Demon Fog and Rain

Detected keywords: fog, magic, rain — combination: Mist and Rain Marisa

It's alright, but it lacks originality. Both the setting and the plot are quite normal, so there's not much to look forward to. I guess I've read too many novels, so my standards have risen. The setting isn't very appealing, and there's not much suspense in the early chapters. After a few chapters, I couldn't continue reading.

Seeing that the character's class was archer at the start immediately made me lose interest. I wanted to see ghosts, magic, and imagination that transcended the mundane. This archer class starting off really didn't appeal to me; the novel's title is a complete waste.

This author is an old writer who hasn't written web novels in years; he's still using web novel tropes from over a decade ago.

After reading a dozen or so chapters, the author's writing is passable, with all the necessary details, but it definitely lacks skill. If the later chapters remain at this level, it's unlikely to achieve success. Judging from the author's comments in the book review section, their mindset seems problematic.

The most outspoken protagonist I've ever seen. Other protagonists might mutter a few words to themselves, but this one is completely unconcerned. He says whatever he wants, talks about anything, does whatever he wants, fearless and utterly lacking the caution and restraint expected of a transmigrator.

The poor writing is evident from the first three sentences of the introduction, and then there's the self-praise at the end. If you're so capable, don't delete this comment; let's see when you do. 😁

Will the protagonist's personality remain so indecisive afterward? Even wanting to save someone, he has to find one reason or another. I think the protagonist should at least be free—killing those he hates, saving those he's kind to, doing whatever he wants, right? If it's not about avoiding what he doesn't want to do, and being able to do what he wants, then what's the point of having power?

The title seems to refer to the protagonist's innate talent, and his profession is archer. The descriptions are decent, but the transitions are really abrupt, like separate mini-dungeons. The pacing is incredibly slow, and it doesn't seem to have many readers; it feels like the author won't live to finish it.

The beginning seemed okay, but the exam section felt like a forced drop in intelligence. The character was low-key and meticulous when killing villagers, but does the character in the exam match the character in the beginning?