Demon Fog and Rain

Detected keywords fog magic rain—combination Kirisame Marisa

It looks okay, but there is nothing new. Whether it is the setting or the plot, it is just normal and there is no sense of expectation. I have read too many novels, and the threshold has become high. The setting is not attractive, and there is no suspense in the early stage. After a few chapters, I can't watch it anymore.

When I saw the archer profession at the beginning, I immediately didn't want to read anymore. What I wanted to see were ghosts, spells, and imagination that transcended the world. This archer profession started out, and I was really unimpressed. The title of the novel was really stupid.

The author is an old author who hasn't written online articles for many years. The routines of online articles from more than ten years ago are still used.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author's writing is passable, and all the details are included, but it does lack skills. If the following chapters are also of this level, it should be impossible to achieve results. Reading the author's speech in the book review area, I feel that there is a problem with the mentality. A little suggestion, since you have written a book and posted it on a public platform, you must have a goal. Whether it is xx recommendation votes or it will be raised to xx, when it is time to ask for votes, when it is time to become more popular, you must have a goal! Don't excuse yourself with words such as "I just write and play slowly", "I don't plan to make money", "It's just a hobby and I'm happy". The result of fooling yourself will be that your enthusiasm dissipates and you will not get the sense of accomplishment of developing your hobby. There is no person in this world who can achieve great things just by relying on love. Without feedback, the so-called development of hobbies is just an excuse to waste time. Ask yourself, you have written eighty chapters, and only a few people can read them. Thinking about the time you spent, do you really feel happy?

I have ever seen the meanest protagonist. Other protagonists can only talk to themselves one or two times. This protagonist is completely indifferent. He talks about everything, talks about everything, does everything, is fearless, and has absolutely no caution that a time traveler should have.

You can tell that the writing is not good in the first three sentences of the introduction, and at the end, he goes out of his way to brag about himself. If you have the ability, don't delete this comment. It depends on when you cut it 😁

Will the protagonist's character still be that of a mother-in-law? If you want to save someone, you have to find some reason. I think your protagonist must at least be free. If you have a grudge against others, you can kill them. If you are kind to others, you can save them. If you just do whatever you want, then it's over. If it's not to stop doing what you don't want to do and to be able to do what you want to do, then what do you need the strength for? Every time someone takes action, someone has to emphasize the morals and bottom line. It gives the impression that these morals and bottom lines are not part of the protagonist at all, but a chain tied around his neck. It is not what he wants to do, but what he has to do. If you have to find a reason for everything, it will look very frustrating.

The title of the book should be the talent name of the protagonist, and his occupation is archer. The descriptions are okay, but the transitions are really stiff, like separate small copies. The progress is very slow, and not many people are watching it. I feel that the author will not live to finish it. The first main goal at the beginning was to enter the Academy, but it turned out that it was already on the shelves and I hadn't even entered the capital yet. The author said that he wanted to tell the story from the perspective of the protagonist, but the protagonist didn't know anything, so he had to rely on others to tell the protagonist, and the readers would know. What does it feel like? I don't know, what is that? Have no idea. Those who were impatient ran away.

It looked okay from the beginning, but in the exam, the intelligence was forced to feed the si. The character in the front was low-key and close-minded when killing villagers. Let's look at the character design in the exam. Does it correspond to the previous one?