bo City, it is normal that there is no way to use space-based skills. But it's not like Zhan Kong, right? Besides. As a victim, the first lineage must be the lineage of the victim. It would be a bit too abrupt to have a space system, but I think it would be okay if you have a dual system of innate systems. And where did the summoning teacher come from in Bo City? I believe the members of the Tribunal who came with Tang Yue, and the author also said that the protagonist fell into the lair of Yi Canglang at the beginning. Then awakened, the power of death. You wouldn't think that Bai Yang is the only undercover Black Vatican in Bo City, right? Mu He, the great deacon of the killer whale, was part of the school inspection team, and the whole family had a black classroom there, except for Mu Bai. After all, this experimental site has been prepared for more than ten years (there is a bug in the original book that Mu Bai grew up in Bo City. Then Mu He should also have watched Mu Bai grow up. Or he went out to do other things, and he could just pick out the Holy Spring in three years 😥😥). I don't believe that when the protagonist awakened to the power of death, other families did not notice anything strange. The Black Holy See will definitely be targeting the protagonist by then. So it's a little bit anticlimactic, and maybe the author thinks that the students in Bo City are too mentally retarded. Don't you have a TV or mobile phone at home? Don't you know how powerful and rare the dimensional system is? Just search on the Internet and you will know everything. Forget it, I can't talk about logic in Shuangwen after all. In the early stage of Quanfa, I am cool and novice. But it took off after the Guofu War. A whole new worldview. I hope that the rest of this book will be more normal and the protagonist will not be forced to pretend to be a cross. Maybe three years ago I would have enjoyed watching it. But now I feel a bit awkward😅😅

I hope Ding Yumian, the single heroine, doesn't want Tang Yue in the harem. Tang Yue is already there and she's sick of it.

I have a few questions. How did Xingzi change when the new students came in? Why can't the undead system be brought to the forefront? The undead system is equivalent to the chaos system of dimensional magic. It can only be regarded as rare. And why should the warrior level be defeated? Can it beat the monarch one-on-one in the later stage? Or is it the emperor level? Disasters are those who can do extraordinary things.

If the name is written as undead, it will be written as other type of cow🐮

1. Fill in the holes~ There are too many big and small holes in the original work, and the author can't finish them all. If you have any special parts you want to see, you can leave your footprints. I will design a new plot separately to complete the regret. Please note that this is a story with a single heroine. If it is a story with a popular supporting female character, at most it will be an ambiguous plot, and it is impossible to have a harem. 2. Imagination ~ Based on the original world, whether it is the weirder no-man's land or its new plot, the birth of magic tricks, totem legends, powerful demon tribes, and conspiracies, you can talk about everything freely and welcome to discuss.

As the heroine, I think Ding Yumian is very good. After all, his ending is not very good. I have a few comments. Everyone who reads fan fiction has read the original work. Can the development route be towards some novel places, such as those not found in the original work? I hope the protagonist has his own development path.

Seriously, really, don't give the protagonist any elemental systems. These elements are in the protagonist. If he is not a sufferer, it would be fine. But the protagonist is a sufferer. These elemental systems will be useless as soon as they come out. Unless it is the supreme one like space chaos, other elements will be useless when they come out. But if the protagonist is like this, there are only four C at most.

You should play the undead system as soon as possible when starting to play the undead. This book is too confusing in the early stage. It took only a few dozen chapters for the undead system to be released. It is recommended that more undead systems be released in the later stage. If you don't build an undead empire, it's hard to say that it's the undead.

In the original book, the setting of the explosion rate of spirits above the warrior level is very touching. Most of them are residual souls. Because except for the necromancers, souls cannot be collected, so the soul vessels are very expensive (cheap ones cost 1000W), and most of the vessels can only hold one essence/remaining soul. (The price of the revenant vessel increases based on the absorption range, strength and storage quantity) So there is no such thing as being unpopular with the Necromancer. He is also orthodox after all. Don't think of him as a black magician. He has already finished the medieval holy war and has been reskinned and online Not only is there no such thing as being unpopular, but it is very rare. When he enters the unit, he is the kind of industry leader.

Are you comfortable writing place names? It's Xuefeng Mountain, not Fanxue Mountain. Fanxue Mountain was built after the government passed away.

I don't understand, the undead type has only been released for dozens of times This title is meant to attract attention Besides, black magic is actually very comprehensive, with shadows for displacement, undead for group fights, poison for sneak attacks, and curses for single targets. I don't know why I don't just click on it and go straight to black magic.

The writing of the team is so good, I have to write three battle scenes at a time😁

Is the author interested in writing the Legend of the Dragon King or Peerless Tang Sect fanfic for the next one? Naruto Elements. The spirit of martial arts is the Sharingan or the Ten-Tails. Single heroine or dual heroines. Forget about the harem. Naruto Elements Douluo fanfics are all harems. I'm tired of reading them. Anyway, it's just an idea. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.