The World of Beauty Drama Begins with the Surrender of Jason

I quite like reading this kind of thing, but there aren't many that are well written.

The writing is too boring and cliche, and it also disgusts the combat effectiveness. When it is possible to upgrade, it is said that the protagonist has just been upgraded, which is a bit uncertain. It needs to leave some trump cards. Does the author want to write that the protagonist can grasp the breakthrough before the battle?

No one posted a picture in the comment area? Let me liven up the atmosphere

Complaints are not like this. The protagonist is reborn as a time traveler in 2023. Which novel will be written like this? Now, which novel will start with the protagonist complaining about time travel and rebirth without super talent, bloodline or extraordinary status and wealth. This author probably can't keep up with the current Internet writing routines that have been more than 5 years old. A novel also starts with the protagonist complaining that he has no talent, no money, no status, and ended up early. This is the most disgusting thing.

When I saw Xiu Xian, I didn't want to come in. It felt too inconsistent.

Writing about exorcism in the American West has a hint of classical immortality, and the taste is really different.

Originally, the author, a novice, didn't want to say it, but he really didn't want to say it. As an old reader, he shouldn't make such a mistake. The first big poisonous point is that the protagonist is always doing business at a loss. Although there is the benefit of the causal system, if there is no teacher left behind, the boss has died countless times, and the federation will lose some bones. It's better to join the federation than to do this. Investigators all know that wages are wages and they want to get rich for extra money. If they don't expect the protagonist to make a fortune, they can't go back and just blow up the treasure left by the master to complete the task for the federation. It's really a holy mother who is alive. I'm a poor guy, working as a bus and driving a second-hand pickup truck. The second point is about rhythm control. Behind the return mission is either the old demon or the evil god. How come the protagonist has encountered so many of them? ? The passive triggering plot is really annoying. Can there be a few ordinary characters in the middle to accumulate or over-the-top chapters? Don't say a few days and leave the reader with the feeling that the protagonist is risking his life every moment, all ups and downs. Thirdly, the American idioms are oriental-style dialogues, and the interaction with the female characters is full of fantasy like a master dragon king. The anime-like character of the female characters is really worthy of the old two-dimensional, stinky, and really degrading.

I want to say a few words: Those so-called editors earn a few thousand yuan a month, and their literary level is at the level of ordinary high school students. If they can delay a writer, they will delay a writer. I say this because the plot rhythm and title of your book look like a piece of writing written by a crappy small studio. If you hadn't just clicked on Daily Detox and read it, you wouldn't have clicked on it just by looking at the title. After finishing my complaint, I would like to give you a suggestion that I'm not sure is appropriate: change the title of the book. Don't pretend that your relationship with Jason is just a 50-cent relationship with him. Don't make it look like he had a life-long friendship. Then, don't stress, just write how to develop the plot, write a story instead of a low-quality web game upgrade article. Collect it first, and throw in the recommendation votes. See how you write in the future to decide whether to subscribe.

Accepting Jason as a younger brother also depends on Russell. Your painting style of cultivating immortals is different, right? Anyone who has not been cultivating immortals for hundreds or thousands of years is totally incompatible with these foreign devils and the like.

I hope it won't be like that book, about my days as a Taoist priest in Hollywood. He also licks foreign girls, teaches Taoism, and gives half of his lifespan to foreign girls. Isn't this kind of subject just about killing Chinese Taoism? The result is good, and it in turn enhances the heritage of other countries. If you want to write about girls, why don't you be a Chinese? I can understand what you mean. The most annoying thing is to hand over Chinese things to foreigners.

In the world of American comics, if you write Chinese names, you might as well write about cultivating immortals, just like you would write Ye Fan during the Roman period.

I thought it was a US variety show and an American horror show, but it turned out that the scene of Maoshan fighting zombies was changed into a different background, and it was better than the main character.

Who is Jason afraid of the most? Answer: Brother Russell.

Very puzzled! Too many time travels to the United States, especially American historical novels, insist on giving the protagonist a yellow-skinned Chinese, and insist on calling him a Chinese name. It feels very inconsistent and awkward, just like when foreigners traveled to ancient times in our country and insisted on white or dark skin, and insisted on being called by foreign names. Please taste it carefully. Is this because of the unspoken rules of writing this type of online article? I wonder if other readers are like this too? Or am I the only one who finds it inconsistent?

(Run quickly, it's poisonous. Be content with yourself and have the courage to output.) Meizong is best to match the game. Cultivation is too unclear. The world view, combat power, characters, time, etc. Are all very vague.

I have always been puzzled. This book is well written in terms of supporting characters, plot and extraordinary structure. Why is it so bad? But I have read sixty chapters and found that this is not a fantasy novel, but a political struggle novel. There are dozens of chapters. I haven't written much about conquering demons and demons, but I have written about political struggles

Whether it's Chinese or foreign, America is not under the control of Chinese gods. If your spells don't work, you might as well use cultivation methods, or high-level martial arts.

The theme of the American variety show is actually quite good, but the main character's body is a cultivator, which is quite inconsistent. I really recommend that you choose a mystery side, a magic side, a witchcraft side, or a technology and mystery side to exorcise demons. They are both very good. I flipped through the Huang Ting Jing and saw something, and immediately lost the desire to read it.

I feel that the system of cultivating immortals is quite weird, so awkward.

Make a picture of the male protagonist and look at it for fun. I found the picture online

I just want to write more stories about female protagonists. The protagonist always feels like he is being pushed away. There are no other plots and it feels tasteless. I have two girls and I am busy with business every day just like a monk. Isn't this a monk story? It's so happy and relaxing at the beginning. I just want to be happy when I read the novel.

When I work in exorcism in the United States, I can't stand it when I see the main character trying to make a fortune in silence. If you keep a low profile, it means you are weak and incompetent. People will step on you. Even if you don't have a good reputation, you will be commissioned to perform exorcism

The first one says: Stay away from ignorance, let the past go. It is an old dream, there is no need to cry. There is also my mark in the book of Taoism. Dao You said: Returning to the original state will also last long, and seek the best in yourself. The three flowers gather together at the top today, and it is difficult to leave a trace in the new year. The ancient Yin Dynasty has not changed, and the Tianhe River is boundless. Edict!

It's hard to read the first dozen chapters. It's not fun at all. The plot is boring. The more common poisonous points are missing. There are very few novels written by novices that are so bad.

I've read dozens of chapters, and the protagonist's character is a bit like the Virgin Mary, a little forced to fit in with other movies! The combat power is vague and the upgrade is so slow! In Captain Jia's words, time traveled in vain! 🙂

Just pulled 2 major poison points, Soul Penetrating ➕ Holy Mother. Laughing to death

The progress is too slow😅

If you need writing style but no style, if you need features but no features, will you spend money to get on the list?

The work "The Elder Scrolls: The Witch's Strategy Guide" visited and used the treasure to promote it. The author's writing is very good, it has been added to favorites and likes 👍.

The new drama "Tea Cup" seems to be okay